CNN Writing_24.11 by Ms. Dieu Ha

CNN Writing_24.11 by Ms. Dieu Ha https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1 Được tạo ra bằng những kì quan en-us 2021-11-24 13:11:29 UTC 2026-03-17 04:02:54 UTC hello@padlet.com NGUYỄN THỊ DIỆU HÀ dieuha2503 https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910570635 Nowadays people can use computers to talk, learn and communicate without leaving home. There is a danger that it will cause more isolation and a lack of communication among people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?]]> 2021-11-24 13:12:23 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910570635 Lam Giang https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910573426 *Agree

Topic sentences:

-Nowadays, the development of social networrk has created for users another more .convenient tool to communicate with each other. But this has apparently cause more isolation and a lack of communication among people.

Body part:

*Create reluctance to communicate:

- Communicating with each other through social networks will create a habit of texting. => Made us feel uncomfortable and shy when communicating face-to-face

*Difficulty in recognizing other's feelings

- Online chatting can show our information we want to deliver but not the emotion.

=> Don’t know what the feelings of the person you communicate with

=> Difficulty in understanding each other

Concluding sentences:

One hundred percent agree that beside advantages technology also cause more isolation and a lack of communication among people

]]> 2021-11-24 13:13:51 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910573426 Lê Bảo Minh lebaominh07 https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910573737 Topic sentence: These days, the problem of whether humans can take advantages of computers as a means of communication and learning without leaving home, or if this may discourage real interaction and cause isolation and lack of communication among users has polarized public opinion. From my perspective, I completely subscribe to the latter for the following reasons.

Ideas:
- New technologies can be very alluring, and once hooked, few can resist the urge to use them to the full. As a result, people are likely to get more deeply involved in this and tend to deny real interaction. For example, getting access to social networking sites such as Facebook or Twitter for virtual communities or chatting with friends through these social media excessively can lead users to a lack of face-to-face interactions.

- It is an obvious fact that people can gain access to a host of news through a small screen. Consequently, this will gradually create the habit of isolation, a sedentary lifestyle, whereby you will just stay at home and surf the Internet instead of going out to update your social information.

Concluding sentence: To summarize, I strongly believe that learning and communicating via computers can bring multiple drawbacks for users.]]> 2021-11-24 13:14:02 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910573737 khánh huyền https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910573816 Topic sentence: These days, computers and technology have played an important part in our life. It helps us the study and work online, communicate without leaving home. Although some people say that computers may isolated us from our family and friends, I totally agree with this opinion.
Body: - young people often use social media like Facebook and Instagram to stay in touch with friends and video call with families --> communication gap
- If they don't know to communicate face to face, they will not able to achieve success in their jobs which require communicating skill.
Conclusion: Finally, modernization has had some beneficial effects on human relationships. However, I believe that it has resulted in people becoming less socially active as a result of spending more time on their computers and having less close communication with one another than previously.]]> 2021-11-24 13:14:04 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910573816 Minh Tuệ https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910573939 - Topic sentence: I agree with the thing that people use computers to talk, learn and communicate will cause more isolation and a lack of communication among people.

- When people have access to the computer at home, they tend to stay at home whenever they have spare time.
=> lose the impersonal skill
- Using computers too much will directly affect health and eyes

- In conclusion, using computers to talk and communicate bring many drawbacks.]]> 2021-11-24 13:14:08 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910573939 Thành Long https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910574090 Agree:
I agree with the statement that communicating through supportive devices such as computer or smart phone will cause an isolation and a lack of communication among people.

P1: The flexibility in words and a conversation will be significantly reduced and reduces the effectiveness of the conversation

P2: The role of body language such as eye communication or gestures is an extremely important factor that encounters the route that does not meet that. 30% of the content of a conversation is conveyed through words and the remaining 70% is through the shaped language

Although there are convenience, such a meeting still has certain barriers and difficulties. They will clearly cause an isolation and a lack of communication among people.

