https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7 Make your comment on grades for each exemplar below: en-us 2017-06-25 01:27:27 UTC 2017-06-27 03:12:40 UTC hello@padlet.com hansond3 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177358760 2017-06-25 01:48:10 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177358760 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502375 High Merit
 - Engages the audience. Includes visual and verbal components. Includes information/facts.]]> 2017-06-27 02:35:43 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502375 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502379 merit ]]> 2017-06-27 02:35:48 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502379 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502380 Merit 
Has lots of information throughout the video ]]> 2017-06-27 02:35:49 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502380 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502385 Merit 
Visual and verbal components, lots of information/facts 

]]> 2017-06-27 02:35:51 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502385 warrena14 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502400 Merit
it has components that work together to create meaning ]]> 2017-06-27 02:35:58 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502400 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502401 High Merit
because it includes real information on events, experiences, arguments and gives the viewers a different thought/ feeling about how bad the situations were]]> 2017-06-27 02:35:59 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502401 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502406 merit - good visual and verbal components, goof format, creates overall effect of ideas and structure]]> 2017-06-27 02:36:02 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502406 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502431 high merit- uses visual and verbal components]]> 2017-06-27 02:36:37 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502431 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502448 creates an overall effect of the ideas and structure that is reasoned, clear, and relevantto the purpose of the text]]> 2017-06-27 02:37:12 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502448 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502452 merit]]> 2017-06-27 02:37:18 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502452 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502684  achieved - had lost of information but the visual and verbal components did not work together]]> 2017-06-27 02:41:19 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502684 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502734 achieved - not achieved  
it was terrible, 

]]> 2017-06-27 02:42:25 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502734 warrena14 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502767 achieved

]]> 2017-06-27 02:43:11 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502767 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502795 Achieved ]]> 2017-06-27 02:43:34 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502795 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502862 not Achieved - because it didnt flow well and ideas and information did work well together ]]> 2017-06-27 02:44:22 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502862 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502882 Achieved - Had a few good facts but needed to have more structured better ]]> 2017-06-27 02:44:43 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502882 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502886 Achieved - Had a good amount of facts, included some visual components. Wasn't structured good tho.

]]> 2017-06-27 02:44:45 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502886 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502895 Achieved 
Had lots of information but it didn't all work together ]]> 2017-06-27 02:45:01 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502895 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502904 drugs are fun so are guns]]> 2017-06-27 02:45:05 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502904 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502944 Achieved ]]> 2017-06-27 02:45:47 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177502944 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503154 Excellence
- Informative language
- Music and photos come together to make a deeper meaning
-]]> 2017-06-27 02:50:09 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503154 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503195 Merit
Graphic photos
Uses good information
Music choice was good
Engages audience]]> 2017-06-27 02:50:56 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503195 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503197 n/a

]]> 2017-06-27 02:50:58 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503197 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503198 M -
good music that suites it
lots of photos and writing  ]]> 2017-06-27 02:50:59 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503198 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503250 merit
Good editing, lots of facts, music went well with the video. ]]> 2017-06-27 02:52:08 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503250 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503326 2017-06-27 02:53:22 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503326 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503383 2017-06-27 02:54:09 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503383 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503390 high merit - uses visual with good information to it, matches music ]]> 2017-06-27 02:54:13 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503390 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503395 High merit 
Great hook at the end making you rethink your current ideas or bias on the topic. matches pace with music to emphasise how much death there was.]]> 2017-06-27 02:54:16 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503395 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503409 high merit
uses good music
strong and clear points 
lots of photos]]> 2017-06-27 02:54:37 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503409 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503420 2017-06-27 02:54:46 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503420 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503441 A - 
music does not suit 
little words ]]> 2017-06-27 02:55:01 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503441 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503446 high merit 
-graphics 
-good music choice
- paced to emphasises
-think the font could be changed]]> 2017-06-27 02:55:06 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503446 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503483 Merit]]> 2017-06-27 02:55:38 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503483 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503508 Good use of music
Good information but doesn't work well together

]]> 2017-06-27 02:56:16 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503508 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503529 2017-06-27 02:56:43 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503529 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503570 Achieved 
uses the contrast of the music against the visual to emphasise the point.]]> 2017-06-27 02:57:20 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503570 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503576 its dumb and silly ]]> 2017-06-27 02:57:24 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503576 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503624 Achieved, all over the place in some parts but simple answers]]> 2017-06-27 02:58:05 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503624 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503658 (not achieved)
font is hard to understand
music is distracting 
lots of information ]]> 2017-06-27 02:58:23 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503658 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503743 excellence ]]> 2017-06-27 02:59:33 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503743 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503754 Achieved - Wasn't structured well enough, it didn't have a deeper understanding ]]> 2017-06-27 02:59:44 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503754 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503756 M - ]]> 2017-06-27 02:59:47 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503756 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503789 Excellence
good visual
clear writing

]]> 2017-06-27 03:00:14 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503789 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503794 Achieved]]> 2017-06-27 03:00:17 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503794 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503836 high meritmmn bmnb mnb nmnb mnb mj b]]> 2017-06-27 03:01:07 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503836 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503847 This picture smells funny 

]]> 2017-06-27 03:01:16 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503847 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503849 Merit ]]> 2017-06-27 03:01:16 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503849 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503850 Merit]]> 2017-06-27 03:01:17 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503850 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503860 High merit - because used visual and verbal components, good information, builds on ideas, creates an overall effect and has great stucture]]> 2017-06-27 03:01:28 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503860 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503873 2017-06-27 03:01:43 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503873 warrena14 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503903 high achieved -  low merit 
because it had not clear meaning but was displayed clearly ]]> 2017-06-27 03:02:06 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503903 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503906 Merit ]]> 2017-06-27 03:02:08 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503906 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503920 merit 
juxtaposed known pop song lyrics with a dark meaning. ]]> 2017-06-27 03:02:17 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503920 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503937 Merit ]]> 2017-06-27 03:02:28 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503937 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503951 2017-06-27 03:02:45 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503951 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503962 merit]]> 2017-06-27 03:02:55 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503962 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503979 2017-06-27 03:03:12 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503979 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503998 Merit]]> 2017-06-27 03:03:30 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177503998 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504079 Merit
Good structure but not clear meaning of what the whole thing is about.
A bit boring]]> 2017-06-27 03:04:11 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504079 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504134 merit ]]> 2017-06-27 03:04:35 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504134 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504140 merit]]> 2017-06-27 03:04:40 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504140 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504187 Y'all can't handle this
Y'all don't know what's about to happen baby
Team 10
Los Angeles, Cali boy
But I'm from Ohio though, white boy]]> 2017-06-27 03:05:10 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504187 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504215 2017-06-27 03:05:36 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504215 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504427 Achieved 
well edited but the overall message just boils down to be a good person with no real substance or message]]> 2017-06-27 03:08:25 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504427 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504433 2017-06-27 03:08:32 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504433 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504443 excellence ]]> 2017-06-27 03:08:38 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504443 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504456 Achieved
- ]]> 2017-06-27 03:08:48 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504456 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504467 merit ]]> 2017-06-27 03:08:55 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504467 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504510 Merit

]]> 2017-06-27 03:09:32 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504510 https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504626 ...........................................................................................................................................God Church....................]]> 2017-06-27 03:11:38 UTC https://padlet.com/hansond3/2i3pvx6582k7/wish/177504626