https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj PRAISE and POLISH en-us 2018-02-09 15:37:06 UTC 2025-12-25 03:33:24 UTC hello@padlet.com smithsky002 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090514 Praise// your voice projects and I can hear this great.
Polish// your story was great, and I can’t think of anything to fix]]> 2018-02-09 16:25:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090514 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090551 Praise: I like your answers to the initial questions because I thought it was considerate!
Polish: Next time, I think you should add more color to your pictures!
pruoy]]> 2018-02-09 16:25:39 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090551 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090584 Nice touching story
I would’ve liked to see the pictures ]]> 2018-02-09 16:25:43 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090584 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090597 Praise: Her book is well thought out and the mature content can be related to other people who’s parents have fell into alcohol.

Polish: She tends to look down at the floor and stutter a little bit when talking due to lack of confidence. ]]> 2018-02-09 16:25:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090597 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090598 Praise: has a nice style to the book (the pics with the writing)
Polish: none]]> 2018-02-09 16:25:46 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090598 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090644 Praise- good explanation and creativity

Polish- maybe have a little more voice projection, nothing major]]> 2018-02-09 16:25:53 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090644 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090720 Praise: Extremely confident voice, sounds good
Polish: None ]]> 2018-02-09 16:26:01 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090720 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090866 Praise: very nice
Polish: the story focus had confused me but your brought it back together at the end about good friends ]]> 2018-02-09 16:26:20 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090866 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090936 -I think if you would have added some color it would have been even better! 
-I like the story :) so sweet!]]> 2018-02-09 16:26:27 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090936 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090954 Confident, good story to talk about ]]> 2018-02-09 16:26:29 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090954 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090960 Praise: the confidence is shown with hand gestures
Polish: try to keep the book still so we can see the photos]]> 2018-02-09 16:26:30 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090960 villamar002 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090965 Praise: really cute story and pictures
Polish: maybe add more details ]]> 2018-02-09 16:26:31 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090965 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090994 She had a very good message and told the story well.]]> 2018-02-09 16:26:35 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090994 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090995 You did a good job of explaining what alchoho can do to a person. Maybe try adding some colors because it is a children’s book and children are attracted to colors and bright stuff. ]]> 2018-02-09 16:26:35 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230090995 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230091241 Praise: she is extremely confident 

Polish: maybe put it On slides so everyone can see ]]> 2018-02-09 16:27:04 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230091241 edekojos000 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230091519 She sounds really confident in her presentation. I wish the presentation was on Google Slides for organization. Overall, I liked the story a lot. Short and simple.]]> 2018-02-09 16:27:36 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230091519 nguyezoe000 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230091800 Praise: very confidence and loud which is good and I love the story line , love how upfront you are too
Polish: ]]> 2018-02-09 16:28:09 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230091800 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230091811 Great narration 
Could be ]]> 2018-02-09 16:28:11 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230091811 https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230092725 Praise- very good story
Polish- more pictures]]> 2018-02-09 16:29:57 UTC https://padlet.com/elsong/2np16qjk40fj/wish/230092725