The end of the story 2B2 by marisabel sanchez egues

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marisasancheze — 2020-09-09 13:21:19 UTC

Juanse Granda

2020-09-09 13:28:44 UTC

Maybe the letter could have been sent by the girl he liked and obviously she also likes him.
After school he invited her to go out to the movies, and as the days went by he told her that if she wants to be his girlfriend and she accepted.
after she agreed to be his girlfriend they lasted a long time.

Happy ending.  Well done!!
Just remember to use always the same tense.

Daniel Abad

2020-09-09 13:28:57 UTC

At the end of the story the little guy decides to say his best friend that he loves her but when he did that she let him know her sexual orientation, he cries a lot and told that at his brother, he didn't listen him, but the guy decides find the girl who put the paper in his locker and finally told her that he loves her.

Some ideas are close to the real ending. Just be aware to usr the past to talk about a story.

David Célleri

2020-09-09 13:29:07 UTC

The next day he bought 1 red rose and some chocolates. He aproached Maddie and told her that he loved her, obiusly he got ignored, Maddie took the chocolates with her, because she loved chocolates, but she leaved the boy and the rose alone in the middle of the school, since there the boy and the girl never talked again in the eternity, the boy was so sad that married the nerd girl.

ha ha ha so sad... Just pay attention to all the third person verbs.

Juan José Cabrera

2020-09-09 13:29:15 UTC

The boy who appears at the end just played a joke on him, making him think that it was a girl who put the letter.

Good point of view but you had to be more explicit since 60 words were required and there are just 25.

david velez

2020-09-09 13:29:21 UTC

When the boy went to see the girl, the boyfriend defended her and he left scared after the boy left, the girl realized that she liked him more than her boyfriend, so she went to his house and they became boyfriends
and they realized that they love each other a lot and the years passed and they continued being boyfriends then husbands and then they had children

Happy ending... Just remember that they became a couple, not bofriends.

Pedro Carrasco

2020-09-09 13:32:17 UTC

They fought and each one separated and he went to live in another part because they fought and after very time, they met and became friends again

Too short, there are not 60 words, why did they fight, lack of clarity. Less than the half of the assignment.

Ariel Idrovo

2020-09-09 13:33:23 UTC

Maddie syas that she not write the letter and Maddie´s boyfriend got angry and pushed Jim, after that a fight start and unluckly Jim dies after a strong kick on the head and a lot of punches on the body. Maddie´s boyfriend go to jail during 23 years, durring the trial Maddie accept that she wrote the letter. Nobody expected that so that really hearts Maddie´s boyfriend and all he´s friends. It was a dark day to Jim´s family.

Neither I expected such a tragedy... ha ha ha Pay attention to grammar tenses and spelling.

Flavia Aguilar

2020-09-09 13:34:29 UTC

Maddie denies that she wrote the letter, but later that night Adam meets Hanna and she asks him out, everything was going well, they started dating for weeks and Adam was sure that Hanna was the one that wrote the letter, but then he realized that he actually liked Maddie and was wrong about Hanna all the time, so he went to see Maddie and they both confessed what they felt.

Well done!!

Camila Valencia

camimaferc — 2020-09-09 13:34:33 UTC

the boy go to talk with his best friend to tell why she doesn't tell him her feelings, after they talk about she tell him that she really had feelings with him and she doesn't now how to say is that reason for she wrote the note, the end is that they are dating now , after 1 week he ask she if she want ti be his girlfriend

Repeated!!

Samuel Calderón

2020-09-09 13:34:41 UTC

He gets punched so hard he starts hallucinating, he has to go to the hospital and it's revealed he has a hematoma, everybody that had a crush on him leaves him after it's revealed that he cant form new memories, and his IQ is now 20 points lower than it used to be. His family is trapped in crippling debt from the hospital bills, but at least he's still alive.

A video of the heartbreaking moment of his cerebral deformation is underneath:

OMG what a tragedy!! Different point of view.

Daniela Moreno

2020-09-09 13:35:21 UTC

As Jim aproached Maddie, one of his friends stands up in front of her, claiming to be her boyfriend, which leaves him in a state of confussion, so he goes back to his other friend´s home and explains the situation, to what his friend replies with -¨ It´s better for you to stay single, since you can´t seem to appreciate anyone, you´ve rejected the girl that has liked you for a long time because she´s not popular, and that says a lot about you, so I think you should get out there when you realize that not everything is appearance¨

Cool ending, good job!!

Juan Martín Pozo

2020-09-09 13:35:44 UTC

At the end of the story Maddie's friends fight with Jimmy causing a problem, in the end he gets angry with his Best friend and goes with the girl he does not know but who seems pretty to him.

Finally the girl and jimmy become boyfriends causing his best friend to get angry and at that moment their best friend relationship ends.

New point of view. Just remeber boyfriend and girlfriend or a couple.

