(2A) Which Opening I Find Most Compelling and Why by Dario Sulzman

Cris

2024-04-22 13:17:02 UTC

Child Obesity because most kids only like eating fast food and that’s what they prefer

Yahir

2024-04-22 13:20:29 UTC

The intro 2 is the most compelling because the first sentence even though is short, it immediately calls the attention and also, it including a brief explanation of the cause of this topic.

nat

2024-04-22 13:21:15 UTC

I think the second one goes straight to the point and gives a reason why that problem is coming up

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dariosulzman — 2024-04-22 13:21:23 UTC

I like intro 1 the most. It instantly gets to the point and states fact and time referencing. It feels like this person knows what they are talking about right of the bat. 2 and 3 seem more opinionated or not as knowledgeable. Or like they aren't really sure how to start they're essay.

Marisela

2024-04-22 13:22:56 UTC

Intro one is the most compelling to me because it is descriptive. It talks about what standardized tests are for and then tells us why it's actually not effective.

Judith

2024-04-22 13:24:11 UTC

I like 1 because it’s more descriptive and has evidence. It give you all the valid points to be pursusive

Angel

2024-04-22 13:24:20 UTC

I think the second one is most compelling because it goes straight to the point and then gives a reason to the problem.

christy

2024-04-22 13:24:39 UTC

i think the first intro was more compelling not only does it get straight to the point but it argues about how standardized testing is like in the us

bri

2024-04-22 13:25:42 UTC

intro 2 grabbed my attention the most because it stated its claim and had good evidence , it seems like this person did their research about child obesity and used reliable valid resources.

Jonathan

2024-04-22 13:27:01 UTC

I find intro #2 to be most compelling because it gets straight to the point in the first sentence and after that it gives more insight to the introduced problem.

Matthew

2024-04-22 13:32:20 UTC

I found intro 1 to be most interesting because they were able to be more specific in terms of what they were writing about. They were also able to talk about a solution.

Delianys

2024-04-22 13:46:28 UTC

i think the most interesting intro was 1 because it gave a little of a intro to what the topic is about and goes in more detail and explanation and looks like they know what they are talking about.

cody

2024-04-22 16:46:27 UTC

i think it is intro 3 becase i think to understand obicity you need to know the history of when we staeted it

Lita

2024-06-09 21:43:37 UTC

Intro 1 because it’s more interesting and gets straight to the point very detailing