(2A) Set Your Daily Writing Goal by Dario Sulzman https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp After you've examined your draft, revision plan, and the Final Draft checklist, make a post with your name and a meaningful writing goal for yourself to complete this class period. Remember to be specific and measurable. en-us 2024-11-25 12:48:35 UTC 2025-08-18 04:26:33 UTC hello@padlet.com ANASTASIA 2139586 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233117929 i need to rewrite my intro paragraph and fix up the last 2 body paragraphs.


i plan to at least rewrite my intro paragraph today and figure out what i plan to fix/write to make the last 2 body paragraphs better.


UPDATE: I rewrote my intro paragraph and added my summary paragraph. Now I'm working on rewriting my body paragraphs and switching out the quotes from the old ones to my new ones.

]]> 2024-11-25 14:15:03 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233117929 David Rivetta https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233120875 continue to work on going more into depth on my rhetorical analysis and doing some proof reading. I think i need to rewrite one of my explanation in one of my body paragraphs.

]]> 2024-11-25 14:16:51 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233120875 Inigo Gonzales https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233121107 I have to condense my summary, and rewrite my rhetorical analysis paragraphs.


Today, I will be rewriting as much of my rhetorical analysis as I can, at least 1-2 paragraphs. Being more specific about my evidence and portraying it in a clear way.

]]> 2024-11-25 14:16:59 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233121107 Jaylee Martinez https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233124549

  • condense summary paragraph

    • add quotes to body paragraphs


      1. Today I plan on making my summary paragraph shorter


    ]]>     2024-11-25 14:18:56 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233124549     Brenda Quintanilla https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233125266 I need to rewrite my third and second paragraph and expand more on my first paragraph. But today im work on expanding more on my first. when it comes to the quote.

    ]]>     2024-11-25 14:19:22 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233125266     Keylly Vinan https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233125432 I need to rewrite my intro paragraph and i need to fix my body paragraphs. I plan on fixing my intro paragraph and hopefully fixing at least one of my body paragraphs.

    ]]>     2024-11-25 14:19:28 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233125432     Charly https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233130185 I need to integrate more quotes into my body paragraphs and make clearer what Rhetorical Strategies I'm using.


    My goal for today is to make clear what rhetorical strategy i'm using and integrate at least one quote into two body paragraphs.

    ]]>     2024-11-25 14:22:12 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233130185     Kennedy https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233130964 I have to rewrite my summary and finish reviseing my Rhetorical & Critical Analysis

    ]]>     2024-11-25 14:22:38 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233130964     Julian https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233132584 Make my intro more performative

    Condense part of my summary of text paragraph

    integrate the quotes


    I made my intro more performative and elaborated where I needed to

    Condensed and rewritten part of my summary of text paragraph

    Elaborated in my intro to rhetorical analysis paragraph, and 1st rhetorical analysis paragraph

    Fixed some grammar problems

    Integrated quotes into my 1st and 2nd rhetorical analysis paragraphs

    ]]>     2024-11-25 14:23:35 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233132584     Bella Gomez-Stafford 1085785 https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233135747 First Half:

    First, I have to rewrite my third Rhetorical technique paragraph. Second, I would have to add more additional details into all my paragraphs.


    Second Half:

    I finished rewriting my third paragraph with explain Juxtaposition and still working on adding more examples. I also made additional details throughout my essay and will continue doing so.

    ]]>     2024-11-25 14:25:35 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233135747     Angelique R https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233140241 I need to rewrite my summary and focus on making my body paragraphs.

    Today I will be focusing on rewriting my summary and writing my paragraphs.

    In class today I fixed up my summary by focusing more on the main ideas and deleting more specific details that I may be able to add later on. I was also looking for more quotes to add in my paragraphs.

    ]]>     2024-11-25 14:28:05 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233140241     Lia A https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233151848 I need to create a title that appropriately fits my essay and finalize my edits.


    Today, I will create a fitting title and rewrite/revise some of my paragraphs (2-3).

    ]]>     2024-11-25 14:34:39 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233151848     Zulaikha https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233241330 My goals for today were to have a discussion with Dr. Sulzman and then revise and make edits to my drafts based on the feedback I receive. An thats exactly what I did, right now Im focusing more on finding good examples for each body paragraph before I incorporate into my essay.

    ]]>     2024-11-25 15:28:35 UTC https://padlet.com/newhavenpublicschools/2p76mnuedx64afzp/wish/3233241330