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      <title>Beta Lessonn 17 Thursday by Lau Ling</title>
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      <pubDate>2025-05-22 12:47:35 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lim Zen Xi corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet, she saw her classmate, Jenny crying bitterly.</p><p><br/></p><p>  Out of curiosity, Lisa walked closer to ask Jenny what had happen. She told Lisa that she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa lends her a helping hand. They searched around the school compound to searched high and low for the purse.</p><p><br/></p><p>  </p><p>  Lady Luck was on their side, Lisa founded Jenny's purse. Jenny thanked Lisa from her bottom of her heart. From then on, they become bosom friend. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet, she saw her classmate, Jenny, crying bitterly.</p><p>       Out of curiosity, Lisa walked closer to ask Jenny what had <strong>happened</strong>. She told Lisa that she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa <strong>lent</strong> her a helping hand. They searched around the school compound and <strong>looked</strong> high and low for the purse.</p><p>         Lady Luck was on their side — Lisa <strong>found</strong> Jenny's purse. Jenny thanked Lisa <strong>from the bottom of her heart</strong>. From then on, they <strong>became</strong> bosom friends.</p><p>  </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:09:56 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jerreth corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The school bell rang for recess.Lisa ran as fast as her legs can carry her to the canteen.When she walked past the toilet she saw her friend,Jenny crying bitterly.</p><p>  Out of curiosity,she walked closer to ask her what had happened.She had lost her purse.Being a good Samaritan,Lisa lend her a helping hand.They walked around the school compound to search high and low for the purse.</p><p>  Luckily Lady Luck was on their side,they found the purse in the field.Jenny thanked her from her bottom of her heart.From then on,they became bosom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs <strong>could</strong> carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet, she saw her friend, Jenny, crying bitterly.</p><p>     Out of curiosity, she walked closer to ask her what had happened. Jenny told her she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa <strong>lent</strong> her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search high and low for the purse.</p><p>   Lady Luck was on their side  <strong>that </strong>they found the purse in the field. Jenny thanked her <strong>from the bottom of her heart</strong>. From then on, they became bosom friends.</p><p>  </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:10:13 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ruoyee corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   The school bell rang for recces, Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry heras her stomach was growling in hunger, suddenly she ran accross a girl named Jenny, she was crying bitterly.</p><p>   Being curious, she asks Jenny why is she crying, Jeny answered and said that her purse was missing. Being a good samaritan, Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. Lisa and Jenny searched around the school compound.</p><p>   Lady luck was on there side, suddenly, she found a yellow purse behind the bushes. Jenny thanks her for her kindness, and since then, they became bosom freinds.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>         The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her, as her stomach was growling with hunger. Suddenly, she <strong>came across</strong> a girl named Jenny, who was crying bitterly.</p><p>       Being curious, she <strong>asked</strong> Jenny why she was crying. Jenny answered that her purse was missing. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. Together, Lisa and Jenny searched around the school compound.</p><p>  Lady Luck was on <strong>their</strong> side. <strong>Suddenly</strong>, Lisa found a yellow purse behind the bushes. Jenny <strong>thanked</strong> her for her kindness, and since then, they have become bosom <strong>friends.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:20:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lee Sin Han corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as a cheetah to the canteen. When she was walk-pasted the washroom, she saw her classmates, Jenny was crying bitterly.</p><p>    Curiosity piqued she walked closer to Jenny and asked what happened. Jenny lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. They search the purse up and down at school compound.</p><p>    Lady Luck was on their side; they find the purse in the bushes. Jenny thanked Lisa from her bottom of her heart. From then now, they become bosom friend. </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as a cheetah to the canteen. When she <strong>walked past</strong> the washroom, she saw her classmate, Jenny, <strong>crying bitterly</strong>.</p><p>      Curiosity piqued, she walked closer to Jenny and asked what had happened. Jenny <strong>had lost</strong> her purse. Being a Good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. They <strong>searched high and low around </strong> the school compound  for the purse.</p><p>       Lady Luck was on their side; they <strong>found</strong> the purse in the bushes. Jenny thanked Lisa <strong>from the bottom of her heart</strong>. From then on, they <strong>became bosom friends</strong>.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:20:44 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lim Zen Hao corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>       The school bell rang for recess, Lisa ran  as fast as her legs could carry her to the school canteen . He walk past the girl toilet, and she spotted Jenny are crying bitterly.</p><p>   Lisa Out of curiosity, she go near to Jenny ,and ask why. She said she had lost her purse . Being a good Samaritan, Lisa lend a helping hand to Jenny. They Walked around the school  compound to search for her purse.