https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9 Made with no regrets, whatsoever en-us 2018-02-06 03:44:01 UTC 2024-11-28 19:01:25 UTC hello@padlet.com malloryt2 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228429673 From yesterday's activity, think of 2-3 literary/poetic devices that were used in either extract]]> 2018-02-06 03:45:21 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228429673 malloryt2 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228429826 List 2-3 examples from your drafting process, where your character exhibits love/marriage/romance.]]> 2018-02-06 03:46:35 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228429826 malloryt2 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228430171

Using peer feedback on your letter, describe how you will change it to fit your character or the theme of love.]]> 2018-02-06 03:48:43 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228430171 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458004 In yesterdays lesson, i found rhyme to be a very prominent theme especially in the song. I also found some aliteration in my piece when Sir Toby states "Though sweet sound o strain".]]> 2018-02-06 07:33:21 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458004 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458016 For example, my group was analyzing Lionel Richie's song: Hello. In the song, there were a few lines which included rhyme such as "I long to see the sunlight in your hair
And tell you time and time again
How much I care". For the extract from Twelfth Night, the rhyme is "Away before me to sweet beds of flowers:
Love - thoughts lie right when canopied with bowers". This line is also counted as a metaphor as the bed of flowers could represent Olivia being different, fresh and beautiful.
Another literary device is repetition. The phrase "I love you." was used multiple times throughout the song. ]]> 2018-02-06 07:33:23 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458016 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458019 On the extract, Shakespeare used repetition, rhyme, and symbolism.

'Liver brain and heart'
'Bed of flowers'
'Sweet bed of flowers, love thoughts lie rich when canopied with bowers]]> 2018-02-06 07:33:24 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458019 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458088 Repetition:
I can see it in your eyes, I can see it in your smile
Rhyme:
I long to see the sunlight in your hair, I tell you  time and time again, How much I care]]> 2018-02-06 07:33:37 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458088 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458089 My group's song was Mirrors by Justin Timberlake and our other extract was from the Shakespearean play, 12th night.
Simile : (Mirrors - Song) 'Cause your shine is somethin' like a mirror.
Rhyme : (Viola - Twelfth night) Yet a barful strife!, Whoe'er I woo myself would be his wife.
Rhyme : (Mirrors - Song) Yesterday is history, Tomorrow's a mystery 
Figures of Repetition at the end of the sentence: (Mirrors - Song) 

]]> 2018-02-06 07:33:37 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458089 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458108 The few literary devices used in Shakespeare include metaphors, rhyming, and some higher order vocabulary to depict Orsino's passion for Olivia. Similes were also used to compare the womanly features of Viola to Diana, the god of the moon and love.
Mirror, by Justin Timberlake is based on a huge metaphor which is that his love is a mirror, in the meaning that his love reflects his own personality, and that he isn't complete without her. Symbolism is also evident due to the same reason. ]]> 2018-02-06 07:33:39 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458108 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458164 The literary devices used in Shakespeare are symbolism, tone, setting, genre, writing style, repetition, and rhyme.

I can see it in your eyes (repetition)]]> 2018-02-06 07:33:55 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458164 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458270 Firstly, in Mirror by Justin Timberlake, the whole song is a metaphor. He is is describing his love as a mirror, saying that she reflects him.
In the dialogue, Duke Orsino uses a simile to compare Viola's lips to a goddess.
Lastly, he uses imagery when describing Viola's feminine features.]]> 2018-02-06 07:34:22 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458270 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458287 The different literary devices that were in the verse of Shakespeare's  play 'Twelfth Night" were rhyme, repetition and symbolism.]]> 2018-02-06 07:34:27 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458287 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458445 The entire song 'Mirrors' was basically a giant metaphor for Justin Timberlake meeting a girl that was just like him and there were a lot of references to the mirror metaphor within the lyrics, apart from the obvious references in the chorus of the song.

Another literary device that was used a lot was similes, as both Shakespeare and Timberlake used similes to compare the attributes of their lovers either to the attributes of objects or other people. 

Finally there was repetition in the Justin Timberlake song at the end where he repeated the same line over 10 times in order to really get the point across. ]]> 2018-02-06 07:35:06 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458445 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458718 Three literary devices in my group's two extracts were
1)The entirety of the modern song, 'Mirrors' by Justin Timberlake was a huge metaphor for the fact that his love was exactly like him and how he may actually be looking for somebody exactly like him, which would make him quite selfish. 
2) 'Cause your shine is something like a mirror' is a simile.
3) There is a lot of alliteration in the song as the writer. ]]> 2018-02-06 07:36:19 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458718 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458812 Reflecting from yesterdays lesson, the poem that we were given included several examples of poetic devices. One example being a metaphor is ' so full of shapes is fancy, that it alone is high fantastical. This example describes love as fantasy and it's a wonderful feeling as it says in the quote 'high fantastical'.

Another example being a Rhyme ' Enough no more''. 'Tis not so sweet as it was before'. This example explains how love was so easy before and now it's complicate and full of problems.

