https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b Why is this memo not effective? en-us 2017-06-16 09:28:19 UTC 2025-09-28 05:57:51 UTC hello@padlet.com mkalkhove https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176646694 2017-06-16 09:30:13 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176646694 https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176664829 its not summarized
does not explain the warranty
nothing relating to used tools
memo does not show who it is from
grammar errors
its bis towards people who take care of their tools
repeats same thing but in different words]]> 2017-06-16 13:19:47 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176664829 https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176664872 - incorrect spelling
- run on sentences
- poor choice of wording
- incoherent
- not courteous in any way what so ever, abrupt and all over the place
- not complete, bounces around a lot from topic to topic
- Seems to answer or talk about 89238974 questions and topics in one sentence ]]> 2017-06-16 13:20:06 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176664872 https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176664888 - poor formatting, no separation/white space
- spelling/grammar errors
- no clear recipient
- rambling, not clear 
- "I find..."/ "I think..." statements
- doesn't flow well
-doesn't have a professional tone
-no referencing
-"you"/"they" - unclear who they are talking about]]> 2017-06-16 13:20:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176664888 https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176664965 -doesn't say what kind of warranty that is offered or what tool they are covering
-No formatting, everything is to tight, paragraphs would be better
-Repeats a lot of the information 
-Doesn't specify the type of abuse
-Doesn't specify exactly how you can get the tool repaired 
-constantly re-reading it still not understanding 
-no thank you or final salutation
-Jumps tenses and who is being addressed ]]> 2017-06-16 13:20:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176664965 https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665042 you don't know who is being addressed to, or who is sending it]]> 2017-06-16 13:21:29 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665042 https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665070 It does not say who it's from. There are grammar and punctuation mistakes. The structure of the memo is  not adequate. It should be split up into header, summary, his/her opinion, conclusion and then signed. The ideas are not organized in a logical order. The tools and warranty are not specified. There is little to no consideration for the reader.]]> 2017-06-16 13:21:48 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665070 https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665140 - Sentences  are too long
- Poor format
- No closure, no signature  
- Does not say who it is from 
- Does not explain the kind of warranty 
- Mostly personal opinions 
- Repetition 
- Grammar 
- Not clear, Confusing 

]]> 2017-06-16 13:22:22 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665140 https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665201 -Rambles on.
- Not spaced.
- Doesn't talk about what specific too.
- get lost reading it.
- Doesn't get to the point.
- Mentions extra information .
- No sign off.]]> 2017-06-16 13:22:53 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665201 https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665262 -It Does not say who its from
-The date has an error
-They are not specific enough about what tools have this warranty
-Grammar error 
-The font is very small and hard to read 
-Unprofessional
-They Start too quick, not giving the reader enough information on who snap-on is.
-They referred to them self by using the word "I" 
-No signature ]]> 2017-06-16 13:23:18 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665262 https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665266 grammar, poor format, unrelated informatiom


CHARLES]]> 2017-06-16 13:23:20 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665266 https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665375 - The text structure is incorrect
- It is very hard to follow thru and understand the information he gives
- He should give clear steps to follow in order
- The paragraph almost consists of opinions mixed with facts 
- The memo should be easy to read, and straight to the point ]]> 2017-06-16 13:24:16 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665375 https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665729 - Does not say
- who it's from
- It's not clear 
- Grammer spelling
- Not clear  information
- It' not good writing Format Memo 


]]> 2017-06-16 13:27:12 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665729 https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665806 Incomplete - doesn't say Who's it from
Typo error - date is messed up
Grammer - the first sentence to way too long. Run-on sentence.


]]> 2017-06-16 13:28:00 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176665806 https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176666222 - missing dash in the date
- grammar mistakes
- punctuation
- opening sentence is too long
- Not well written]]> 2017-06-16 13:31:10 UTC https://padlet.com/mkalkhove/2deo1w1opm6b/wish/176666222