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Restatement of Thesis Statement: 

1. Anis 

2. Alia
3. Hashilah
4. Idayu
5. Shaheziqa
6. Syahindah
7. Batrisyia

Introductory Paragraph
1.0 Introductory details :
Many people in any age group have discovered health supplements as an effective additional medicine. A health supplement refers to any product used to supplement a diet and enhance the health functions of the human body. The products are designed to increase the daily intake of nutrients, including vitamins and minerals. When the supplements work effectively for many people, it will lead people to buy and consume them frequently.

1.1 Thesis Statement:
There are safe and other significant health benefits, but there are some that pose health dangers, especially if overdosed. The need to acknowledge everything about health supplements is very necessary.

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2.0 Topic sentence: One of the benefit that we can get from health supplement in daily life is it can provide additional nutrients compared to the usual daily consume.

2.1 Supporting detail: Supplements are available with and without a prescription and usually come in pill, powder or liquid form.

2.1.1 Explanation: People take these supplements to make sure they get enough essential nutrients and to maintain or improve their health.

2.1.2 Example: Common nutrients that are found in the health supplement are vitamins, minerals and amino acids.

2.1.2 Concluding paragraph: This shows that health supplement helps people to maintain their nutrition in their body to go through their daily life.

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3.0 Topic sentence: Besides that, health supplement may cause a risk of overdose.

3.1 Supporting detail: Large doses of certain supplement can have adverse effects.

3.1.1 Explanation: When taken in concentrated doses in supplement form, it is easy to take too much that can lead to negative health outcomes.

3.1.2 Example: For example, although Vitamin C has low toxicity, high doses of it can cause gastrointestinal disturbances.

3.1.2 Concluding paragraph: Overdosing can lead to a critical complication so it is important to take supplement properly.

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4.0 Topic sentence: Another danger of health supplements is that it can cause kidney problems.

4.1 Supporting detail: Excessive intake of these supplements daily can increase the calcium levels in blood which can damage the kidney.

4.1.1 Explanation: This is because there are certain health supplements that contain restricted drugs.

4.1.2 Example: For example, people should be cautious when taking Vitamin A, E & K as they are more likely to build up in the kidney.

4.1.2 Concluding paragraph: This harmful risk towards the kidneys may lead to chronic kidney disease for a lifetime.

Concluding Paragraph
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In conclusion, the decision to take health supplements will result in a positive outcome. Taking a health supplement is definitely an effective way to gain nutrients. However, it can also be a bad idea because the supplements may not be suitable for everyone. Side effects of taking supplements may present a risk, such as overdose. Furthermore, it can also cause kidney problems if people consume the supplement without proper intake. Hence, people must consider the positive and negative aspects before deciding to start consuming something.

5.1 Restatement of thesis statement:
Even though the supplement helps improve one's health, it can also have risky consequences for the human body.

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2.0 Topic sentence: One of the effective ways to assist the homeless in our are is donating clothes.

2.1 Supporting details: Donating unused clothes to homeless not only can afford them with new clothes, but we also can reduce our collective carbon footprint.

2.1.2 example: For instance, we can segregate for those clothes that we no longer wear and if these items in in good condition, gather them together and donate them to non-profit organizations that provide housing for the homeless

2.1.2 Concluding Paragraph: By donating clothes to homeless can help an organization because government can't support all of the organization that housing the homeless.

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3.0 Topic sentence:  Also, cooking and serving meals could be one of the ways for us to help the homeless in our area

3.1 Supporting details: One of the constant struggle of homeless is finding enough food to make it through the day. So, when we provide them with food, it would mean the world to them because some of them even go through a whole day without eating.

3.1.2 Example: To be specific, we could gather some of our friends or community member to cook a simple meal in a certain amount and distribute them.

3.1.2 Concluding paragraph: In short, cooking and serving meals to the homeless is such a great gestures from us to ease their burden a bit and give them hope and motivation to make it through the day.

