https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a Celebration en-us 2020-10-22 17:37:55 UTC 2021-09-15 16:16:16 UTC hello@padlet.com macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854376280 2020-10-22 22:05:00 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854376280 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854377677 2020-10-22 22:05:47 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854377677 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854381860 2020-10-22 22:06:32 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854381860 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854383761 2020-10-22 22:07:35 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854383761 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854389739 2020-10-22 22:11:37 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854389739 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854390340 2020-10-22 22:12:03 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854390340 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854392584 2020-10-22 22:13:43 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854392584 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854393635 2020-10-22 22:14:25 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854393635 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854394357 2020-10-22 22:14:53 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854394357 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854395306 2020-10-22 22:15:32 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854395306 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854396485 2020-10-22 22:16:20 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854396485 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854397300 2020-10-22 22:16:54 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854397300 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854399800 2020-10-22 22:18:24 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854399800 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854403993 2020-10-22 22:21:18 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854403993 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854407684 2020-10-22 22:23:44 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854407684 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854408219 2020-10-22 22:24:06 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854408219 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854410017 2020-10-22 22:25:18 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854410017 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854411736 2020-10-22 22:26:32 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854411736 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854413983 2020-10-22 22:28:07 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854413983 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854415167 2020-10-22 22:28:58 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/854415167 petsay https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861532403 Erin, I loved your story! I love how you used a lot of figurative language! 🦷]]> 2020-10-26 13:12:19 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861532403 adhaber https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861544754 You did such good detail ]]> 2020-10-26 13:15:07 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861544754 amwang3 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861547325 Great so much detail]]> 2020-10-26 13:15:42 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861547325 petsay https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861548903 Saige, I love your story! I like how you added a lot of detail!🐴]]> 2020-10-26 13:16:04 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861548903 rykuperman https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861549014 I love the detail of the story you wrote. You moved through each minute so carefully and really made me picture what’s going on. I saw you playing soccer with nick even though I wasn’t there. Great job overall. Maybe next time you could show not tell a little more.


]]> 2020-10-26 13:16:06 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861549014 petsay https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861561412 I like how you showed what you are doing, 👻]]> 2020-10-26 13:18:54 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861561412 amraimondi https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861563661 Penny, I loved your story! I loved they end when you said it was your first lessen but not your last]]> 2020-10-26 13:19:26 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861563661 rykuperman https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861566602 That was one of the BEST stories I’ve ever read. Specifically the way you described every little Detail.


Great job Jake]]> 2020-10-26 13:20:07 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861566602 jkfishman https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861569181 I like your details that must have taken a long time]]> 2020-10-26 13:20:44 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861569181 amwang3 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861571197 I liked when you said I slept like a little bear]]> 2020-10-26 13:21:09 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861571197 emcrisalli13 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861572240 That was so good a loved how you said I felt like a Seagull  ]]> 2020-10-26 13:21:24 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861572240 petsay https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861576317 Amelia I love how you added how you were so exited! Your story is 👍 ]]> 2020-10-26 13:22:20 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861576317 setunstall https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861581092 Great show not tell Ryan.]]> 2020-10-26 13:23:27 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861581092 amwang3 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861583462 I like it ]]> 2020-10-26 13:24:02 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861583462 evmancuso https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861584768 I like that you put bold letters and I like how you hade so much detail.]]> 2020-10-26 13:24:19 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861584768 amwang3 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861586042 👍🏻]]> 2020-10-26 13:24:36 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861586042 amwang3 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861587082 👍🏻]]> 2020-10-26 13:24:47 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861587082 empatricksasaki https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861588464 I like how you added dialogue and detail I could really picture you breaking your leg 👻✨]]> 2020-10-26 13:25:06 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861588464 eloh4 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861588565 I love how you put in so much detail! And you really added in lots of dialogue!]]> 2020-10-26 13:25:07 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861588565 petsay https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861589715 Addi, I like how you said your throat was so dry. ❄️]]> 2020-10-26 13:25:23 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861589715 amwang3 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861589760 Great good dialogue ]]> 2020-10-26 13:25:23 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861589760 amwang3 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861592819 Wow very good I like it lot of details ]]> 2020-10-26 13:26:01 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861592819 amraimondi https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861594444 I loved it, maybe you should add a tiny bit to describe where and why u were at the hotel. It was a great story.]]