]]> 2018-02-06 07:36:44 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228458812 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228459047 Looking back at yesterdays lesson the literary devices which can be found include Rhyme:Every move you make
Every vow you break
Every smile you fake
Every claim you stake
and Metaphor: SO full of shapes is fancy, that it alone is high fantastical.]]> 2018-02-06 07:37:47 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228459047 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228459181 Simile: Cause your shine is something like a mirror
Repetition
Keep your eyes on me
Baby, keep your eyes on me

]]> 2018-02-06 07:38:23 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228459181 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228459401 My character is Maria, and she shows love with her protective and selfless personality while defending Olivia from the grasp of inadequate men, and how she always looks into Olivia's best interest regardless of the temptation. She is also reliable and loyal, which shows her love and trustworthiness to Olivia. Marriage and romance aren't things she is interested in, however talks a lot about it during her encounters with Sir Toby and Sir Andrew. ]]> 2018-02-06 07:39:07 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228459401 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228459812 From the activity we did yesterday, you could say that the entire song: Mirror is a metaphor as it is describing his lover as the other side of him.]]> 2018-02-06 07:40:41 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228459812 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228459841 'cause your shine is somethin' like a mirror (simile)


]]> 2018-02-06 07:40:49 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228459841 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228459970 After analysing the extracts, I have found three literary/poetic devices/techniques. Below listed are the techniques: Simile, Metaphor and Irony/Dramatic technique.
1. Metaphor (Found in twelth night): "Diana's lip is not more smooth and rubious". In the quote above, the Duke Orsino is metaphorically referring to Viola-Cesario's feminine features explaining how it refers to the moon goddess Diana.
2. Metaphor 2 (Found in both extracts but more clearly shown in the song lyrics). The two men blinded by love both follow the idea of being mirrors of each other. They both believe that they have found the perfect girl, a reflection of themselves. This can be shown in this quote: "I'm looking' right at the other half of me. The vacancy that sat in my heart.". Justin Timberlake refers to how his girl is like the reflection of him.
3. Irony/dramatic technique
The 'great' Duke Orsino is deeply in love with Olivia despite not knowing her or meeting her at all. He can't live without her and yet in the following quote he seems to be better off by himself..."for I myself am best when least in company". What dramatic technique and irony!]]> 2018-02-06 07:41:21 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228459970 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228498538 My character is Viola/ Cesario as she loves the Duke of Illyria. Viola doesn't really show her love for the duke, however tries to express herself as much in this poem.
The first example would be how Viola, in the beginning of the poem, states how she loves the Duke of Illyria and how he loves another (who is olivia). Viola attempts in using several metaphors and repetitions such as "mine soul pops out" and "Oh how I love thee, Oh how thou love another," just to express her love for the Duke of Illyria. The poem also states how she is thirsty for his love and wants it all to herself but then she soon realizes her selfish temptation was. However in the poem Viola changes the story to make it so that Viola and The duke don't fall involve, instead Olivia and the Duke get happily married and Viola and her twin brother (sebastian) never make the mistake of loosing each other again.]]> 2018-02-06 09:58:40 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228498538 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228685785 My character is the Duke of Illyria, Orsino, and he is shown to be in madly in love with Olivia despite barely knowing the countess. He is dedicated to proving his love for her and sends out Viola to indirectly confess his love to Olivia. He is interested in marriage and has romantic feelings for Olivia, and he wont take no for an answer.]]> 2018-02-06 16:14:26 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228685785 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228717720 My character us the Duke Orsino. He expresses his love for a very brief letter (as far as Draft 1 goes) as well as in a not so respectful manner. Being so madly in love with Olivia he has disregard for her mournings. In the following quote it is clearly that although he respects Olivia's mourning he would rather focus on the topic of love and being in love with Olivia... "I respect thy ways of mourning ov'r thy brother but wherefore beest a nun? wherefore wear a veil". Orsino in my letter hates the fact that she wears a veil and is a nun. He wishes greatly that Olivia would open up and he could see her out on the streets more.
In the second example, Orsino expresses his love, describing Olivia..."Thy voice is that of a nightingale's and thy presence taketh other women vanish! Thee art the one, the love of mine life.". He seems to be complimenting and flirting with Olivia through the letter showing a clear example of both love and romance. This can also be shown in the third example which actually comes first in the letter.."Thy quite quaint eyes, that fine frame...I has't fallen in love with thee". Orsino starts the letter quite concisely immediately expressing his feelings of love for Olivia as though he can't hold it in. In relation to our starter activity, Let It Go would be a great match here as he is trying to open up his feelings to Olivia despite not knowing her as well.]]> 2018-02-06 16:58:36 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228717720 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228881914 My character is Viola, and she is writing a letter to Orsino about her love for him. She uses several metaphors and similes in her letter, in order to reinforce the feelings mentioned in the letter. 
In my draft Viola calls Orsino "the eye of a raging storm" in reference to his passionate, confident nature. She also calls him "tender and loving" and commends him on being able to "express [his] feelings without shame".  ]]> 2018-02-06 22:02:11 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/228881914 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229010698 My character is Orsino. He is writing love rap song for his beloved and darling Olivia who does not want to come near him. He uses metaphors such as 'your the apple of my eye' which describes the connection and passion that he has for Olivia. Furthermore he uses repetition in the chorus, he is trying the portray his emotions through a love rap.]]> 2018-02-07 09:54:12 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229010698 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229017445 In the song and extract they both used a lot of repetition, rhymes and words about love to express there feelings]]> 2018-02-07 10:13:37 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229017445 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229018302 My character Orsino exhibits love by saying I will do anything to make you happy and Please accept my love for you.]]> 2018-02-07 10:15:52 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229018302 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229019045 Based on my peer feedback, I need to add more creativity when it comes to the final draft and I also need to add more literary devices. Although I did, mentioning metaphors, I could have also written other forms of literary devices. Apart from that to fit my character into the theme of love I need to implement his traits such as ignorance, selfishness, etc. ]]> 2018-02-07 10:17:55 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229019045 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229020103 My character is Orsino and he express his loving by using rhymes such as "my love is truly pure 
It is like an allure" and he uses repetition such as "never stop
Never stop loving you".]]> 2018-02-07 10:21:01 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229020103 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229020976 Based on my peer feedback, I should try and expand my vocabulary and also use more shakespearean to express my feelings of love. I should also relate my poem to the global context to make it more pleasant for reading.]]> 2018-02-07 10:23:21 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229020976 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229021015 My character is Orsino expressing his love for Olivia. He does this by complementing her and her traits.]]> 2018-02-07 10:23:32 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229021015 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229021328 Based on my peer feedback I will have to work on making my letter in letter format. I also need to add more literary devices. I also have to add more unique connections to the character who gets the letter. ]]> 2018-02-07 10:24:32 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229021328 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229021941 Based on the peer feedback that I received I need to use more shakespearean language to make it look like it was done back then and I also need to use more literary devices to help make my text more descriptive.]]> 2018-02-07 10:26:21 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229021941 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229023527 Being given the feedback from my peer, I know my rap song is a very lovely way of expressing the love of Orsino for Olivia, It has lots of repetition, spelling and the syntax is good. For further improvement I need to use Shakespearean language to enhance my rap song for the period of the Elizabethan era. ]]> 2018-02-07 10:28:37 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229023527 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229024305 My character will be Maria. In the letter, I will be explaining to Duke Orsino about Olivia's condition and asking him to stop courting her. I will describe her sorrow with detail.]]> 2018-02-07 10:30:59 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229024305 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229024399 Based on the feedback given to me by Lara, I plan on improving my piece by adding more creative elements and literary devices to add drama and interest to the letter. I peer assessed Lara's and by reading it I also realized that there was a lot of room for improvement in that area of my work, not just in this particular task but in the majority of my writing. ]]> 2018-02-07 10:31:14 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229024399 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229024421 My feedback was mostly based on the letter feedback so my next steps would be to basically kept ensure my work is kept more realistic.
My own personal preference would be to add more literary devices such as metaphor to my work.

