Presentation feedback by Michael Wheeler https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0 en-us 2021-10-05 02:26:06 UTC 2021-10-05 04:03:03 UTC hello@padlet.com 2 scicommwheeler https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791643918 Harnessing the power of computational biology to optimise cancer treatment ]]> 2021-10-05 03:32:47 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791643918 3 scicommwheeler https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791644770 Casting shadows and slowing fish: Can the shadows cast by human-made structures affect our fish species? ]]> 2021-10-05 03:33:08 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791644770 4 scicommwheeler https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791645949 Developing a new drug for the centuries old fight against cancer ]]> 2021-10-05 03:33:33 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791645949 5 scicommwheeler https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791646956 Carbon capture and storage: Developing a new technology in the quest to reach net zero carbon emissions ]]> 2021-10-05 03:33:52 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791646956 6 scicommwheeler https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791647647 A gut feeling: the link between gut bacteria and schizophrenia ]]> 2021-10-05 03:34:06 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791647647 2 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791678887 Intonation when speaking was super enthusiastic and engaging - not at all monotone or boring! Also made good eye contact while speaking, even through zoom. ]]> 2021-10-05 03:47:04 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791678887 2. No eye contact https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791679222 2021-10-05 03:47:13 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791679222 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791679920 2. Good opening hook, maybe explain terminal vs chronic?, rhetorical questions help engage with audience ]]> 2021-10-05 03:47:31 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791679920 2: Harnessing power comp bio cancer https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791680074 - good rhetorical question use for engagement 
- straight forward sentences, could be a bit more conversational in tone
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]]> 2021-10-05 03:47:35 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791680074 2 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791680632 Logical flow. Started with problem and introduced solution. More than simply stating facts]]> 2021-10-05 03:47:50 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791680632 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791680938 2. The intro start with a hook question, then state the problem and the potential solution clearly. The logic is solid.]]> 2021-10-05 03:47:59 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791680938 2 - opening with the rhetorical question was great - especially with such an important topic, it made for an instantly engaging opening. Enthusiasm was on point as well! https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791682381 2021-10-05 03:48:37 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791682381 2 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791682412 Clear and nice starting sentence, but lack of body language]]> 2021-10-05 03:48:38 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791682412 2. https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791682467 Good job! I feel like you could make your hook a little more engaging. Spend some time directly interacting with the audience. The information you presented was really good, but maybe at the start you could simplify the terms a little.]]> 2021-10-05 03:48:40 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791682467 3: https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791687297 - reach out to audience - personalise experience
- personalise the experience of fish in mane made environment
- really good use of swapping between people 
Really great!!!]]> 2021-10-05 03:50:50 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791687297 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791687617 3. Good eye contact, volume and pace (touch slower maybe). Very enthusiastic, great job]]> 2021-10-05 03:50:59 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791687617 3 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791687949 logic is good, nice story]]> 2021-10-05 03:51:09 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791687949 3. Logical flow with excellent story that related well to the audience https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791688027 2021-10-05 03:51:11 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791688027 3. https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791688679 Nice engaging start. Good question at the start]]> 2021-10-05 03:51:30 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791688679 3 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791689654 A great semi-rhetorical question at the start. The pace was not too fast and exceptionally engaging. 

]]> 2021-10-05 03:51:57 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791689654 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791689946 3. speakers were engaging, really liked how they took turns to present in a fast paced bu not rushed manner. Asking me to empathise with a fish was an unexpected but very effective technique!  ]]> 2021-10-05 03:52:05 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791689946 3. It was a good idea to have to presentation in the format of a conversation between group members which made it naturally conversational in nature. The language was easy to understand too. https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791690602 2021-10-05 03:52:24 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791690602 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791694295 4. Logical flow, great introduction to blood cancer moving onto new drug, flows well]]> 2021-10-05 03:54:10 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791694295 4: drug cancer https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791694377 - good use of eye contact
- good emphasis and tone in speaking
- personalise to self and state interest in research
Great job!]]> 2021-10-05 03:54:12 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791694377 4 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791694728 a little bit of unnecessary info but the talk is easy to follow ]]> 2021-10-05 03:54:23 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791694728 4. https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791695741 Good pacing. Mentioning that "you're proud of being at unimelb" shows enthusiasm for the project as well.]]> 2021-10-05 03:54:53 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791695741 4. https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791696112 Start in a very creative way, and a brilliant hook, mixed with some humor. Great job at keeping the audiences engaged.]]> 2021-10-05 03:55:06 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791696112 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791696159 4.Good eye contact and pace! I felt like we were having a  conversation and you were enlightening me on this super interesting topic!

