Idea 1:

Nowadays, young people frequently spend most of their free time in commercial complexes to buy essential products due to the higher quality compared to the product quality in ordinary markets → This behavior CAN TEMPT THEM TO BUY THINGS THEY DO NOT REALLY NEED [E.28]. → COULD BE SEEN AS A WASTE OF MONEY [E.37] --> would BE FACED WITH A LACK OF LIVING COSTS [E.19]-> can CAUSE THEM INTO DEBT. [E.28]

Idea 2:

Young shoppers can easily be trapped by strategies OF SELLERS IN SHOPPING MALLS SUCH AS turning on slow-paced music or not hanging clocks that entice customers to stay longer in the mall. → They do not know how much time they spend shopping at malls ( LOSE TRACK OF TIME )→ As a consequence, young people HAVE NO TIME FOR OTHER ACTIVITIES [ E.28], especially outdoor leisure --> This is likely to create an imbalance in their mental and physical health.

IDEA 1: 

Young people spending too much time in malls are more likely to be SURROUNDED BY ADVERTISING AND MARKETING INFLUENCES [E48] which can certainly TEMPT YOUNG PEOPLE TO BUY PRODUCTS THAT THEY MIGHT NOT OTHERWISE WANT [E48] => INFLUENCES OUR BUYING BEHAVIOR [E48] such as COMPULSIVE SHOPPING AND UNWISE FINANCIAL DECISIONS [E38] =>  WASTE a large amount of money ON BUYING THINGS THEY DO NOT NEED [E29] => Be faced with personal financial problems such as tuition debt or a tight living budget.

IDEA 2:

Have a wide range of high-quality products from well-known brands and attractions such as cinemas OR restaurants,.... -> Young people spending DOUBLE THEIR USUAL TIME [E23] wandering around shopping malls may lose their crucial time that could be spent ON outdoor activities such as playing sports => This CAN LEAD TO A SEDENTARY LIFESTYLE [E46] => has A NEGATIVE IMPACT [E05] on the PHYSICAL health of today’s youth. 

IDEA 3:

Young people influenced by lastest trends easily [E.02] and increasingly surrounded by attractive advertising [E.48] visit to shopping malls frequently to stay up to date or own the newest high-status devices [E.48], in spite of the fact that it goes against their real needs [E.48]. -> Spend money over their tight budgets -> contribute to accumulating debt and later financial difficulties.

Young people influenced by latest trends easily [E.02] and increasingly surrounded by attractive advertising [E.48] visit shopping malls frequently to update or own the newest high-status devices [E.48], which may goes against their real needs [E.48]. -> ARE MORE LIKELY TO Spend money over their tight budgets -> contribute to accumulating debt and later financial difficulties SUCH AS ............

Idea 2: A mandatory part of young people have mental problems about shopping addicted by spending their leisure time all in shopping mall activities. -> There is no spare time for them to participate in sports AND ........... -> ..........cardiovascular problems and mental disorder -> decline quality of works.

A mandatory part of young people face with metal health problem caused by shopaholic behavior -> There is no spare time for them to participate in sports and social responsibility activities -> deal with cardiovascular problems and SOMETIMES mental disorder AND ........ -> reduce quality/ PRODUCTIVITY of works and negatively effect on social relationships.

SHOPAHOLIC

• In the shopping malls, young people ARE INCREASINGLY SURROUNDED BY ADVERTISING [E48] BECAUSE many products are advertised as having superior quality => Advertisements can certainly TEMPT PEOPLE TO BUY PRODUCTS THAT THEY MIGHT NOT OTHERWISE WANT [E48] => This COULD BE SEEN AS A WASTE OF MONEY [E37] => => creates a financial burdenS and makes it difficult to manage daily expenses

Idea 2:

• There are a great number of young people go -> GOING to shopping malls by personal vehicles because THIS saves more time -> THIS WAY IS FAR MORE TIME-SAVING compared to waiting for public transportation. => This causes THE INCREASE IN DAILY traffic volume on the road => THE AMOUNT OF EXHAUST FUMES FROM VEHICLES [E11] increaseS => pollutes the air environment [E01]