Ramaya Juca

2020-09-09 13:36:38 UTC

His best friend and Jim told him that they are dating now, and she tell him that she didnt write that letter, he was confused and very disappointed because he realized he liked his best friend and now it's too late, after a week he decides to confes his love to Maddie, At first she is confused by what he told her but then she promises to think about what she is going to do.

Good job!! Don't forget the third person.

Camila Bernal

2020-09-09 13:42:09 UTC

He finally arrives to talk to his best friend Maddie and asks her why didn't she tell him she had feelings for him in person instead of a note, she then stands up very confused and asks him what was he talking about, he continues to explain about the note but then a boy stands up in front of Maddie and tells him to stop bothering her because she is his girlfriend. Maddie then tells him that she didn't write the note and that it was probably someone else.

Could have been that way..Good job!!

Matias Guillen

2020-09-09 13:42:44 UTC

He is gona find the correct woman and when he is about to kiss her he will wake up and notice that all was a dream and he have no legs and his famili have changed him whit a dog called musty and the doctors will give him a robotic legs and then he will win the soccer mundial

I am trying to put everything together...too many ideas for just one ending. Some spelling mistakes.

Rafaela Ochoa

2020-09-09 13:42:52 UTC

at that moment his best friend says someone can explain what is happening because i do not understand what this is , what s note i have not written any note and he tells him i am going to explain to you i have to talk to him first to see what happens because i am confused at the moment you speak the tells him that because he wrote the note thet he does not understand if it is a joke or something that he explains then. he tells him that it was not a joke and he says seriously forgive me but i like someone else i like my best friends.

Great, very close from the real story!!

Paulina Gonzalez

2020-09-09 13:42:55 UTC

In the end, maybe he decided to see her as a super close friend almost like a best friend, he decided to maybe talk and say what he felt for Maddie but he was not sure of his feelings at that time so he preferred not to say anything and continue as good friends until he was able to understand what he was feeling.

Good point!! Well done

Joaquín Vélez

2020-09-09 13:43:36 UTC

His best friend was not the person who had a crush on the boy, later the boy and the popular girl met in the backyard and the girl confesses her love, the guy couldn't believe that, the most popular girl with a ugly guy, nobody believed him until they saw that they were kissing, they think that the girl had bad intentions, and they were right. The girl belonged to the mafia and kidnapped the boy and sold his organs.

ha ha ha what a tragedy!! different ending than usual. Just be aware of the past tense.

Nicolas Lopez

nicolopezv14 — 2020-09-09 13:44:03 UTC

The guy decides to be the boyfriend of the girl who sent him the note and he fights with his friend

Too short your ending, you needed more details, at least 60 words, there are just 21.

2020-09-09 13:47:22 UTC

Juan Camilo rangel

After the confessions of the other boy , Jim started laughing because he though it was a joke , but it wasn’t , the other guy really liked jim and when Jim saw that it wasn’t a joke he started running and crying because he was in love with his best friend.

The next day Jim went to his best friends house and tell her that he love her , and his best friend told him that she loves him too , and they were the perfect couple .

Concrete story, well done. Just pay attention to the third person.

THE END

Camila Valencia

camimaferc — 2020-09-09 13:47:23 UTC

the boy go to talk to his best friend to tell why she doesn't say about his feelings, and why she wrote the note and she doesn't tell in person, then the boys say that he has the same feelings with she, now they are dating, the boy plan is after a few weeks dating she is asking if she want to be his girlfriend, passing the weeks the boy ask she and she said yes now they are in love.

Good ending, don't forget the third person.

Pablo Armijos

2020-09-09 13:47:57 UTC

When the boy goes to ask about the note that someone left him, the other boy tells him that it was a joke that he did. And the popular girl feels sorry so it turns out that she includes her group of friends. But the boy realizes that all this time he liked his best friend and confides it to her and everyone is happy forever.

Good point of view!!mWell done!!

Pablo Armijos

2020-09-09 13:49:10 UTC

When the boy goes to ask about the note they left him, the other boy tells him that it was a joke that he did. And the popular girl feels sorry so it turns out that she includes her group of friends. But the boy realizes that all this time he liked his best friend and confides it to her and everyone is happy forever.

Repeated!!

Emilia Cordero

2020-09-09 13:50:52 UTC

Adam runs to talk to Maddie, and he asks her if she wrote those letters and she tells him that it wasn't her, and they both think who might have written the letters, and Maddie tells him that she heard a friend talk about some letters but now she knows who the letters were for, Maddie tells him that she never expected that the letters were for him so that she never told him anything.

Unespected ending!! Well done!!

Finally History Adrian Abril

2020-09-09 13:53:13 UTC

Her friend tells her to leave because her never knew how to value her and he tells her that he really needs to talk to her, but she didn't want to because she was talking to another boy, but in the end she convinces him to talk then when they talk he ends telling her that he has been in love with her since third grade and that he never realized until that day that she felt she was losing him and she told him that she felt the same and they ended up being together.

Cool story! Good job!!

Agustin Montero

2020-09-10 16:17:20 UTC