]]> 2021-10-05 03:55:07 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791696159 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791696459 4. Was a great flow for an opening - gave the audience something to hook onto with the spacecraft comment before exploring more about how the drug works and is applicable]]> 2021-10-05 03:55:17 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791696459 4 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791696798 Words not too complicated, technical words explained

]]> 2021-10-05 03:55:27 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791696798 4 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791697246 Choice of language was super engaging and liked that we almost followed a story with you description of the project! Also loved the relation to the drug sounding like some NASA invention!]]> 2021-10-05 03:55:39 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791697246 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791697602 4. A great level of enthusiasm; good control of intonation and pace. A bit more body language and eye contact would be great]]> 2021-10-05 03:55:50 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791697602 4. The start was engaging by presenting it as a TV show, good way to introduce the technical term as well by acknowledging it sounds like a spaceship. https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791698377 2021-10-05 03:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791698377 5: carbon capture + storage https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791702640 - logical path between concepts
- tells story of the carbon dioxide passing between stages of process, really good!]]> 2021-10-05 03:57:58 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791702640 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791703077 5. No technical terms used but still took time to explain terms like carbon capture, really helps audience understand your topic, good job!

]]> 2021-10-05 03:58:08 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791703077 5 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791703260 really good hook in the beginning - I was immediately interested in the research that you claimed was going to 'save the world'. good work!]]> 2021-10-05 03:58:13 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791703260 5 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791703470 Great hook! Engaging tone]]> 2021-10-05 03:58:20 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791703470 5. https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791703835 Logical link between the start and methodology of the project]]> 2021-10-05 03:58:30 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791703835 5 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791703861 Clear language, great pace, good eye contact. Speakers sounds well informed of the project and shows interest. ]]> 2021-10-05 03:58:31 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791703861 5. Good tone of voice, made the presentation engaging https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791704278 2021-10-05 03:58:44 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791704278 5. Great hand gestures that pulled me in https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791704502 2021-10-05 03:58:51 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791704502 5. https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791704911 Great job! The information flowed really well and were organised in a way that made the concept easy to understand!]]> 2021-10-05 03:59:03 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791704911 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791704928 5. Great logic. Introduced the problem and proposed a solution]]> 2021-10-05 03:59:04 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791704928 6 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791708254 Spoke clearly, good pace]]> 2021-10-05 04:00:44 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791708254 6 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791708382 talked at a really slow & clear speed - I was able to really hear and process every word. Also super engaging language - good job relating to your audience!]]> 2021-10-05 04:00:47 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791708382 6 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791708447 Clear logic flow with a hook that can be related by all of us. ]]> 2021-10-05 04:00:50 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791708447 6 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791708670 Nice start to relate it to our age and life, then introduce the topic]]> 2021-10-05 04:00:57 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791708670 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791708697 6. Great choice of language - words like "add" and "take away" I find easier to remember and grab onto than "positive impacts and negative impacts"]]> 2021-10-05 04:00:58 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791708697 6. https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791709045 Easy to understand and conversational language.]]> 2021-10-05 04:01:09 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791709045 6. https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791709074 Amazing! No major technical terms and was easy to understand!]]> 2021-10-05 04:01:10 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791709074 6. Good pace with clear logic and volume https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791709093 2021-10-05 04:01:11 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791709093 6. Flow was logical, and the beginning was relatable and made it more than just sharing facts. https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791709520 2021-10-05 04:01:24 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791709520 https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791712807 6. Explained a complex disease with simple terms. Loved the part where you mentioned what schizophrenia adds and takes]]> 2021-10-05 04:03:03 UTC https://padlet.com/scicommwheeler/2emza6gvzgwj3xd0/wish/1791712807