</p><p>   Lady luck was on their side, They found the purse at the school garden . Jenny thanks Lisa from her bottom of her heart . From then on, they become bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the school canteen. <strong>She walked past the girls’ toilet and spotted Jenny crying bitterly.</strong></p><p>   Out of curiosity, Lisa <strong>approached </strong>Jenny and asked why she was crying. Jenny said she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa <strong>lent</strong> a helping hand to Jenny. They walked around the school compound to search for her purse.</p><p>Lady Luck was on their side. They found the purse in the school garden. Jenny <strong>thanked</strong> Lisa from the bottom of her heart. From then on, they <strong>became </strong>bosom <strong>friends.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:21:04 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Lee Ann Writing Star</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     The school bell rang for recess. The students make a beeline for the canteen. The canteen is crowded with sardines. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her as her stomach was growling with hunger. As she past by the girl toilet, she spotted her classmate Jenny, crying bitterly.                    Out of curiosity, she walked closer to ask what had happened. Actually, she had lost her purse and didn't had money to buy food in the canteen. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend a helping hand to Jenny. They walked around the school compound to find her purse.                                    Lady Lucky was by their side. They found the purse in the school garden. Jenny thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart. From then on, they become bosom friends.  </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       The school bell rang for recess. The students <strong>made</strong> a beeline for the canteen. The canteen <strong>was as crowded as a can of sardines</strong>. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her as her stomach was growling with hunger. As she <strong>passed</strong> by the girls’ toilet, she spotted her classmate, Jenny, crying bitterly.</p><p>       Out of curiosity, she walked closer to ask what had happened. Jenny had lost her purse and didn’t <strong>have</strong> money to buy food in the canteen. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend a helping hand to Jenny. They walked around the school compound to find her purse.</p><p>       Lady Luck was on their side. They found the purse in the school garden. Jenny thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart. From then on, they <strong>became</strong> bosom friends.              </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:23:19 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Ng Sze Ying corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>              The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet she saw Jenny was crying bitterly.</p><p>                Curiosity piqued, she walked closer to ask what had happened. Jenny purse is missing, being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend a helping hand. They turned around the school compound to find her purse. </p><p>                   Luckily a lady luck was on their side, they found the purse in the classroom. Jenny thanked Lisa from her bottom of her heart. Since then , they became bossom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet, she saw Jenny <strong>crying bitterly</strong>.</p><p>   Curiosity piqued, she walked closer to ask what had happened. <strong>Jenny’s purse was missing.</strong> Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend a helping hand. They <strong>walked around</strong> the school compound to find her purse.</p><p>        Lady Luck was on their side. They found the purse in the classroom. Jenny thanked Lisa <strong>from the bottom of her heart</strong>. Since then, they became <strong>bosom friends</strong>.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:23:25 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Qlowin corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><strong>&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; </strong>The school bell rang for recess.Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her as she was famished.When she walked past the school garden,she saw a Janice crying bitterly.</p><p><br/></p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Out of curiosity,Lisa asked the Janice what happened,she said she had&nbsp; lost her wallet.Being a kind Samaritan,Lisa decided to lend a helping hand.</p><p><br/></p><p>&nbsp;&nbsp; &nbsp; &nbsp; Lady Luck was on their side,they found her wallet behind the bushes.Janice thanked Lisa from her bottom of her heart.From then on,the became bosom friends and did everything together.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her<strong> to the school canteen </strong>as she was famished. When she walked past the school garden, she saw <strong>Janice</strong> crying bitterly.</p><p>     Out of curiosity, Lisa asked <strong>Janice</strong> what <strong>had </strong>happened. She said she had lost her wallet. Being a kind Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend <strong>her</strong> a helping hand.</p><p>       Lady Luck was on their side. They found her wallet behind the bushes. Janice thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart. From then on, <strong>they</strong> became bosom friends and did everything together.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:23:53 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jia Xin corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><br/></p><p>   The school bell rang for recess. Lisa as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet she saw Jenny was crying bitterly. She asked Jenny what had happened. She say she lost her purse. Being high and low, Lisa decide to lend a helping hand. They walked around the school compound and searched the canteen for the purse. Until a Lady Luck came she found the purse in the garden. Jenny thanks Lisa for finding her purse. In the end they became bosom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>    The school bell rang for recess.Lisa <strong>ran</strong> as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen.When she walked past the toilet, she saw Jenny <strong>crying bitterly</strong>.