> 2020-10-26 13:26:21 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861594444 adhaber https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861594577 I love your story you added so much detail about the story ]]> 2020-10-26 13:26:23 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861594577 mishapiro https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861595937 Leo,your story was amazing! Your story had great detail and figurative language ]]> 2020-10-26 13:26:41 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861595937 setunstall https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861597643 Great detail Cris.]]> 2020-10-26 13:27:06 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861597643 lezank https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861599813 I liked the detail]]> 2020-10-26 13:27:34 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861599813 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861601969 2020-10-26 13:28:05 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861601969 empatricksasaki https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861602496 I like the detail, Cece! ⭐️]]> 2020-10-26 13:28:12 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861602496 petsay https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861602978 Emilia, I love how you added that big BOOM and CRASH! 🏃‍♀️]]> 2020-10-26 13:28:19 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861602978 yosinger https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861603358 So many details!]]> 2020-10-26 13:28:25 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861603358 eloh4 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861605226 I love how you added so much action!]]> 2020-10-26 13:28:51 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861605226 elpaul https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861608817 Great detail ]]> 2020-10-26 13:29:42 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861608817 empatricksasaki https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861615163 I like how you added figurative language! 👻 I could really picture the tooth fairy 🧚‍♀️!💫😆]]> 2020-10-26 13:31:11 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861615163 elpaul https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861620783 Good job]]> 2020-10-26 13:32:28 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861620783 lucarrillo1 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861620989 I like your figurative language. ‘over the moon’]]> 2020-10-26 13:32:31 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861620989 petsay https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861623270 I love how you said you got ready in a flash 👙]]> 2020-10-26 13:33:02 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861623270 jemaisel https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861626427 Good job wit the details!]]> 2020-10-26 13:33:43 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861626427 petsay https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861628282 You have a lot of details, yonaton!]]> 2020-10-26 13:34:08 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861628282 yosinger https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861633628 So many details Lucas!]]> 2020-10-26 13:35:17 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861633628 macohen9 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861637221 2020-10-26 13:36:02 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861637221 jemaisel https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861637455 I like how you explained it good]]> 2020-10-26 13:36:05 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861637455 etliebman https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861638408 Good job with the details ]]> 2020-10-26 13:36:17 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861638408 lucarrillo1 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861641699 I like how you put such good details ]]> 2020-10-26 13:36:58 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861641699 emcrisalli13 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861642029 I liked the book I loved how you added a lot of details ]]> 2020-10-26 13:37:03 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861642029 emcrisalli13 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861652517 I liked how you explained the gloomy and stormy ]]> 2020-10-26 13:39:15 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861652517 etliebman https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861652554 Great]]> 2020-10-26 13:39:15 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861652554 mishapiro https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861659682 Nice details and figurative language ]]> 2020-10-26 13:40:41 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861659682 etliebman https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861663375 Good show not tell Sean]]> 2020-10-26 13:41:23 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861663375 sahammes https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861664533 I like that you started your story with a action.]]> 2020-10-26 13:41:38 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861664533 erlang1 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861670099 I like how you showed not tell.]]> 2020-10-26 13:42:46 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861670099 evmancuso https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861671532 I like how it was flashing lits like a hore move.]]> 2020-10-26 13:43:04 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861671532 mishapiro https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861675024 I liked your details ]]> 2020-10-26 13:43:50 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861675024 emcrisalli13 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861675242 I loved how you said you saw the CUTEST DUCK EVER!!!]]> 2020-10-26 13:43:53 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861675242 etliebman https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861676225 👍🏻]]> 2020-10-26 13:44:05 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861676225 emcrisalli13 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861683088 Really good detail]]> 2020-10-26 13:45:32 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861683088 cecanavan https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861686896 I like how in your story you told everyone how much you look up to your dad ]]> 2020-10-26 13:46:23 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861686896 etliebman https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861688470 You can add more detail who Charlie is. But pretty good storie]]> 2020-10-26 13:46:43 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861688470 emcrisalli13 https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861689963 I liked how you described the horse]]> 2020-10-26 13:47:04 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861689963 sahammes https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861690185 I love your story. I loved that you described the setting.]]> 2020-10-26 13:47:07 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861690185 evmancuso https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861694090 I like how you have detail ]]> 2020-10-26 13:47:57 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/861694090 chchalhoub https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/863155692 I like the details and I like how you described how you were riding the bike with Charlie ]]> 2020-10-26 18:41:49 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/863155692 chchalhoub https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/863178086 Thanks Ryan and Sean]]> 2020-10-26 18:46:54 UTC https://padlet.com/macohen9/2otl8vhmui4ked1a/wish/863178086