https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o Write the twist in at least 50 words. en-us 2017-04-10 07:32:20 UTC 2026-01-15 04:31:28 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Templeball.png chulaiking1 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165616773 Please write the ending!]]> 2017-04-10 07:38:05 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165616773 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817216 Rachel was so shocked and terrified.She sat in front of the door and couldn't move.Suddendly,the door was opened slowly.Then,a black cat walked to the door and said'come in.Grandma is waiting for you!'Rachel stood up and she walked in to the house frightening.'boom.'The door had closed.'hehehehehahahahaha!!!''arrrrrrrr!!!'After one week,a social workers brough some students to visit that house.When the students walked in,the social workers and the old lady smiled excitedly.The students found that there were two black cat in the house.They chatted,they played,thay died.]]> 2017-04-11 06:13:32 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817216 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817280 Rachel was so confusing as she don't know what is going on,so she try to knock the man's door to ask for detail.But there was also no response after few times knock.Suddenly a little girl next took a peek at Rachel from his door frame.

"Are you looking for a man living in this room?"asked the girl."Yes,he was there.But he seems disappear as no one in this house."Rachel replied.

"Ummmm...I don't know what's happening but something I am sure is there is no one living in this house as the housekeeper suicide in here five years ago.

The girl shutted he door after taking to Rachel,leaving Rachel alone in the dark and long corridor.]]> 2017-04-11 06:14:10 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817280 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817301 Rachel was shocked. She ran away from the dark and long corridor quickly. She took out a bible and used that to covered her head. She hope that Jesus can rescue her to get save. "Surprise! " Suddenly some voice comes out from Mary and Cherry. Actually, the true was the old lady , the man , Cherry and Marys' joke. They laughed at Rachel . Rachel was angry and ran away.]]> 2017-04-11 06:14:23 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817301 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817302 Rachel is doubtful and walks to the darkness. "Hi, I'm Rachel, the woman who promised to visit you last week." Rachel said. "Come, I'm waiting you," a voice that came from the end of corridor. Rachel follows the voice and found the old women is sitting on the chair. Rachel thought the old woman slept so she walks to her and try to wake her up. Rachel shake the old woman, her head fell down on the floor and roll next to Rachel's feat. "Oh my god!" Rachel feel shocked and died because of heart attack......]]> 2017-04-11 06:14:24 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817302 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817314 Rachel wonder what happened to the old lady before she died.She decided to figure out what secrets behind the dead about the old lady.Rachel decided to stay in front of the lady's house  and wait for her back.After a while,she saw the old lady was holding a big bag of food and she wanted to help.Rachel asked the old lady that could she helped.When the old lady turned back and looked at her,Rachel had found that her eyes turned totally black.'What just happened!?'asked Rachel'You are not the lady that I met before.'
 The old lady said'if you want to know what happened to me,I think you should go back to your home and find back a book named' The Thompsons',you are better to stay away from my house!'Rachel got back to home quickly and find out the book that the old woman said.When she got back to home,she found out that everything had changed,the table,the bookshelf or the sofa just removed like the old times.When she find out that her parents sat outside the sofa,she found out that their eyes were black too!She just screamed and ran back to her room and started to find out the book that the old woman told her.After a while,She found out a book named 'The Thompson' and she found out that the old lady's original name was Cathy Thompson.The old lady was the only girl in the whole book,and she just got a medicine that didn't suitable to her and she didn't realise then she died for a heart diseases ]]> 2017-04-11 06:14:35 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817314 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817345 Suddenly，a policeman crashed into the apartment and yelled “put your hands up and don't move.”At this moment,Rachel is shocking,she didn't know what it happen ."Miss Rachel ,please come to the police station with me.I have permission to pick you for help the case."
They arrived to the police station.A policeman looked at her and asked “A month before, where are you at 11:00pm?"Rachel was confused and also horrified because she was in the apartment with old lady,she knew that the policeman would not trust her.]]> 2017-04-11 06:14:55 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817345 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817350 Rachel tried to talk him about where the woman were but the man did not listen to Rachel and keep locking Rachel alone in the corridor.After that,There were some miracle thing.The woman appeared in front of Rachel.The woman helped him to get out from the dark and long corridor.Finally,the woman and Rachel killed the man.The lady also disappeared.]]> 2017-04-11 06:14:57 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817350 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817357 The old lady followed Rachel for going back her home.When Rachel came back home ,she discovered the old lady.She felt astonished as the man told her the old lady died of a heart attack.After that ,Rachel was claim down.The old lady said,"I have some whishes which I haven't done before when I am survived. I hope you can help me ." To sum up the girl helped the old lady to finish her wishes.]]> 2017-04-11 06:15:00 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817357 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817379  Rachel got tired and went to sleep. When she lied down , she saw the old woman who has a long white hair was standing behind the door. She felt scared and yelled out. She's hand started shaking and she cannot clam down. The old woman knocked the door and said ' Don't be afraid. I wouldn't hurt you, I am very k]]> 2017-04-11 06:15:14 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817379 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817402 Rachel saw that old lady standing infront of her and laugh at her“you shouldn't come here"The next day,Rachel was found dead at the corridor and she got a shocked look on her face.]]> 2017-04-11 06:15:25 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817402 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817418 Rachel was so afraid of this impossible thing.Suddenly,the old lady appeared and stood next to Rachel.Then,the old lady said to Rachel,"Why you are not afraid of me?"Rachel replied her,"I won't scare because I have magic!By the way,I trust you and you won't hurt me,right?"The old lady said,"Of course,I am so lucky to meet you. You are the most kindest teenage that I have never seen before.Thank you so much!I must to leave now!bye!"Then,the clock is belling and time to wake up to school.Rachel realised that she should be more nice to the elderly.