<br>     <strong> Being curious,</strong>Lisa asked Jenny what had happened. Jenny <strong>said</strong> she <strong>had lost</strong> her purse.Being a good Samaritan, Lisa <strong>decided</strong> to lend a helping hand.They walked around the school compound and <strong>searched high and low arond </strong>the canteen for the purse.<br>      <strong>Luckily</strong>, they found the purse in the garden.Jenny <strong>thanked</strong> Lisa for finding her purse.In the end, they became bosom friends.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:24:11 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Wee Hou corrected</title>
         <author>severenge</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     The school bell rang for recess. Lisa rand as fasa as her legs could carry her because her stomach growled with hunger. When she walked past the toilet, she saw Jennie crying butterflies.</p><p><br/></p><p>Being curious, she walked closer to jennie to ask her what had happened. She had lost her purse. Being a Good Samaritan, Lise clinched to lend her a helping hand . They walked around the school compound to search her losing purse.</p><p><br/></p><p>Lady Luck is on their side, they found the purse at the school garden.  Jennie thanked lisa from her bottom of her heart. From then on, they became bosom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>     The school bell rang for recess. Lisa <strong>ran</strong> a<strong>s fast </strong>as her legs could carry her<strong> to the school canteen </strong> because her stomach growled with hunger. When she walked past the toilet, she saw Jennie <strong>crying bitterly</strong>.</p><p>     Being curious, she walked closer to Jennie to ask her what had happened. She had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa <strong>offered</strong> to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search <strong>for her lost purse.</strong></p><p>   Lady Luck <strong>was</strong> on their side. They found the purse in the school garden. Jennie thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart. From then on, they became bosom friends.</p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:24:22 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Sze Jane corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>      The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her leg could carry her to the canteen because her stomach was growling loudly. Just then, when she walked by the toilet, she saw Jenny crying bitterly.</p><p>         Out of curiousity, she walked closer to ask what had happened. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search high and low for the purse.</p><p>          Lady Luck was on their side. They finally found the purse in the garden. Jenny thanked Lisa from her bottom of her heart. From then on, they became bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>         The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen because her stomach was growling loudly. Just then, as she walked past the toilet, she saw Jenny crying bitterly.</p><p>      Out of curiosity, she walked closer to ask what had happened. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa <strong>lent </strong>her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound, <strong>searching high and low for the purse.</strong></p><p>   Lady Luck was on their side. They finally found the purse in the garden. Jenny thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart. From then on, they became <strong>bosom friends.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:24:31 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Jae Hong corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     School bell rang for recess, Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her. When she walked past toliet, she saw his classmate, Jenny was crying bitterly. </p><p>           Out of curiosity, She walked closer to ask her what had happened. She had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa lend a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search high and low for the purse.</p><p>             Lady Luck was on their side, They finally found purse in garden. Jenny from her bottom of her heart. Since than, they became the bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her. When she walked past <strong>the toilet</strong>, she saw <strong>her</strong> classmate, Jenny, <strong>crying</strong> bitterly.</p><p>       Out of curiosity, <strong>she</strong> walked closer to ask what had happened. Jenny said she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa <strong>lent</strong> a helping hand. They walked around the school compound, searching high and low for the purse.</p><p>Lady Luck was on their side — <strong>they</strong> finally found <strong>the purse in the garden</strong>. Jenny <strong>thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart</strong>. Since <strong>then</strong>, they became <strong>bosom friends</strong>.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:27:27 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Alyssa corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>    The school bell rang for recess. Lisa runs as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet, she saw her friend Jennye was crying bitterly.</p><p>        Out of curiosity, Lisa walked closer to ask her what had happen. She says that she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa clinched want to lend her a helping hand. Lisa and Jennye walked around the school compound to search high and low for the purse.</p><p>      Luckily, they finally found Jennye purse in the garden. Jennye thanks Lisa from her bottom of her heart. Since then, they become bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>         The school bell rang for recess. Lisa <strong>ran</strong> as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet, she saw her friend <strong>Jennye</strong> crying bitterly.