Lesson 3- Email Writing by Phuong Thao Vu https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp Revise the memo below to make it more “readable”. Make sure you apply the 4 Cs (Consider, Clarity, Concise, Completeness). en-us 2021-06-16 10:48:41 UTC 2026-02-25 05:33:58 UTC hello@padlet.com Cancellation of Year End Party thao_vu1 https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609700590 It is with great regret that the Year End Party has been cancelled. Due to our present reorganization,
 President John K. Hoff and other senior management have decided that the company’s fund could not financially justify such an event at this time.
 Since these events are so important for the morale of the company, management is hoping to be in a better position to provide its employees with a well-deserved Christmas party. And with everyone’s help, management knows we will be able to celebrate the holidays like never before.
 Mr. Hoff thanks you for making this great sacrafice during the company’s hard times, In making these types of sacrafices, you are helping to ensure a better future for all. Watch for exciting news regarding this year’s Christmas party in our monthly news letter, you can make it happen.

 

]]> 2021-06-16 10:50:27 UTC https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609700590 Thu https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609929336 [For your information] Cancellation this year end party due to take priority on reogarnization.

We are so sorry that this year end party has been cancelled. As we know, we are currently too busy for reorganization and we need to hit the objectives for this.

Mr. John K. Hoff - a company president and senior managers decided that we should postpone this event to have more investment on the reorganizaion now. The managers undestand that you will should keep the memory of 1 yeas working, instead of year end party, i hope you will be happy with a warm christmas party which HR team are going to prepare for you.

Please input the Gform for accepting this event, so we can keep you updated with the newest updated about the up coming X-mas party.]]> 2021-06-16 13:18:38 UTC https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609929336 Tien Anh https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609929341 [Year End Party] Cancellation announcement

We would like to inform that Year End Party has been cancelled due to our present reorganization lead to company’s fund could not financially justify such an event now.
Management is hoping to be in a better position to provide its employees with a well-deserved Christmas party. 
Watch for exciting news regarding this year’s Christmas party in our monthly news letter, you can make it happen.]]> 2021-06-16 13:18:38 UTC https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609929341 Nia https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609929570 Cancellation of Year End Party 

It is with regret that even though the YEP is very important, we still has to cancel it this year due to financial issue. 

Instead, Mr. Hoff and our Management Team will provide a well-deserved Christmas party like never before as a compensation and to thank you for making this great sacrifice to our better future. We will keep you posted in monthly news letter.  

]]> 2021-06-16 13:18:44 UTC https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609929570 Iza https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609931133 We regret to inform you that we will cancel the Year End Party. Because of our financial justification situation, we will provide to our employees the well-deserved Christmas party that we have never had before.
On behalf of Mr.  ]]> 2021-06-16 13:19:22 UTC https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609931133 https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609931351 Binh (done)

[Annoucement] Cancellation of Year End Party

We regret to inform you that we have to cancel the Year End Party. Due to our present re-organization, top managements have decided that the company cannot afford the party's expense.

We understood that these events can help boosting the morale of the company, management would like to provider our staffs with a well-deserved Chrismast party. They know that with everyone's help, we will have a party like never before.

Our president hope that you would sympathize with the company during this hard times. By doing so, you are helping to ensure a better future for all. Please watch out for exciting news regarding this year's Chrismast party in our upcoming monthly news letter. You can make it happen!!]]> 2021-06-16 13:19:27 UTC https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609931351 Nhung https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609933766 Please be informed that the we will replace the Year End Party by the Christmas party due to the company's financial situation

Thanks to Mr. Hoff's for your sacrafice to ensure a better future for all. Watch for exciting news regarding this year’s Christmas party in our monthly news letter, you can make it happen.

]]> 2021-06-16 13:20:26 UTC https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609933766 Hương https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609933975 Cancellation of Year End Party
With regret, President John K. Hoff and management that we now could not afford such the Year End Party after reorganization
 Management hopes to provide our employees with a well-deserved Christmas party, so we will be able to celebrate the holidays like never before since these events are important for the morale of the company
During our hard times, Mr. Hoff thanks you for making this great sacrifice, in which, you are helping to ensure a better future for all. Watch for exciting news regarding this year’s Christmas party in our monthly newsletter.
 



 

]]> 2021-06-16 13:20:32 UTC https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609933975 Christmas Party Annoucement xuanthanhcao https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609934267
Due to financial problem, we are regret to inform you that the Year End Party has been cancelled
However, our management team would like to celebrate Christmas Party instead for employees
The Director appreciates this great sacrafice, you are helping to ensure a better future for all. 
Watch for exciting news regarding this year’s Christmas party in our monthly news letter, you can make it happen.

Thanks for your understanding]]> 2021-06-16 13:20:40 UTC https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609934267 An thienandoantrung https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609934341 [Announcement] Cancellation of Year End Party

Hi Employees,
We regret to announce that the Year End Party has been cancelled. Due to present reorganization, President John K. Hoff and our management have decided that the company’s fund could not justify such an event at this time.
Since the event is so important for the company morale, management hopes to be in better position and provide our employees with a well-deserved Christmas party. And with everyone’s help, management knows we will be able to celebrate the holidays like never before.
 Mr. Hoff thanks you for making this great sacrafice during the company’s hard times, In making these types of sacrafices, you are helping to ensure a better future for all. Watch for exciting news regarding this year’s Christmas party in our monthly news letter, you can make it happen.
]]> 2021-06-16 13:20:42 UTC https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609934341 Han ngochannguyenthuy https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609935242 [Annoucement] Replace year end party with Christmas Party
We are sorry to announce that the Year End Party has been cancelled due to budget constraint, as decided by our management team.
To compensate & motivate staffs during Holiday, we would like to hold a big Christmas party instead
Thanks Mr Hoff for making this happen
Please help]]> 2021-06-16 13:21:04 UTC https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609935242 https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609935692 2021-06-16 13:21:15 UTC https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609935692 We feel sorry to inform that the Year End Party has been cancelled due to company’s financial situation. However, we can still have a great Christmas party instead to celebrate the holidays together. President John K. Hoff and Management Team would like to express their grateful for your understanding during the company’s hard times.The exciting news regarding to Christmas Party this year will be updated in our monthly newsletter. https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609958207
Tuyen]]> 2021-06-16 13:29:25 UTC https://padlet.com/thao_vu1/2c2vy5q8bkutnhhp/wish/1609958207