"Ling ling ling"Rachel realise that it was all a dream.]]> 2017-04-11 06:15:36 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817418 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817420 Rachel was scared when she heard that news,she hoped that it was just a dream but unfortunately it wasn't since the old lady appeared in front of her.Rachel saw her and wanted to run away of this place.However,she couldn't.The old lady caught her and said'you are mine now,ha ha ha ha!'
Rachel said'am I going to die?'The old lady said'no no no!We are going to a party!'Rachel wanted to payback but she hadn't have a weapon.Then,she got a plastic bag in the streets and put the plastic bag in the lady head.Finally,the old lady has gone.]]> 2017-04-11 06:15:37 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817420 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817421 The women walked to Rachel slowly, Rachel was very afraid. She didn't know how to do. 
"No!Get out!" Rachel ran quickly. 
"Now, you know I have already died so you can't get out, you need to stay here and stand by me."The old lady said.
"No, please!"Rachel said.
"Shut up!
So, Rachel had to stay here forever.]]> 2017-04-11 06:15:37 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817421 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817445 Rachel felt wondering and nervers.She didnt know what is going on.She went across the road slowly,so much considerate of her.She got no ideas and though that was impossible.And then that old lady appeared in front of her suddenly.The old lady touched her.Rachel was frightened and said "no no no."
But that old lady told her calmed down and she would not hurted her.Rachel was clam immediately and listened to what she said.She said you were like my ground daughters so that I followed you and talked to you.Rachel clam and get what was going .She get up andthat  is only a dream]]> 2017-04-11 06:15:56 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817445 chulaiking1 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817446 "Knock!Knock1' No one answered .She tried to push the door and it opened all of a sudden.
Rachel jumped backwards and gasped.     
Rachel's face turned white.
The old lady asked, "What is the matter? Why are so scared?"
Rachel told the old lady about the  man next door as well as the rumour  of her death.
The old lady looked confused and said, 'That makes no sense!. The man next door died of a heart attack last month in his flat. No one lives next door anymore."             ]]> 2017-04-11 06:15:58 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817446 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817451 Some noise happen suddenly...
The woman appeared again and says softly...
"Who says I'm died"...
Actually,The old woman got jailed into the cave of the mountain by somebody...but whose done it?No one now at all right now...
3 years later, the old woman got an interview for CCTVB, the old women said she got jailed as she didn't know anything.
"Oh!I remember that the social workers want to get my apartment for the new centre,I'm sure that they fought me to the cave!"
Police found the clue for the old woman's case.They finally caught them to the jail. The old woman can have a life safely forever.]]> 2017-04-11 06:16:00 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817451 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817498 The sky suddenly turned dark and the woman appeared and kidnapped Rachel to die together so Rachel ran away as quick as possible. She ran to the supermarket and buy garlic and show it to the women. The ghost woman disappeared forever. Rachel is joyful because the evail bad lady is gone;) The sky turned beautiful again.]]> 2017-04-11 06:16:30 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817498 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817581 Rachel was freezed.She saw the man run far away.Suddenly there was cold wind."Thank you for coming!"the old lady said.Rachel turned around and saw the old lady."Are you alive?"Rachel said.The old lady felt strange and ask"What are you talking about?""The man  who live in next flat told me you were died of a heart attack last month."Rachel answered. "There is no people live."the old lady said. What... Who is he ?]]> 2017-04-11 06:17:31 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165817581 https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165818938 The old women suddenly appear and said “yes，i was dead already！”
Relax，i will not hurt you，because you are a good girl.We can stay together forever，you can't leave me because you really look like my daughter. 
At the end，Rachel stay with the old women and she cry everyday because she can't go home forever.]]> 2017-04-11 06:29:17 UTC https://padlet.com/hkcbtmss/2n1zsfw3fh8o/wish/165818938