Fast food chains IN SHOPPING MALLS often provide convenient and quick dining options, helping to attract customers and enhance their shopping experience. -> Spending too much time in shopping malls can lead to an unhealthy lifestyle, especially among young people primarily engaged in eating at fast food restaurants. EXCESSIVE CONSUMPTION OF FAST FOOD => They can eat FATTY AND SUGAR-RICH FOOD [E24] without physical movement => affects their overall health, possibly contributing to problems such as DIABETES, HIGH CHOLESTEROL, and heart disease [E24]

Idea 2:

The fact that young people frequent (V) popular shopping malls often creates CAN CREATE new trends because THESE PEOPLE IN CONTEMPORARY SOCIETY they are influential trendsetters who actively engage with social media, where emerging styles and preferences quickly gain traction. => young people have LEAD TO THE WISH TO APPEAR FASHIONABLE AND FOLLOW FASHION TRENDS [E02] OF MANY OTHER -> ...........=> unintentionally causing social pressure and self-pressure .=> contribute to mental health challenges SUCH AS , potentially leading to stress, anxiety, and emotional strain for individuals.

The spread of MULTINATIONAL PRODUCTS and the INCREASING effect of advertising can contribute to the temptation of young people TO BUY PRODUCTS THAT THEY MIGHT NOT OTHERWISE WANT and create an EXTRAVAGANT LIFESTYLES . As a consequence, this circumstance might cause young people to spend more money on their daily budget, which might be the cause of the UNNECESSARY young’s financial burdenS in some situationS. (SPECIFY)

CONTRIBUTE TO SOMETHING  

AS A RESULT: POSITIVE OPINIONS

AS A CONSEQUENCE: NEGATIVE IDEAS

IDEA 2:

Diversity and variety of products displayed in shopping malls -> immersing the young in the circle of products-> lack time for other activities and learning-> lack of skills for the future

Go shopping regularly not only costs money but also wastes time ...

1. Finance burden (IDEA 1)

a wide range of products → Shopping a lot → Need a lot of money → Financial pressures.

Having a wide range of products are well-organized and visually appealing → Tempt people to buy things they do not really need →compulsive shopping can result in spending large sums of money to buy these things → There is an additional financial burden when most youngsters are people who are not IN GOOD FINANCIAL HEALTH because they RELY ON ALTERNATIVE SOURCES OF FINANCIAL SUPPORT like their parentS' budget. -> DEBT

2. Waste time (IDEA 2)

Go to the mall a lot → no time for other things(study, work, do exercise) → waste time.

Nowadays, younger people usually consider shopping as an integral part of life → Young people BECAUSE IT IS AN ADDICTIVE TREND WHICH MAKES YOUNGSTERS Spend a large part of their time in the mall -> leaves no time for other necessary activities such as studying, working and doing exercise -> could reduce the quality of learning AND HAVE negative influenceS on working productivity and physical health.

Idea 1:

Young people always spend many time choosing the ........ items to buy when they are going to shopping malls->Wasting to much time ->  this leaves no time for other activities like do homework, do full-time paid work( E6),… -> they can not make money to contribute to their family  income(E6)

Idea 2:

...........-> Spend to much on shopping can make bad behavior for them -> they don’t  know how to safe their money and they can buy things they do not really need (E28)-> as a consequence, this make young people wasting their money and make them demanding

DEMANDING (ADJ): khó

- Some young people might LACK THE PATIENCE TO CAREFULLY CONSIDER OPTIONS BEFORE [E38] making purchases 

 -> lead to COMPULSIVE SHOPPING [E38] (nếu dừng lại ở đây thì chưa fully extended, tiêu chí task response giảm, đẩy ý càng xa thì strong hơn.)

-> they could get into debt  -> create a financial burden on themselves and their family

2. ENVIRONMENT

- People are becoming materialistic and consumption-focused, WHICH leads to ever-increasing numbers of products

->  results in more waste stemming from manufacturers POLLUTING RIVERS AND OCEANS [E11]) and the depletion of natural resources 

 -> give rise to ENVIRONMENTAL DEGRADATION and pose a threat to natural habitat of other living creatures.