Denali's Personal Narrative by Kevin Van Dyke https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2 What was your favorite part of the story? en-us 2014-04-16 01:52:21 UTC 2014-04-16 01:54:00 UTC hello@padlet.com http://d262le4z25sx36.cloudfront.net/portraits/monkey.jpg Brooke Baarda  https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2/wish/26119095 The story was great, good job Denali! My favorite part is when you described every thing!

]]> 2014-04-16 14:01:49 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2/wish/26119095 Dylann Huyser https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2/wish/26395939 Denali-

Your story was amazing! I feel like I just took a trip to the falls myself. The incredible detail you used and the fact you added your feelings about the falls was great! The quick intro at the beginning was just enough to hook the reader. I will look forward to more of your writing!

- Dylann

]]> 2014-04-22 14:16:04 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2/wish/26395939 Korinne Jansen https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2/wish/26488164 I loved your story ! I liked how you put so much detail in your story and that you set a seen so I felt I went there to. But my favorite part was when you said, I caught one last glimpse of Porcupine Falls . I think you did wonderful denali!

]]> 2014-04-23 14:05:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2/wish/26488164 Jaden Brand  https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2/wish/26578341 Denali I loved your story a lot and I don't know if I'll be able to pick just one part but I will try. I think my favorite part of your story was the last part of your story. Especially when you said you caught that last glimpse and when you said porcupine falls gave you a new look of nature and being with your family made it even better. I definitely think that you have a very good skill for writing. I absolutely love your writing.

]]> 2014-04-24 13:48:04 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2/wish/26578341 Maddie Crocker https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2/wish/26578456 Denali-

My favorite part of your story is when you got a new glimpse of nature and you thought it was better with your family! I thought you did a very good job on your story! I also really liked your story because it made me feel like I was actually there! I look forword to more of your writing!

]]> 2014-04-24 13:49:02 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2/wish/26578456 https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2/wish/26580079 2014-04-24 14:01:45 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2/wish/26580079 https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2/wish/26669371 2014-04-25 13:49:15 UTC https://padlet.com/vandyke/DenaliC2/wish/26669371