English Journal entry

Topic: Describe an event that changed your life forever or make up and describe an event that would change your life forever. 
 
 

It was March of 2017. The spring break was going on and my family had planned a trip to Iceland with another 2 Families who we knew well. It was really exciting because the main reason was to see the Northern lights, or Aurora Borealis.

We were going to different tourist locations and on one of the days we stopped at the roadside to take a picture, but when we were leaving, something was wrong with our car. We stopped again to check and realized that one of my car's tyre was punctured. It was cold outside, so all the Kids were sent inside the other car to keep warm, whereas the parents were working on replacing the car tyre. It was taking quite some time, so the kids kept checking on the parents. At this point It had started snowing and was getting heavier, so we started getting a bit worried. About 30 minutes later, we finally managed to fix the tyre and hurried back to our cars.

But now, it was snowing really heavily, and we knew that if we didn’t rush home as fast as we could (Safely of course), we would have a hard time reaching home. We finally reached home and rushed to our cottage and got changed. The Fathers then Cooked us all dinner while the moms took time to Relax in the indoor pool and the kids played cards.

English Journal entry

Topic: Describe an event that changed your life forever or make up and describe an event that would change your life forever. 
 
 

It was March 2017. The spring break was going on and my family had planned a trip to Iceland with another 2 Families who we knew well. It was exciting because the main reason was to witness the Northern lights, or Aurora Borealis.

While driving on one of the days we, stopped at the roadside to take a picture, but when we were leaving, something was wrong with our car. We stopped again to check and realized that one of my car's tyre was punctured. It was cold outside, so all the kids were sent inside the other car to keep warm, whereas the parents were working on replacing the car tyre. It was taking quite some time, so the kids kept checking on the parents. At this point It had started snowing and was getting heavier, so we started getting a bit worried. About 30 minutes later, we finally managed to fix the tyre and hurried back to our cars.

But now, it was snowing really heavily, and we knew that if we didn’t rush home as fast as we could (Safely of course), we would have a hard time reaching home. We finally reached home and rushed to our cottage and got changed. The Fathers then Cooked us all dinner while the moms took time to Relax in the indoor pool and the kids played cards. We all stayed in the larger cottage overnight, as it was a real struggle to go back to our individual cottage even though it was only a few steps away. The next morning, the snow reached our ankles, so we had a good snowball fight. We also found footsteps of an unknown animal, so we went to investigate. One of the dads did mention an elf, but 8-year-old me knew better.

 Something I did learn was to just live in the moment since I did get fussy because of the snow in my boots; It was cold. But you never know when or if you ever will get the opportunity to get a chance like that, so cherish every moment of your life.

Objective: To further enhance Journal writing skills Lesson 

Outcome: Students will be able to... 

1. Explore the writing techniques. 

2. Demonstrate the skills learnt. 

3. Evaluate and comments on the points 

Topic 

Describe an event that changed your life forever, or make up and describe an event that would change your life forever. 

OR 

Write about a time in your life when you struggled with a choice and made the right one. 

OR 

Describe the perfect day. Put in as many details as you can. Make it a possible day, not a "dream day." 

Based on the brain storm done during the previous lesson kindly structure your introduction and body 1 paragraph. Your Journal Entry has to be 250 words long. ( plan the size of your writing accordingly) 

Plan - https://padlet.com/amanda_p_win/Journal_entry­_2

Task : (Miss I didn’t know which task I should do so I choose this randomly.)

Write about a time in your life when you struggled with a choice and made the right one. 

All my life, I’ve been a outcast. A person away from the world trapped in her own thoughts, sometimes I even ask myself “what’s wrong with me? why don’t I have beauty as the other girls do… or how other girls are so bright and I’m so dimwitted” I’ve lived in this prolonged nightmare for 4 years it made me insecure, invisible, impassionate.

At grade 4.I found freedom. I found friends, I found my sparkle that was missing from my eye. But little did I know that my so-call friends we’re only there for popularity& fame hence want . That was all they wanted. They left me soon as I started to fall... All of them turned they're backs against me , I relived my nightmare once more.

 

i woke up at 9:30 in the morning,waking up from the sounds of birds chirping outside of my window.I then remember that my family and I are going to have a picnic with my family today.i start to change into my clothes,and when I step out of my room I feel a rush of excitement.

 

I go to the kitchen and Start to eat my breakfast quickly and find my family in the car,waiting for me. I almost forgot about my friend’s birthday today!my family said there was a surprise waiting there so I agreed.I and my family went around the park,My sister in the playground,My mom and dad in setting down a picnic,And I was just dozing of by a tree.Then my dad called out me and my sister to come and snack on food.i was just starting to regret missing my friends party when my dad gave me a box.he said to open it when we go back.Then from regret,That feeling turned into joy!

 

When we started the car I was a bit tempted to open the box ,but I resisted that feeling.my mom looked at me and smiled.and when we came home,I opened it and found a Nintendo inside, my dad chuckled and said it was a test of my patience.I was very grateful and patted my self on my back for resisting that feeling.then after a few minutes my friend called.he said he had the worst day ever.he said that the whole party was ruined because of a skunk that sprayed everywhere.i am glad I went with my family on a picnic.

It was a chilly Saturday morning it was the day me and my family were going to Cadburry’s.I was so excited that i could barely sit.I was think of all fun that we would especially the rides.I have heard that they had amazing VR(virtual reality)rides. Also wanted to try a bit of their chocolates.

We were in the car ready to go to Cadburry’s. While we were going me and my brothers started to think of scenes of Cadburry’s which we saw in google.We were both thinking of all the fun we would have in the chocolate factory.We both had a different idea for fun.All my brother thought about was stuffing chocolate down his throat. After that it was a long ride back home but all in all it was a great day.