Kensie L. Google Sites Peer Feedback 2020 - 2021 by Kensie L

Snapshot

27kvelizacuna — 2021-01-11 17:02:44 UTC

I loved the way you included inner thoughts I feel like you really expressed what you were going trough and I liked how you described the butterflies in your stomach, it showed your anxiety . I also enjoyed the way you explained why you started dancing. Something I think you can improve on is describing the people who were there, but overall It’s a lovely writing piece

Persuasive Essay

27jmazzola1 — 2021-05-11 15:55:03 UTC

Hi Kenzie! Your essay was so good!! I absolutely loved your hook! I would’ve never thought of that scene myself! It was so well described, so creative, and so well written! Also, the way you wrote your second body paragraph warrant was incredible! The scene was so well thought out, and you used so many great descriptive words! I really felt like I could see the girl! I honestly couldn’t find a wish for you, your essay was so amazing, and perfectly written!!

- Jules <3

Creative writing piece

27bcolon1 — 2021-06-18 18:32:22 UTC

Hi Kenzie ! I really adored your story. My first star is how much details you put into the slideshow and i can really tell you had fun with it. My next star is how much time and effort you put into it and you might be questioning how i know well i know, and here’s how. You where constantly going back and forth with the speaker and characters talking back and forth and that takes a long long time and i can tell you had fun with it. My one wish is if you made it shorter beacsue there where parts that where so good i wanted you to stop there but overall i adored you peice great job Kenzie! 😊

- Brielle ✨💕