Whale Fantasia by Raewyn Davis https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz Language features we can use in our writing en-us 2017-07-30 00:29:52 UTC 2017-10-04 05:56:50 UTC hello@padlet.com Whaea Raewyn raewyndavis67 https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/179692341 How does the water feel?
How can you move in the water?
What can you see?
What do you feel ?]]> 2017-07-30 00:37:20 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/179692341 T https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208224 The sun was as bright as a flame 
The water was as bubble as your blowing bubbles.
The water was as clear as glass.
As I go down it gets darker and darker.
The barnacles were as rough  as concrete.
The whales tails were as large as a building.
When we go down even more it is as black as diesel.    ]]> 2017-08-06 21:49:48 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208224 T https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208231 the water is as cold as ice 
it is dark as night 
awesome
the water was as bubbly  as hot bolling water
the water was as blue as 

]]> 2017-08-06 21:50:01 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208231 M https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208235 the wales skin feels like concrete.
rocks
wales
caves
dark
cold
bubbles
the water was cold as snow
bubbly water
the wale was big as a truck
I was slow as a a sloth

]]> 2017-08-06 21:50:09 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208235 S https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208236
  • the water feels cold like Antarctica
  • the water was flowing which made it easy to move
  • sea creatures and people swimming
  • I feel water flowing around me
  • the seaweed was as curly as hair as hair been cured 
  • the water was as blue asthe sky
  • the water was as clear as a glass
  • fluffy moss around the rocks through the dark ink cave
  • the sun was as yellow as thin sand 

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    ]]>     2017-08-06 21:50:11 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208236     T tyler43bk https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208245 the water was cold as ice
    you can see  whales, fish, bubbles
    it  is dark as you get deeper

    ]]>     2017-08-06 21:50:19 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208245     J jackson1cck https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208248 cold
    cool
    awesome
    wales
    blue
    sand
    fish
    rocks
    caves
    the water is as cold as ice
    cold
    it is amazing
    bubbles
    sharks
    amazed
    greywhite
    water
    colour full corul
    the corul was as colour ful as a rain bow
    huge wales
    people
    go pro
    camera
    the water was as clear as glass
    the water was as clear as a window
    my legs where stuck to gether]]>     2017-08-06 21:50:26 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208248     M https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208250 The water was as clear as glass.
    The water was as cold as ice
    The whales were as big as a crane
    The deeper you go the draker it gets.
    fun
    cold
    bubbly
    the coral was as colourfull as a rainbow.

    ]]>     2017-08-06 21:50:27 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208250     JL https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208251 the coral is as spongy as so sponge 
    scary shark
    scared
    I am as cold as a ant in Antarctica
    fish being eating
    the sun  hurts my eyes 
    stunned
    transparent
    ship wreck
    treasure
    executed    
     ]]>     2017-08-06 21:50:28 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208251     D draved1mmm https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208254 cold cool I see fish I Seen a shark  fun rocks blue]]> 2017-08-06 21:50:34 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208254 S shyne4p8p https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208261 fish,fun,cold,caves,sand,wales.
    the water is blue as ice.
    the wales felt like a bed.
    the sea felt like ice.
    the fish looked cute when swimming.]]>     2017-08-06 21:50:45 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208261     M makaea15jk https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208262 The water felt cold and icy
    awesome ,  coral, sand, sea weed, cool, cave, school of fish, dark, deep, bubbles, beautiful, wales, the water is transparent, the sun shone bright in the water, inky water, pumped, tied.]]>     2017-08-06 21:50:47 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208262     K kaylee5hwc https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208265 The water felt nice    cool       blue  fun the water was cold       seaweed  fishy's       whale        friends           happy          enjoying it ]]> 2017-08-06 21:50:54 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208265 K https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208267 cold
    cool
    the water is coldit is cold like ice
    the sun was as  bright
    the water was cold
    blue fish 
    cold see
    the water was as cold as a fridge
    the whale  is blue like the see and the fish is blue as a whale
    it is rock as a hill
    it is big like the hill as it like the water 
    it is cold as the whale
    dark
    freezer,,
    the sun was as hot as a fire,
    fish.
    sand.
    the sun was as bright as a flame.
    the sun shine in the water..............
    fun 
    bubbly
    the water was cold as snow
    the water is as cold like snow
    `it is dark as night
    the water is as bubbly as hot
    big whales
    big fish
    big catfish
    people
    fish is fun
    the water is so so so so cold!!!!!!!
    I can see fish
    I like whale
    it is so so so so so so so so fun!!!
    it  is so rock 
    bubbly water!!!!!!!!!!!
    caves
    dark
    bubbles
    bubbly water
    the whale was as big  as a truck
    the water feels cold like 
    Antarctica
    the water was flowing which
    made it  easy to move
    sea creatures and popple
    swimming
    ]]>     2017-08-06 21:50:56 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208267     R https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208278 the seaweed is smiley as spaghetti.
    the water is cold as ice.
    the deeper I went the more dark i could see.
    the waves crashed into the shore like a tornado ]]>     2017-08-06 21:51:14 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208278     S https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208288 Cold
    shiny
    icy
    bright
    dark

    The water was as cold as a freezer.

    I get up out of the water as I feel the hot burning sun burning down on my skin.

    The sun was as hot as a fire.

    The deep part of the sea was as dark as ink from a pen.

    The sea was as clear as a transparent shiny piece of glass

    ]]>     2017-08-06 21:51:35 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208288     RJ rocky7zcr https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208302 The whale was as hard as a rock
    caves 
    the seaweed was as green as grass]]>     2017-08-06 21:52:11 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208302     W https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208563 transparent water
    cool
    cold
    fish
    wails
    coral
    sponge
    seaweed]]>     2017-08-06 21:59:04 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180208563     T https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180310644 the water is as cold as ice
    the water was like glass 
    cool 
    big whales 
    big waves ]]>     2017-08-07 23:08:15 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180310644     JS https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180314849 water 
    rock]]>     2017-08-08 00:06:19 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180314849     A https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180315136 happy
    fun 
    cool
    blue
    cold
    fish]]>     2017-08-08 00:10:05 UTC https://padlet.com/raewyndavis67/2ma18dy1rvfz/wish/180315136