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3.0 Topic sentence: Another effective ways to help the homeless is to donate a bag of groceries per month.

3.1 Supporting details: When the homeless receive a donation of a bag of groceries every month, we can improve their lives.

3.1.2 Example: If we continuously give donation to the homeless, they will appreciate it, and it will give them hope to change their lives without us. They will try to find a way to upgrade their lives.

3.1.2 Conclusion paragraph: In conclusion, a bag of groceries can help many people, especially the homeless, and make them feel happy just like other people. 

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Concluding Detail: In summary, there are a lot of effective ways to assist the homeless people in our area. The amount of homeless people must be decrease because they are also human being. By donating to local shelters, volunteering and showing some positive vibe, we can make their lives more happier. Furthermore, those homeless people are felling pain, confusion and unhappy everyday but with our good intention, we can change their life.

Restatement of Thesis Statement: There are many good ways to assist homeless people near you, like giving them things they need, making food for them, or donating to help them

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= Public toilets play an important role in providing a place for people on trips to relieve themselves. It also serves as a place where they can freshen up on a long trip. However, public toilets are notorious for being unclean. Due to this, people tend to avoid using public toilets.

*Thesis Statement

= *There are many factors that contribute to the uncleanliness of public toilets*

 

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-Topic sentence 

One of the primary factors would be the lack of self-awareness / hygiene that causes the use of toilet neglected. 

-supporting details

they don't have discipline and the attitude needed when using the toilet.

-Example

For example, after defecating, they don't flush the toilet and let the waste float and will cause bad smell and unclean toilet.

-concluding paragraph

This bad attitude of users will cause the toilet to be always dirty and could cause many diseases.

 

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Another factors that contribute to the uncleanliness of public toilets is irregular maintenance from the authorities.

-Supporting detail

Regular maintenance includes replacing supplies such as soap, paper and fixing broken fixtures.

-Explanation 

Public toilets that are not well maintained will cause problems such as smelly toilets, mossy floors, and others.

-Concluding paragraph

In conclusion, regular maintenance must be done to ensure the cleanliness of the toilet is always maintained.

 

 

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-Topic sentence 

Several factors contribute to the uncleanliness of public toilets.

-Supporting detail

Some individuals may engage in vandalism or misuse of public toilets. 

-Example

To illustrate, damaging fixtures, or intentionally making a mess. These behaviours can further contribute to uncleanliness.

-Concluding paragraph

Addressing these factors through regular maintenance, improved facilities, educational initiatives, and increased funding can contribute to cleaner and more sanitary public toilets, enhancing the overall experience for users.

 

In conclusion, the factors that contribute to the uncleanliness of public toilets are diverse and include issues related to maintenance, hygiene awareness by the community, and user behaviours. To deal effectively with this problem, it is important to implement a regular cleaning schedule, raise public awareness of hygiene signs, and encourage responsible usage. By addressing these factors, we can work towards maintaining a cleaner and more pleasant public toilet facilities for everyone.

·        Ayuni

·        Umaira

·        Putri

·        Aina

·        Serina

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Saving and investing are two crucial financial practices that individuals must embrace to secure their financial future.Both are important financial strategies, but they serve different purposes and have distinct characteristics.

Thesis Statement:

Investing and saving is important to secure the future because investing is very suitable for the long term in achieving profits while saving is suitable for the short term in terms of proper money management.

1.0 Topic Sentence:

The comparison in savings and investing money is it has high and low risk.

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Savings money is for a short term goals and being safe from lost that we can use when we needed.

1.1.1 Explanation:

If you save money, you don’t own an assets but you’re essentially leading your money to the bank, at the same time, in investing you own assets like stocks market or real estate. 

1.1.2 Example:

For instance, when you’re saving money you can use it when emergency and you can store it in a secure place. However, when you’re investing, you must buy any assets from a broker and constantly checking the flow chart of currency to maintain the value of returns.

1.1.2 Concluding paragraph:

In short, you can choose either you want to save money or invest money which can give you more benefits.

