GIVING ADVICE - ENG3 G1 by VANESSA LISSET ECHEVERRIA MAQUILON https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne Give advice to situations on pg. 115 ex. 5. Apply SHOULD, and ADVERBS OF MANNER (if it is possible). Comment to a partner's, too. DEADLINE: WEDNESDAY NOVEMBER 15, 2017. en-us 2017-11-08 22:25:40 UTC 2023-02-05 16:35:12 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Lightdecrease.png ENOC = 9 e_noc0 https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/206099492 Message 1
You should rest every so often because your body won't have to a lot pressure. Also, you should do excercise because your body HAS have to stay calmly and this can de-stress YOURSELF. If you have eyes aches don't self-medicate because you can worsen your health. You have to go to a doctor.

Message 2
You should buy an electronic cigarette because it is not so worn out (IT DOES NOT MAKE SENSE), or you can only consume medical marijuana but prescribed by a doctor. Also, you take advantage of your free time and learn some AN extreme sport and so you can get physical and no mental injuries accidentally.

Your remarks were not very helpful for your partner. It is not "prayer", it is SENTENCE. Be careful with sentence structures because sometimes the idea is lost and you should have applied more required grammar.]]> 2017-11-13 05:40:08 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/206099492 ELIO = 9 eliosantanapalma https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/206464846 Message 1
You should performe back excercises because to be completly sit SAT all day has consequensCes, likewise you should drink some carrot juice to prevent impaiRement of  sight. Also you could use anti-reflective lensES easily because cathode rays are noT healthy. Obviously they aren´t the best PIECE OF advices but they can help you.

Massage 2
I think at first, you shouLd go for a walk every day at least thirty minutes because to be skinny DOES not means good health but it is the first to become. If you want to be sane at full, you shouLdn´t buy more cigarettes. Lastly if you feel stressed you shoud breathe deeply and that IS all. 
 
No remarks to a partner. Good content but pay attention to spelling.]]> 2017-11-13 19:59:50 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/206464846 ANDRES CANDO = 10 molleraymi https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207003888 MESSAGE 1:
I think that you should massage your back with essential oils from aromatic plants that regularly remove the pains of the body, and to remove the pain from your eyes I think you should carefully wash your eyes with chamomile water, that will help you feel better quickly.

MESSAGE 2:
I think you should do a 10 minute exercise routine either in the morning, afternoon or evening, for 3 months, the first few months you should exercise gently and patiently so that you do not injure your body's muscles. BY this way, you will reduce the anxiety you have about smoking.

Good comments to your partner but it is not "prayer", it is SENTENCE. Excellent pieces of advice in your task.
]]> 2017-11-14 23:24:24 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207003888 David Sánchez = 9,25 dssr1 https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207028469 Message 1
You shouldn´t be for long time on computer, you should use an glasses with some protection for the eyes and your back position should be the upright. Normally the job is a hard working day so you could beware of your back. Also there are some cushions orthopedic CUSHIONS for it.

Message 2
You should look FOR some activities for to keep you busy, you definitely shouldn´t smokEing again because it will cause more health problems. Also, you can take some routines for example: run in the park, you can practice cycling every day or some sportS. All it will help YOU with your health.

I appreciate you tried to make remarks to a partner but improve they were not very helpful. Pay attention to your sentence structures, too.
]]> 2017-11-15 02:01:31 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207028469 FERNANDO = 9,75 demian_gm https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207029564 Health advice to message #1:
Dear YuchenChi
A sedentary job IS always gonna GOING TO gives you body discomfort. And, an incorrect position in front of the computer is dangerous for your back.
I suggest you to slowly strectCh SLOWLY yourself every 30 minutes. You should take 10 minutes to calm your muscles and rest your eyes. Maybe you can take a nap too, after lunch! Finally, I recomMend you to practice some Yoga exercises at night to relax your mind and body. And you will happily sleep like a baby.

Health advice to message #1:
Dear Great Amigo
No wonder why you feel unhappy, but the solution is always inside yourself.
You must to forget those useless cigarettes, and you should focus on new activities. For example: cardio exercises. You can patienly begin with some light routines, and then you could increase the rHythm. In less that you think, you will quickly losEt your overweight. You should never give up on your health!
Sincerely
D.F.G.M.

Good remarks to your partner but try to be more specific next time. Well developed content in your task but you could have applied more required structures.]]> 2017-11-15 02:08:22 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207029564 David Córdova = 10 dacord2 https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207035895 Message 1
You should go to a doctor because you need medicine for backache. Really, You should take a rest each hour because working all day isn’t very good for youR back. You should buy a new chair too, because youR chair is uncomfortable. For your eyes you should use glasses when you use the computer, it is an extra protection for your sight. 

Message 2
Oh Great! that is good news, but sincerely you shouldn’t be thinking in smoke again because you have a GOOD health good and the smoke damages the lungs. You should find a distraction for example: reading, watch movies, practice any sport, learn a musical instrument, etc. Also, you should do exercise because you need to lose weight.
Bye.    

regarding your remark to your partner, "also" can be used at the beginning or in the middle of the subject and verb  but I appreciate you tried to give him feedback. Good content in your task.
]]> 2017-11-15 02:51:53 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207035895 ANGEL JORDY = 10 angel_jordy https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207041829  Message 1
You should take a small breaks to work well and reduce the brigHTthness of your computer to avoid discomfort in your eyes. Also, you shouldn’t use very rigid seats because these would cause pains in the buttocks and back, so you should go quickly to buy your seat with sponge. You will surely feel very good.

