Talia by Jeff Edge

Riley

rhoffm — 2018-03-07 19:56:09 UTC

Not to be harsh, but your poster is a little boring. I think your idea is cool, love the box, and the name. You sounded really sad when you were presenting.

Maya Samipur

msamip — 2018-03-07 19:56:11 UTC

I love the poster it is great that there is color that really catches my eye to read it. Your cards came out great! Demographic? The box is great! Make sure to make it clear that you can trade!

SELMA

stimpe — 2018-03-07 19:56:11 UTC

The tagline is very catchy, and your box seems very smooth and neat. I like how you have a list of the items. 
The idea is great!
But, for the real POL you might want to make your poster a little more bright and catchy. 
The entire time of this POL, you sounded kinda depressed, so for the actual POL, make sure you sound energetic. Maybe to brighten your poster, take a picture of your board or pieces, and then glue it to your poster.

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oliver_benson — 2018-03-07 19:56:13 UTC

- Love the name
- Went through the rules very smoothly
- Game sounds fun to play
- Item/Action cards are good ideas for this theme for a board game
- Doesn't sound that hard
- Doesn't take that long
- Not too cluttered
- Good starter game
- My favorite type of game: a card game
- Everyone likes the last day of school
- Everyone can relate to the theme
4/5 Stars

Teagan Ryan

2018-03-07 19:56:14 UTC

I really love Talia’s game name because alot of people like the last day of school and the title catches the eye.
Talia’s idea is also really great because it’s something people do in real life and people can relate to the game.
The rulebook is also very simple and a easy to understand game. If I saw this in a store I would definitely buy it. If I was a stranger checking out the game at the board game expo I would be interested and wanting to hear more.

Jesse Koeppel

Jesse_Koeppel — 2018-03-07 19:56:14 UTC

i like the name last day of school, and i like that this game is implementing trading. the poster could use a little more color but other than that your doing well. one thing to point out is this game speaks to me because i am always excited for the last day of school.

Caedmon

2018-03-07 19:56:15 UTC

Sounds like a very good game for a wide range of children and also for any families or friends.

The story and the gameplay sound great! The idea is very original and the box design looks very nice. The logo is also very eye catching and the color scheme is awesome!

I agree with what Mr. Norof said about the poster being white at the bottom.

Overall, it sounds like a very fun game!

Mr. Edge

jeff_edge — 2018-03-07 19:56:16 UTC

The poster board looks fantastic. I love the colors and the design.

The logo is fantastic. You have great cards as well.

I was hoping your presentation would be full of more energy. You sounded incredibly sad.

Based on the questions being asked, it sounds like you are still trying to figure out the rules of your game. Keep practicing. You have a great idea.

Have fun with this. You have a great idea!

Seth

2018-03-07 19:56:17 UTC

• Nice story
• Good items
• Good logo
• Good time range
• Great over all idea

Maya Sasi

MayaSasi — 2018-03-07 19:56:19 UTC

The poster is a little plain. I like that there are a lot of supplies, that way the game can be longer. The objective is a bit simple. Maybe add something to the objective. The box is really nice, I like how the books on the box pop out. I like that it is a card game not a board game. Be a little more confident when you are speaking. The age demographic seems appropriate for this game.

Zaq

zbensi — 2018-03-07 19:56:20 UTC

I like the idea of action cards. It makes the game dig deeper into the ground instead of just having “Last day of school” it makes it more complex. Overall I love the idea. Great job.

Charlette Anderson

2018-03-07 19:56:21 UTC

I like the idea and name it is very eye catching. I like yh box design. I like the objective of the game it is like real life. I like the demographic because it fits the age group.

Romi Cohen

rcohen7 — 2018-03-07 19:56:21 UTC

I really like how different your game is.I really like how simple and cute the box design is. I also really like how people can relate to this game.

Colt

2018-03-07 19:56:24 UTC

I like the idea of the game, it seems intresting and fun. How long does it take to play? This can relate to the real world.