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Moreover, saving and investing is whether you hold your unspent funds in cash or in some other form.

2.1 Supporting detail:

We should save when we have income but little on no cash on hand.Meanwhile, investing use our cash to buy other assets The goal of investing is to earn profits or income.

2.1.1 Explanation:

Saving is for our future-use and emergency by cases.Living without emergency funds is risky.Investing will help us to increase the potential of other earnings than a savings account.

2.1.2 Example:

Real estate, cryptocurrency and collector's items are the example of investable assets.For saving, setting aside a portion of our allowance or paycheck into savings accounts every month.

2.1.2 Concluding paragraph:

To sum up,saving and investing are both important components of a healthy financial plan.Each approach has its pros and cons and it's important to find the right balance that works for your financial situation and goals.

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On the other hand, the difference between saving and investing is that saving has a low risk, while investing has a high risk in managing finances.

3.1 Supporting Detail:

This is because the value stored will not change, but rather the value used for investment will change depending on the business of the company that is used as a place to invest. 

3.1.1 Explanation:

Saving is an activity where value is put into an organization that is responsible for taking care of it. while investment is one of the transactions that will provide profits.

3.1.2 Example:

For example, the money kept in the bank will not increase unless there is a transaction, while the investment will change when there is a profit.

3.1.2 Concluding paragraph:

Therefore, if you want to manage your finances correctly, you need to know the difference between saving and investing

In conclusion, saving and investing have their own advantages and disadvantages. For example, gaining profit and losing money while running a business Therefore, we need to make wise choices to manage our finances properly so that we do not harm ourselves but instead can give us profit.

Restatement of Thesis Statement:

The act of saving and investing not only has various advantages and benefits, but it also has high and low risks depending on the actions performed by the person.

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Domestic tourism is when residents of a particular country travel to another within that same nation. One of domestic tourism's main benefits is that it covers local travel, which makes commuting simpler and more affordable. It's a terrific way to take a holiday without having to reorganize one's family and job commitments. 

Thesis Statement:

Understanding domestic tourism is one thing, but it's quite another to understand how to promote domestic tourism among Malaysians.

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Topic Sentence:

One of the ways to promote domestic tourism among Malaysians is to promote local attractions.

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By promoting local attractions, Malaysians can learn more about the interesting places in this country and they will be interested to try these local attractions here in Malaysia.

Example:

For instance, influencers can promote local attractions such as Gunung Ledang, Taman Negara, and Tioman Island to the Malaysians.

Concluding paragraph:

This will help boost the domestic tourism among Malaysians when people watch these influencer's videos on social media.

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Topic Sentence:

Besides that, the tourism industry must provide a low-cost budget for local tourists. 

Supporting detail:

If the cost of touring around Malaysia is cost-effective, then it will bring more money to the economy. Tourist money is returned to the local economy as it is spent over and over again

Example:
To be specific, traveling domestically in the same country would cost much less than traveling overseas. Cheaper domestic airfares will definitely be an added boost to the tourism industry. 

Concluding paragraph:

In short, this will make local tourists attracted with the promotions because it will save money and make them feel more interested to travel within the nation.

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 Other than that, one of the best way to promote our country tourism is promoting more trough festival and campaign

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 It will serves as an opportunity for the domestic tourist to learn more about each other religion and culture

Example:

To illustrate, there was a KL Festival which was held in 31st July 2011. 

Concluding paragraph:

 Festivals like that  will make local tourists be more curious about their own country. They can take that as a new knowledge for themselves.

Concluding Paragraph

Concluding details:

 In summary, a more earnest effort from all of us is required to enhance tourism in Malaysia. The development of Malaysia's economy depends on domestic tourism. Although domestic travel has lately gained popularity, the government should continue to work to increase domestic travel in order to ensure sustainability going forward. The government should start a vigorous effort to encourage Malaysians to travel within the country.

Restatement of Thesis Statement:

 This proves that it is very essential to continue promoting domestic tourism among Malaysians.