https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9 Made with the strength to succeed en-us 2017-05-19 13:31:05 UTC 2026-03-08 23:56:05 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423346 "I wish I had more time" made the poem even more intriguing
the subject is something everyone thinks of and that makes it relatable and powerful ]]> 2017-05-23 15:31:33 UTC https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423346 https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423454 I love the movements you made

]]> 2017-05-23 15:31:54 UTC https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423454 mcneal_alison97 https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423457 Good body movement
Good repetition
Good use of imagery]]> 2017-05-23 15:31:55 UTC https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423457 mccart_kierna27 https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423627 I like the repetition of "i wish i had more time" and how you say it is really flowy and sounds good, i like the metaphors, the way yo ended with a question was powerful]]> 2017-05-23 15:32:32 UTC https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423627 https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423654 Very good repetition 
Very relatable 
Very well written ]]> 2017-05-23 15:32:37 UTC https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423654 spielm_delane16 https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423696 Very contemplative]]> 2017-05-23 15:32:44 UTC https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423696 quade_chase31 https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423746 Great starting line
Flows very well
Very relatable]]> 2017-05-23 15:32:55 UTC https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423746 maisie_berger22 https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423894 I liked your Imagery and how you explained why you wish you had more time it made it interesting to follow]]> 2017-05-23 15:33:12 UTC https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173423894 https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173424276 Good story and imagery ]]> 2017-05-23 15:34:27 UTC https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173424276 https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173424286 The repetition was great and the examples were amazing ]]> 2017-05-23 15:34:30 UTC https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173424286 spielm_delane16 https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173424293 Very good flow, well written and executed well]]> 2017-05-23 15:34:31 UTC https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173424293 recksi_matthe16 https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173424358 I liked how you made us think about the world and what we're doing]]> 2017-05-23 15:34:40 UTC https://padlet.com/thoren_emily04/2qfiz2idd8y9/wish/173424358