<br>       Out of curiosity, Lisa walked closer to ask her what had <strong>happened</strong>. She <strong>said</strong> that she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa <strong>decided to lend</strong> her a helping hand. Lisa and <strong>Jennye</strong> walked around the school compound to search high and low for the purse.<br>        Luckily, they finally found <strong>Jennye's purse</strong> in the garden. <strong>Jennye thanked</strong> Lisa <strong>from the bottom of her heart</strong>. Since then, they <strong>have become bosom friends</strong>.</p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p><p>   </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:28:08 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Goh You Wei corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The school bel rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen because her stomached has growing. When she walked past the toilet, she spotted her friend, Jenny was crying bitterly.</p><p>  Out of curiosity, Lisa walked closer to ask her what happened. She had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search high and low for the purse. </p><p>  Lady Luck was on their side, they found the a pink purse in the field. Jenny thanked Lisa from her bottom of her heart. Since then, they became bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>            The school <strong>bell</strong> rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen because her <strong>stomach was growling</strong>. When she walked past the toilet, she spotted her friend, Jenny, <strong>crying</strong> bitterly.<br>          Out of curiosity, Lisa walked closer to ask her what had happened. She had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa <strong>lent</strong> her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound, searching high and low for the purse.<br>           Lady Luck was on their side — they found <strong>a pink purse</strong> in the field. Jenny <strong>thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart</strong>. Since then, they <strong>have become bosom friends</strong>.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:31:42 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Alicia Hee corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>          The school bell rang for recess. Jenny ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. Lisa came out of the toilet and walked past the crying bitterly Jenny.</p><p>          Lisa is being curious, she walked closer and ask her what had happend. Jenny had lost her <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://purse.To">purse. To be a good samaritan girl, Lisa clinched to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search high and low for the purse. </a></p><p>            Lady Luck was on their side, Jenny thanked from her hear. From then on, they became bosom frend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       The school bell rang for recess. Jenny ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. Lisa came out of the toilet and walked past Jenny, who was crying bitterly.</p><p>     Feeling curious, Lisa walked closer and <strong>asked</strong> her what had <strong>happened</strong>. Jenny had lost her purse. <strong>Being a good Samaritan</strong>, Lisa <strong>decided to lend</strong> her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound, searching high and low for the purse.</p><p>      Lady Luck was on their side<strong> that they managed to find the purse. </strong>Jenny <strong>thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart</strong>. From then on, they became <strong>bosom friends</strong>.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Elson corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p><br/></p><p>      The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs can carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet, she saw a student, Jennie was crying bitterly.                                                                        Out of curiosity, she walked closer to ask Jennie  what had happened. Jennie said she lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search high and low for the purse.</p><p>      Lady luck was on their side, finally they found the purse in the garden. Jennie thanked to Lisa from her bottom of her heart. Since then, they become bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs <strong>could</strong> carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet, she saw a student, Jennie, <strong>crying</strong> bitterly.</p><p>      Out of curiosity, she walked closer to ask Jennie what had happened. Jennie said she <strong>had lost</strong> her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound, searching high and low for the purse.</p><p>   Lady <strong>Luck</strong> was on their side <strong>and finally,</strong> they found the purse in the garden. Jennie <strong>thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart</strong>. Since then, they <strong>have become bosom friends</strong>.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:34:33 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Varick corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The school bell rang for recess.Lisa ran as fast as lightning.When her past the toilet,she saw Jenny crying bitterly.</p><p>  Being curious, she walked closer,she ask Jenny what had happened.Jenny had lost her purse.Being a Good Samaritan.Lisa lend her a helping hand They found high and low in school compound.</p><p>  A lady lucky was on their side,they founded Jenny’s purse.Jenny thanks to Lisa from her bottom of her heart.Since than,they was made a bosom friend .</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>    The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as lightning <strong>to the school canteen. </strong>When she walked past the toilet, she saw Jenny crying bitterly.