Remake of Remake of Ideas about feedback by Lynne Murray https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5 en-us 2025-09-08 14:34:50 UTC 2025-09-08 14:52:49 UTC hello@padlet.com https://i.giphy.com/media/v1.Y2lkPTc5MGI3NjExMnpkdm1vbnQ5dWRhMmJnY3N4d3A0aWNxN3E1ZHgyejhnZDZqcmR4NSZlcD12MV9pbnRlcm5hbF9naWZfYnlfaWQmY3Q9cw/hCOYhka0YTrGj8ZCaJ/giphy.gif https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574064419 "rephrase this sentence so its more clear to a reader"

]]> 2025-09-08 14:47:20 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574064419 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574065070 "this sucks"

]]> 2025-09-08 14:47:33 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574065070 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574065535 Double check the grammar throughout your writing.

]]> 2025-09-08 14:47:45 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574065535 "Youre doing it wrong." https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574065600 2025-09-08 14:47:47 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574065600 Helping with the flow of the writing/ switching some paraghraphs around. https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574065678 2025-09-08 14:47:49 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574065678 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574065772 Grammar checking the writer.


]]> 2025-09-08 14:47:52 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574065772 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574066189 Fix it

]]> 2025-09-08 14:48:01 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574066189 " this is bad" https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574066219 2025-09-08 14:48:02 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574066219 Fixing the errors for them https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574066716 2025-09-08 14:48:18 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574066716 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574066733 Not giving reasoning and explaining what is wrong with it.


]]> 2025-09-08 14:48:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574066733 The grammar is terrible. https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574067142 2025-09-08 14:48:31 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574067142 this is good https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574067228 2025-09-08 14:48:32 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574067228 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574067295 highlighting clear organization

]]> 2025-09-08 14:48:35 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574067295 Thats wrong again, do better https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574067299 2025-09-08 14:48:35 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574067299 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574067341 I would recommend this ect.

]]> 2025-09-08 14:48:36 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574067341 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574067477 " I really love how you went into depth and details about your artifact. One way to improve is to avoid making your statements repetitive."

]]> 2025-09-08 14:48:38 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574067477 "You might need to fact check this part." https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574067631 2025-09-08 14:48:42 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574067631 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574068104 this isn't good

]]> 2025-09-08 14:48:57 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574068104 editing the writing with out telling you. https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574068381 2025-09-08 14:49:03 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574068381 I recommend looking over the grammar and spelling mistakes and make sure you are not missing any. https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574068420 2025-09-08 14:49:04 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574068420 lmurray_hpu https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574068840 check, check plus, check minus

]]> 2025-09-08 14:49:19 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574068840 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574068854 when a paragraph could be to long and help break it into smaller pieces

]]> 2025-09-08 14:49:20 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574068854 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574069088 "I see your thought process, this is great, keep going either way that thought and transition to your next one."

]]> 2025-09-08 14:49:25 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574069088 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574069106 "I liked it a lot. It was so cool reading"

]]> 2025-09-08 14:49:26 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574069106 Your essay was never good https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574069175 2025-09-08 14:49:28 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574069175 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574069329 that's incorrect

]]> 2025-09-08 14:49:32 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574069329 Try and look over your work to make sure you have your facts and grammar right. https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574069998 2025-09-08 14:49:44 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574069998 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574070451 Do better next time

]]> 2025-09-08 14:49:52 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574070451 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574072298 too vauge

]]> 2025-09-08 14:50:15 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574072298 not giving a opinion on why you think its good/bad https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574073089 2025-09-08 14:50:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574073089 https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574073739 pointing out problems without explanation

]]> 2025-09-08 14:50:52 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574073739 This is terrible https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574073986 2025-09-08 14:50:56 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574073986 Focus on the main idea and connect it with emotions and true meaning. https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574075357 2025-09-08 14:51:37 UTC https://padlet.com/lmurray_hpu/2i6x6zp1mu0d0ow5/wish/3574075357