https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957 Made with panache en-us 2017-02-01 12:11:15 UTC 2017-02-01 13:55:10 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150818906 they both had grasping hooks and a lot of details incorporated in both ]]> 2017-02-01 13:39:24 UTC https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150818906 https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150818923 They had facts and then supporting evidence and a grabbing hook. :) Good titles and 
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they had good facts that supported there topic]]> 2017-02-01 13:40:26 UTC https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150819230 https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150819907 I noticed that the samples had really good and specific facts stating their claim. Also they had info about their counterclaim too. They also had good transition words and they where very descriptive.]]> 2017-02-01 13:42:27 UTC https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150819907 https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150820104 i noticed they had great hooks to grab our attention and also had good titles that introduce the topic]]> 2017-02-01 13:43:01 UTC https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150820104 https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150820138 They had lots of useful facts on what to do in the essay and examples that show us what to do]]> 2017-02-01 13:43:05 UTC https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150820138 https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150820337 Both of them (C+D) had an opinion, and they had lots of facts to support their opinion. ]]> 2017-02-01 13:43:36 UTC https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150820337 https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150820421 They had a lot of facts and dialogue.]]> 2017-02-01 13:43:48 UTC https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150820421 https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150820483 they both had useful info for making essay with good intros and conclusion]]> 2017-02-01 13:43:58 UTC https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150820483 https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150821009 they both had good facts and good hooks]]> 2017-02-01 13:45:26 UTC https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150821009 https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150821331 The articles had really good hooks to get me attached to the 2 essays and they had information and facts supporting their claims.]]> 2017-02-01 13:46:18 UTC https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150821331 https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150821844 Stayed on topic the whole essay and had good information to back up there opinion. :P]]> 2017-02-01 13:48:03 UTC https://padlet.com/tkline/2kp3fzaqc957/wish/150821844