Message 2
You should patiently control your cravings to smoke and for moments of stress listen to soft music and breathe deeply. I think that for your problem of overweight you shouldn’t consume junk food and it is THE best to strictly follow a healthy diet.

You started well your remarks to your partner but then they were very general, so do not lose focus. Good content in your task.
]]> 2017-11-15 03:34:30 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207041829 CINTHIA = 10 cinthikvg https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207059096 Message 1
Hi! dear YuchenChi.
You should sleep at least 8 hours per day and you should get a better mattress. Also, you should do some yoga or back exercises and you should also visit a doctor quickly to check your eyes because you might urgently need glasses.
Good luck.

Message 2
Hi! dear Great Amigo.
You should change your lifestyle quickly. You should visit a nutritionist and start a healthy diet and you should also drink plenty of water and do some exercise, run in the mornings for example also you migHTth change the tobacco for medical weed if you want to go back to smoking and so calm your stress and feel relaxed and happy. Good luck.

Well done task but your remarks were not very proper for your partner, so try better next time.]]> 2017-11-15 05:46:06 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207059096 MARCOS = 9 mvstudio69 https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207065539 Message 1
Hello my friend, how are you, I care about you. That problem needs urgent attention. You should keep calm, then turn off the computer continue whith a long shower, and walk in the park or go to the beach. FinalLy you should think about stopping working for a moment, because you ARE going to BE sick.
bye.

Message 2
Hello meAn, smoking is very bad, the name of your problem is abstinence syndrome, I understand IT them and I know it is complicated, they YOU should think about practicing a sport, like swimming or running, and they YOU should not be around people who smoke is not good for you, do not forget to visit your doctor. I trust you, good luck, you can improve your situation.
Bye.

No comments to a partner but good content in your task.
]]> 2017-11-15 06:50:41 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207065539 Elvis Avilés = 10 elvizaho1991 https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207347418 Hi! YunchenChi.
 You should rest about 10 minutes for each hour of work. In those 10 minutes of rest you should stretch youR back and maybe lie down. You should also walk to avoid stress. To prevent your eyes hurt, you should buy a screen protector, you should also use glasses. In short, you should work carefully for your health.

Hi! Great Amigo.
You should start doing sports. Maybe walking every mornig could be a healthy  start for you. While you walk you should think about what you would most like to do. Having a positive mind will help you to overcome yourself every day. Two weeks later you can start going to the gym. All this added to a healthy diet will help you winth your problem. But remember you should do it regularly.

Excellent task and good comment but try to be more specific next time.]]> 2017-11-15 18:02:06 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207347418 CRISTHIAN = 9,75 cristhiandanielcarrasco https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207506227 Message 1
Hello my dear friend,
You should take an aspirin, or you should practice any A sport when you finish your day of job. Also, you should get up carefully of the bed, for TO take care of youR back, and you should go to a massage session in a Spa, before of go GOING to the spa, you should go to the pharmacy and buy and take complex b. Also, put 2 drops of visina every day in your eyes, if you don’t improve, you fast visit to a doctor. See you. 

Message 2
Hi Great amigo,
I thinKg that youR case is psychological so, you shouldn’t smokEing again for TO lose weight. You should go frequently to a gym, and you should be constantly in a diet. You should visit to a doctor for TO see if you should do a liposuction, if you follow these instructions, you should lose weight in a short time, and repeat, you shouldn’t smokEing again. 

Good content but pay attention to punctuation and spelling. Try to be more specific when giving feedback to a partner.
]]> 2017-11-16 02:49:18 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207506227 FELIPE = 9,75 renato95666 https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207523561 1 Hi yuchenchi
I think you should to prevent damage in your eyes you should use glasses AND you should take a break OF 30 minutes. to half of the work, You should also walk the rest OF THE days for 1 hour and do exercises during the week. and You should sleep 8 hourS a day because it’s necessary to work better.                                             
2 Hello great amigo
I think you should control your anxiety,
I think you should control your anxiety you should BY goING out more time with your friends and walk in the park. I think that helps a lot to overcome stress, you should not smoke again if you know that it hurts you a lot.

Good comment to your partner but pay attention when writing your ideas to not repeat words.]]> 2017-11-16 05:00:47 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207523561 Jeffry = 9,25 jeff_luna_munoz https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/207952251 1 Yes, first of all. you should take a break, because you have three weeks without stop. So you should put a schedule where you can reset minimum 1 hour at medium day EVERY DAY all days. You should go to the ophthalmologist to check your eyesight and recommend WEAR lenses. I am sure that he will TELL say you should not be long time IN front of THE computer. If you don't change your lifestyle, you will have SERIOUS problems serious with youR health.

2 If you feel stressed, you should take a massage or take a vacation but you shouldn't smoke again. There are some ways for TO delete this, but you shouldn't fall again at this. You should go to do some SPORTS deport WITH this you might stay in shape, with AN opeN mind. So you should reflect, it's your livFe.

Regarding your remark to your partner, "also" can be used at the beginning or in the middle of the subject and verb but I appreciate you tried to give him feedback. Good pieces of advice but pay attention to your sentence structures.
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2. Enoc and Cristian
3. Angel and David Córdova]]> 2017-11-21 23:03:31 UTC https://padlet.com/vanessa_echeverria/2b0wxnab4vne/wish/209292318