</p><p>      Being curious, she walked closer <strong>and asked Jenny what had happened. </strong>Jenny had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa lent her a helping hand. They <strong>searched</strong> high and low<strong> around </strong>the school compound.</p><p>      Lady Luck was on their side — they<strong> finally found </strong>Jenny’s purse. Jenny <strong>thanked Lisa</strong> from the bottom of her heart. Since <strong>then, they have become bosom friends.</strong></p><p><br/></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <title>Ooi Zun Khai corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The school bell rang for recess, Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her. Went she walked past the toilet, she saw his friend, Jenny was crying bitterly.</p><p>  Being curious, she walked closer to ask her what had happened. She had lost her purse. Being a good samaritan, Lisa lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search high and low for the purse.</p><p>  Lady luck was on their side, they finally found the purse at the garden. Jenny was thanked from her bottom of her heart. Since then, they became a bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her. <strong>When</strong> she walked past the toilet, she saw <strong>her</strong> friend Jenny crying bitterly.</p><p>        Being curious, she walked closer to ask her what had happened. Jenny said she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa <strong>lent</strong> her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound, searching high and low for the purse.</p><p>         Lady Luck was on their side — they finally found the purse <strong>in the garden</strong>. Jenny <strong>thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart</strong>. Since then, they <strong>have become bosom friends</strong>.</p>]]></description>
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         <title>Kong Jun San corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry to the canteen. when she walked past to the toilet. All of a sudden, she spotted her friend Jenny are crying bitterly.</p><p>  When Lisa being curious, Lisa walked closer to Jenny and ask what happened. Jenny lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend Jenny a helping hand. They walked around the school compound to search high and low for the missing purse.</p><p>  Lady luck was on their side, They found the purse in the school garden, Jenny thanked from her bottom of her heart. From then on, they became bosom friends.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>       The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet, <strong>she suddenly spotted her friend Jenny crying bitterly.</strong></p><p>   <strong>   Being curious</strong>, Lisa walked closer to Jenny and asked what had happened. Jenny said she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend Jenny a helping hand. They walked around the school compound, <strong>searching high and low for the missing purse.</strong></p><p>     Lady Luck was on their side — they found the purse in the school garden. Jenny thanked<strong> Lisa from the bottom of her heart</strong>. From then on, they became bosom friends.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:39:46 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Gan Cheau Qian corrected</title>
         <author>m12571041</author>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>     School bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her leg could carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet she saw a student is crying bitterly.                                Being curious she walked closer to ask her what had happened. She had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school comfound to search high and low for the purse.                                                                     Lady Luck was on their side, finally they found the purse in the park. Jennie thanked to Lisa from her bottom of her heart. Since then, they become bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her <strong>legs</strong> could carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet, she <strong>saw a student crying bitterly.</strong></p><p>      Being curious, she walked closer to ask what had happened.<strong> The student said</strong> she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa lent her a helping hand. They walked around the school <strong>compound</strong> to search high and low for the purse.</p><p>       Lady Luck was on their side. <strong>Finally, they found </strong>the purse in the park. The student thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart. Since then, they have become <strong>bosom friends.</strong></p><p><br/></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:42:15 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Zi Xuan corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   The school bell rang for <a rel="noopener noreferrer nofollow" href="http://recess.as">recess.Lisa ran as fast as lightning to the canten. As her stomach growled with hunger, Lisa walked past and saw jenny crying bitterly and searching for her purse .</a></p><p>     All of a sudden lisa found the purse ,and gave it to the principal ,and they were a standing ovation.</p><p>     Lisa was out of curiosity.During the assembly the principal announce about lis</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>        The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as lightning to the canteen. As her stomach growled with hunger, she walked past<strong> Jenny, who was crying bitterly while searching for her purse.</strong></p><p><strong>         Being curious, she walked closer and asked her what had happened. She found out that Jenny had lost her purse. She decided to lend her a helping hand. They searched high and low for the purse. </strong></p><p>          Luckily, Lisa found the purse and gave it to the principal, who then announced it<strong> during the assembly. Lisa received a standing ovation for her kindness</strong>. <strong>Jenny thanked Lisa for her kindness. </strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-22 13:43:00 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Phuah Jaynelle Writing Star</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>  When the school bell rang for recess, Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. All of a sudden, as she walked past the toilet, she saw her classmate Jenny crying bitterly.