Jonah

2018-03-07 19:56:26 UTC

Ruby

rrobin1 — 2018-03-07 19:56:27 UTC

I like the poster, to me it is really eye catching. It has good information and it has color.

The idea is cool to. I like the story, It kinda fits in with my life. I am always losing things at school.

I think at the Expo, this will catch people's attention, the fact that it is a card game.

Addison Lee

2018-03-07 19:56:29 UTC

I like Talia's board game because it seems very clever. I love her poster, it is neat and very informative. She has action cards and item cards, which I like. Her box is cute too. I have played games that have similar ways to play, but I have never seen a game based off the last day of school. Btw the name of her game is called "the last day of school" I like her game a lot!

Noa

2018-03-07 19:56:29 UTC

I really like the idea of your game I would definitely but it! your game is very neat and very understandable. I really like it.

Jack Williams

2018-03-07 19:56:30 UTC

I like the poster board it is very big with lots of color. The idea is like clue but you needto find all of the items. It would be a lot better if it was a board game. It will make the game more exiting. You should add a timer so you have a minimon of time to get all of your suplize. Can add more pop to the botem of the poster.

Emma Grisham

egrish — 2018-03-07 19:56:31 UTC

I like your box but it is just like a big version of the logo

My Opinion (L i l l y)

lillymorgancox — 2018-03-07 19:56:34 UTC

I think you have a really cool idea, and I think it's interesting that you have to collect all of your stuff before summer. I did see just a small bit of resemblance to Caden's idea, although I took her survey a while ago, and the similarities aren't great. I think it's very original, but I think it would make more sense if it's in the beginning of the school year, when you're buying the materials, but that's just my
o p i n i o n .

I like the colorful cards, and the poster is really cool! It draws attention to the game.

Joe

2018-03-07 19:56:36 UTC

I like the idea! However, it is very similar to Maya Samipur's game,
"Food Find".

I think the action cards are a great addition to this game because it adds an element of a Beer and Pretzels type of game.

If someone gets the pen and you need the pen, can you not get it because the other player already has it?

Do you think your logo best represents your game? If so, how?

Nice Job! Very creative.

Gannon

2018-03-07 19:56:39 UTC

Great idea. Great logo and name explains exactly what the objective of the game is. Make your tagline get people’s attention and make it more catchy.

Kane

2018-03-07 19:56:41 UTC

I like the idea a lot its seems super fun to play one the last day of school. I like how its a race to win those game intrigue me very much so it would be a game that I would buy and play.

reeeeeees

2018-03-07 19:56:42 UTC

hugo

sargentoyeeherman — 2018-03-07 19:56:43 UTC

the logo seems like an afterthought which is sad because the rest of you're game looks good. I like the story and think it would apply to most audiences. you're game seems

Jonathan

2018-03-07 19:56:48 UTC

I like the name because it fits very well with the theme of the game, I would take out some items, I think there's touch items to find

Julius The Great

2018-03-07 19:56:54 UTC

I like the name "The Last Day Of School" but I think there should be more creativity in it. It sounds kind of plain. I like the idea of a card game. I don't often play card games but when I do they are very fun so I am somewhat intrigued. I like the board but it needs some more color.

Beau Bauman

2018-03-07 19:57:04 UTC

Good idea, I dont see this game becoming something, but you carried it out to the best of your ability. Idea: 1/10 making of the game: 10/10.
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Jonah

2018-03-07 19:57:04 UTC

It looks really fun and creative I would play it, it's really nice.

Jake

jpoind — 2018-03-07 19:57:43 UTC

I like the concept of its the last day of school.

Fintan

FintanRH — 2018-03-07 19:58:50 UTC

brought stuff to show
nice name
concept is ok
nice poster

would i play? maybe, poster has open space to put stuff, kids will like it!

Rees

2018-03-07 19:59:32 UTC

Never seen a game like this, I see potential

BEAU BAUMAN POST 2

2018-03-07 20:00:34 UTC

I have no idea about what this game is, it sounds boring, but, it could be fun if carried out correctly.