]]> 2018-02-07 10:31:18 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229024421 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229025863 My feedback was mostly positive, I just need to follow letter structure more closely, and more reference to the global context. ]]> 2018-02-07 10:35:53 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229025863 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229026359 I will add some more literary devices in order to improve criterion C. I should also use paragraphs.]]> 2018-02-07 10:37:33 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229026359 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229031786 My character is Orsino, he exhibits love throughout the entirety of the letter, but in particular when he describes Lady Olivia's features and how they 'melt his soul'. Another example is when he describes their future, and how he dreams of the 'dulcet children' she will create for him. Lastly, Orsino tells Olivia in his letter that he will wait an eternity for her if he has to, but she will eventually be his. ]]> 2018-02-07 10:54:44 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229031786 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229033031 The peer who assessed my work suggested that I should use more literary devices to improve and further extend my letter. Other than that, the feedback given was very positive. ]]> 2018-02-07 10:59:08 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229033031 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229534935 The song that we had was by Lionel Riche "hello" was a similarity for how the Duke of Illyria, Orsino, loves Olivia even though he has not had a proper conversation with her.

The song used repetition :
"I can see it in your eyes, I can see it in your smile"
another example for repetition:
"'Cause I wonder where you are, And I wonder what you do"

The song also used rhyme:
"Or is someone loving you? Tell me how to win your heart for I haven't got a clue"

And it used metaphor:
"Sometimes I feel my heart will overflow, Hello!"]]> 2018-02-08 13:04:30 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229534935 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229541084 Based on my peer feedback, they suggested that I should have four lines and then I need to make sure to leave a space, so it looks more like a poem. They also mentioned to make sure that I add more literary devices to my draft as well as make sure that the theme "love" is very visible in the poem. On the other hand she mentioned that my poem sounds good and a lot of good Elizabethan and Shakespearian language was used in it.]]> 2018-02-08 13:20:12 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/229541084 https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/1127568997 oilo;è_ kuoui_tp_çuçkkkokkkjyè-((-"''((-y-uèo_ooukçlçlçè_]]> 2021-01-26 16:24:11 UTC https://padlet.com/malloryt2/year9/wish/1127568997