Poetry Revision by Mr Moore

POETRY REVISION

mmoore_127 — 2016-06-23 07:41:35 UTC

You are going to work in pairs to find the answers to a variety of questions on the poems we have looked at in the anthology.

The first pair to get an acceptable answer or convince me their answer is correct, will score a point. YOU MUST INCLUDE TEXTUAL EVIDENCE !

The pair with the most points at the end will win Kinder Buenos.

TYPE FAST !

DO NOW

mmoore_127 — 2016-06-23 12:52:30 UTC

Name two poems with family relationships in and explain the relationship.

Question One

mmoore_127 — 2016-06-23 13:27:58 UTC

What is ‘Follower’ about?

WASEEM

2016-06-23 13:28:32 UTC

the follower is about father and son working in a farm.

Daniaal

2016-06-23 13:28:34 UTC

follower is about a father and son spending time together

Aneta

2016-06-23 13:29:57 UTC

1)The poetry about follower is about a son and father working hard on farm.
2) the rhyme scheme is a,b,a,b.
3)the effect of it is that it will make people imagine a farm and a old man working hard.

jean paul

2016-06-23 13:30:33 UTC

Follower is about a son flowing his foot steps as he wants to be a farmer. The control shifts throughout the poem. for instance

2
The rhyme scheme in follower is ABAB. Heaney does this because he wants to change atmosphere in the poem.
3

" His shoulder globed like a full sail strung". The effect of this is that the son is describing the father as strong.
4
Line 23 suggest the son is annoyed at the father because he is saying he is stumbling behind him
5
The extended metaphor in sonnet 29 is that she is keep on mentioning trees.
6
The narrator compares her lover to the tree because trees are strong and big
the ryme scheme is abaca. this is mimikicking the footseps of the farther walking away
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antonio

2016-06-23 13:31:17 UTC

the poem is about the father and his son his son work works in a farm. father wants

the affect is that the father wants always to get lot if money from the people because he wants to be reach the father doesn't like his son because he doesn't works fast Abab

the line that the son gets anoid is the last page

the form is sonnet 29

compers to a tree for example broad leaves
she compare her husband next to a tree because as a wild about a tree

they love each other because she say I think of thee
Walking away is about mean there relation ship os brock

Andrei

2016-06-23 13:31:27 UTC

follower is about father and son
goes a son to work for his father
the affect is that the rhyme scheme in the following is because he wants to be reach the father the from is sonnet 29

compers to a tree for example broad leaves
she compare her huband next to a tree because as a wild about a tree

they love each other because she say l think of thee
walking away is about mean there relation ship os brock

Daniaal

2016-06-23 13:32:28 UTC

The rhyme scheme is about following the pathway to become a farmer in future. also the rhymed scheme includes (a,b,b,a)

WASEEM

2016-06-23 13:33:23 UTC

the rhyme scheme in the follower is (a,b,b,a) and the effect is that so it look like a poem.

Question Two

mmoore_127 — 2016-06-23 13:33:34 UTC

What is the rhyme scheme in ‘Follower’? What is the effect of it?

waseem

2016-06-23 13:39:57 UTC

he uses "like" and the effect of that is to explain more.

Daniaal

2016-06-23 13:40:20 UTC

the simile in follower is talking about While a huge chunk of the poem

Question Three

mmoore_127 — 2016-06-23 13:40:23 UTC

Find the simile in stanza one of ‘Follower’. What is the effect of it?

aneta

2016-06-23 13:42:51 UTC

"it is my father who keeps stumbling behind me, and will not go away" line 23-24

it a metaphor of how to tell how her lover is weak . because the tree is strong however her lover is weak so that was like a metaphor.

waseem*

2016-06-23 13:43:22 UTC

on the line back15 "sometimes on the rode me on his back

Question Four

mmoore_127 — 2016-06-23 13:43:47 UTC

What line suggests that the son is annoyed at the father?

2016-06-23 13:43:50 UTC

Daniaal

on line 15 the son is saying "I stumbled in the hob-bailed waked"

Daniaal

2016-06-23 13:47:01 UTC

sonnet 29

waseem

2016-06-23 13:47:10 UTC

Question Five

mmoore_127 — 2016-06-23 13:47:17 UTC

Which form is ‘I think of thee!’ written in?

waseem

2016-06-23 13:47:26 UTC

love poesonnet 29
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Question Two

mmoore_127 — 2016-06-23 13:48:50 UTC

What is the extended metaphor?

waseem

2016-06-23 13:48:54 UTC

she is comparing his future husband to tree

Jess

2016-06-23 13:49:00 UTC

I think he loves her so much he wants her to stay with him forever. and not let her go anywhere. I am quite sure she felt no pain. He feels like he hasn't caused her pain because he loves her.