</p><p>  Being curious, she walked closer to ask what had happened. Jenny told her that she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa was determined to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound, searching high and low for the purse.</p><p>  Lady Luck was on their side. Jenny managed to find her purse. She thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart. Since then, they have become bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      When the school bell rang for recess, Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. All of a sudden, as she walked past the toilet, she saw her<strong> classmate ,</strong>Jenny crying bitterly.</p><p>    Being curious, she walked closer to ask what had happened. Jenny told her that she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa was determined to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school compound, searching high and low for the purse.</p><p>     Lady Luck was on their side. Jenny managed to find her purse. She thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart. Since then, they have become <strong>bosom friends</strong>.</p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-23 07:46:05 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Kua Weng Yik corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>School bell rang for recess Veann as fast as her legs could carry her Veann walked past Linda criying bitterly.</p><p><br/></p><p>  Out of curiosity Veann had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan Veann lend a helping hand. School compound.</p><p><br/></p><p>Lady luck on thier side they from her bottom of her heart. Since then they do bosom friend.      </p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>               The school bell rang for recess. Veann ran as fast as her legs could carry her <strong>to the school canteen. </strong>As she walked past<strong> the toilet, </strong> she saw Linda crying bitterly.</p><p>     Out of curiosity, Veann<strong> went closer to ask what had happened. Linda said she had lost her purse.</strong> Being a good Samaritan, Veann lent her a helping hand. <strong>They searched high and low around the school compound.</strong></p><p>       Lady Luck was on their side — <strong>they finally found the purse. Linda thanked Veann from the bottom of her heart. </strong>Since then, they <strong>have become bosom friends.  </strong>                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                  </p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-24 09:39:51 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>jin xuan corrected</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>                        The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs to the canteen. When walked past by the toilet, she saw her clammate jenny crying.</p><p><br/></p><p>                         Out of curiosity,she came closer,ask her what happened. she lost her purse.Being a good samaritan,Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand.They walked around the school yard.searching for her purse.</p><p><br/></p><p>                           Lady luck was on their sidefrom her bottom of her heart from then on, They found the purse in the garden.Jenny thanks Lisa from the bottom of her heart.From this moment on,since then bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her legs could carry her to the canteen. When she walked past the toilet,<strong> she saw her classmate Jenny crying.</strong></p><p>    Out of curiosity, she came closer and asked what had happened. Jenny said she had lost her purse. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa decided to lend her a helping hand. They walked around the school yard, searching for the purse.</p><p>         Lady Luck was on their side.<strong> They found the purse in the garden. </strong>Jenny <strong>thanked </strong>Lisa from the bottom of her heart.<strong> From that moment on, they became bosom friends.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-24 14:43:18 UTC</pubDate>
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         <title>Saw Kah Hou Writing Star</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<p>   The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her leg could carry her to the canteen as her stomach was growling with hunger. When she walked past by the girl’s toilet, she spotted her classmate, Jenny was crying as loud as thunder.</p><p>&nbsp;</p><p>   Out of curiosity, she walked closer to ask her what had happened. Actually, she lost her purse and doesn’t have any money to buy food. Being a good Samaritan, she lend Jenny a helping hand. They walked around the school compound, hope to find the purse.</p><p>   Lady Luck was on their side, they finally found the purse at the garden. Jenny thanked Lisa from her bottom of her heart. Since then, they became bosom friend.</p><p><strong>Corrected</strong></p><p>      The school bell rang for recess. Lisa ran as fast as her <strong>legs</strong> could carry her to the canteen, as her stomach was growling with hunger. When she walked past the girls’ toilet, she spotted her classmate<strong> Jenny crying as loud as thunder</strong>.</p><p>    Out of curiosity, she walked closer to ask what had happened. <strong>Jenny had lost her purse and didn’t have any money to buy food</strong>. Being a good Samaritan, Lisa <strong>lent</strong> Jenny a helping hand. They walked around the school compound, hoping to find the purse.</p><p>       Lady Luck was on their side — they finally found the purse <strong>in</strong> the garden. Jenny thanked Lisa from the bottom of her heart. Since then, they have become bosom<strong> friends.</strong></p>]]></description>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-25 10:30:34 UTC</pubDate>
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         <pubDate>2025-05-29 01:59:00 UTC</pubDate>
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