Daniaal

2016-06-23 13:49:02 UTC

o my palm tree

2016-06-23 13:51:13 UTC

Daniaal
because she is thinking of a future husband

Question

mmoore_127 — 2016-06-23 13:51:15 UTC

Why do you think the narrator compares her lover to a tree?

waseem

2016-06-23 13:51:15 UTC

because they never seen each other

Daniaal

2016-06-23 13:52:43 UTC

no because she is in a place where she is struggling with her life. also she feels like she is close to her future husband.

waseem

2016-06-23 13:54:38 UTC

yes because last stanza it say I too near him this tells us that the love

Question

mmoore_127 — 2016-06-23 13:54:41 UTC

Do you think that the love is returned ? Why ?

waseem

2016-06-23 13:58:00 UTC

walking away is about leaving his or her love

QUESTION

mmoore_127 — 2016-06-23 13:59:21 UTC

What is ‘Walking Away’ about?

away is about

2016-06-23 14:00:06 UTC

2016-06-23 14:00:13 UTC

walkinfgy is about a boy being watched from eighteen years playing football and growing up

Daniaal

2016-06-23 14:01:37 UTC

father and son relation ship

waseem

2016-06-23 14:01:40 UTC

family love is presented in walking away

QUESTION

mmoore_127 — 2016-06-23 14:01:50 UTC

What relationship / type of love is being presented?

QUESTION

mmoore_127 — 2016-06-23 14:03:22 UTC

Identify the rhyme scheme. What could it be mimicking?

waseem

2016-06-23 14:03:39 UTC

ABBA

Daniaal

2016-06-23 14:04:36 UTC

eighteen years ago, almost to the day.

2016-06-23 14:05:52 UTC

WASSEEM

2016-06-23 14:06:57 UTC

Daniaal

2016-06-23 14:07:06 UTC

yes because she doesn't love him but the speaker loved her. this poem also includes personification because when she flirts with him he kills her with her hair

QUESTION

mmoore_127 — 2016-06-23 14:07:13 UTC

Do you think Prophyria loves the speaker? Does he love her? Explain your view.

Dana x

2016-06-24 08:30:53 UTC

the type of love being presented is romantic love

Andrey

2016-06-24 08:35:59 UTC

this poem is about the men and women one day they was in love but at this time they don't have any relation ship now "for example when we two parted in silence and tears half broken-hearted " pale grew thy cheek and cold colder thy kiss"

Aneta

2016-06-24 08:36:57 UTC

in the poem Follower it all about a father and son working hard on a farm, however the son is still not happy because he's father don't let him what he want to do ,the son doesn't enjoy he's life. the father is trying to teach he's son to work on the farm because the father is old and can't make it, so he teach him because of the tradition that when he will be old he needs to give the farm to he's son

Daniaal

2016-06-24 08:38:10 UTC

Every poem includes moments of romance / relationship . For example walking away. Walking away is a family relationship poem because walking away talks about a father and son relationship. The father watches his son grow up for eighteen years. Another poem that has relationship is Singh song.
Singh song is a poem where Daljiet Nagra talks about his bride. Daljiet Nagra gets married and have a hard time at the shop.
"it is 9 o'clock and he vunt me not to hav a break"!. That is a point because Daljiet Nagra wants to have romance with his new bride.
Another reason for Singh song shows Daljiet Nagra looks like he is still acting like a little child because Daljiet Nagra made a point when he said "He vunt me not to have a break"!

waseem

2016-06-24 08:38:54 UTC

Antonio

2016-06-24 08:39:02 UTC

This poem is about the men and a women one day they was in love but at this time they are parted parted mean they don't have any relation ship now "for example when we two parted in silence and tears half Broken hearted pale grew thy cheek and cold colder kiss"

waseem

2016-06-24 08:40:20 UTC

in walking away poem the narrator talks about his memory in first two stanza.

Aneta

2016-06-24 08:41:09 UTC

Aneta

2016-06-24 08:41:18 UTC

The poem Wa

Aneta

2016-06-24 08:41:19 UTC

The poem Walking away is about a son left the house eighteen years ago, however he's father still can't accept it.

Aneta

2016-06-24 08:43:21 UTC

The poem follower, the line which suggest that the son is annoyed at the father is: "It is my father who keeps stumbling Behind me, and will not go away".

ⓌⒶⓈⒺⒺⓂ

2016-06-24 08:48:12 UTC

follower is about father and son working in a farm.
singh song is about a son who doesn't like to work in his dads shop he goes up to make love with his wife who always make fun of his family. he also uses punglish language. also he doesn't use good English.

Aneta

2016-06-24 08:48:43 UTC

In the poem porphyria's lover the love in it is blind because he's lover is lying that she loves him, I can see this in "murmuring how she loved me" however he loves her, the poem is about a women which done a poem about him either but she says in it that she have natural
sexual thought's

With the poem follower

2016-06-24 08:56:39 UTC

The poem shows the relationship and resemblance between a father and soon at different ages.

The structure of the rhymes in the poem follows a scheme of a,b,a,b.

"like a full sail strung" - this is +a +simile, he show is strength.