]]> 2021-11-24 13:14:13 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910574090 Khánh Ngọc https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910574202 Topic sentence: These days, people can use computers to interact with their loved ones, study or entertain but I believed that computers' disadvantage is more considerable than its' advantage because there are a series of dangers may cause by computer such as isolation or a lack of communication among people.
Reason:
-Firstly, computer develop a passive lifestyle. For example, without computer, student have to do their homework by themself but when they use computer they can search the internet to find the key and it has a negative impact on the study result
-Secondly, computers have such a strong attraction that people are addicted to it and feel unnecessary to communicate with each other, especially in online learning, student dislike to contact with their teacher because they are ashamed or losing focus on the lesson by a lot of reasons
Conclusion:
In short, computers caused a range of danger to our life such as our health or the communicate among people, and everyone should considerable despite the benefits it brings.]]> 2021-11-24 13:14:15 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910574202 Tú Quyên https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910574460 Topic sentence:
- With the development of technology in the current 4.0 era, people can use computers to talk, learn and communicate without leaving home. From my perspective, the issues above has both pros and cons.
Pros:
- Reduce air pollution because there is no need to use personal vehicles to travel.
- Overcoming geographical distance to be able to communicate with loved ones.
Cons:
- harmful to eyes because of looking at the screen too much.
- obese because of sedentary, not leaving home.
Concluding sentence:
- In short, I would say that the disadvantages of using computers to communicate outweigh the benefits since human's health is the first priority.]]> 2021-11-24 13:14:22 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910574460 Nguyễn Thế Lực https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910574523 - Topic sentence: In this day and age, as the technology is rapidly developed, more and more people started to use technology, or more specifically, gadgets like phones, computers, etc. In my opinion, this may lead to some undesirable consequences.
- I do agree because:
+ Over-usage of computers may lead to isolation, because for many victims, actual interactions with people can be onerous.

+ People who use computers a lot are more likely to be overweight, mainly due to inactivity
+ The possibility of eye-related diseases is very high, due to the length of time using large electronic devices
+ Reduce these people's ability to socialize in real life
=> In conclusion, people who use computer frequently may gain some severe damages both physically and mentally.

]]> 2021-11-24 13:14:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910574523 Thuỷ Chi https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910574550 * Topic sentence: The use of online conversations using social media apps, such as Facebook, WhatsApp or Twitter is replacing face-to-face interaction among many people in society. From my point of view, I believe that the benefits these technologies have brought to our lives are overshadowed by their drawbacks.
- It is the fact that social networking sites have made it much easier for us to keep in touch with our loved ones, regardless of geographic locations.
- Nevertheless, I personally believe that social media brings us more harm than good.
+ The overuse of social media reduces the quality of interpersonal communication. Many people are so addicted to social networking sites that they barely pay attention to the people around them.
+ The frequent use of social media also affects the style of speaking and writing, especially among young people. Many teenagers have a habit of using abbreviated words, which are frequently used in text messages or in posts on social media, in their academic essays or formal emails.
* In conclusion, for the reasons mentioned above, I am of the opinion that the positive effects that social media has on our communication are outweighed by the disadvantages.]]> 2021-11-24 13:14:25 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910574550 Minh An https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910575981 Topic sentence:

Although it is true that internet technology has enabled people to interact with their families and friends regardless of distance or cost, many people believe that the technology has led to people becoming less sociable and more independent. Personally, I would agree that the internet has negatively affected to people's social life

-many people like spending hours playing with their gadgets and ignoring their social lives

+they have less time to make eye contact with other family members

+many families are having communication issues these days

-the communication method is entirely computerized, devoid of the personal touch and emotions

+friends don’t hang out anymore, as a result, the friendship is being shattered by the online world

Concluding sentence:

To summarize, the Internet has undoubtedly marked a watershed moment in technology, but the consequences for the relationships it fosters are negative

]]> 2021-11-24 13:15:09 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910575981 Anh Tuấn antondang2811 https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910587874 Topic Sentence
In recent years, with the development and popularity of social networks, computers are gradually becoming more and more necessary for people. There are some statements that people use computers to communicate more and more often will cause more isolation and a lack of communication among people. In my point of view, this is a somewhat misleading statement.
- The use of computers to communicate is not only texting but also video calling.
- Video calls are developed by developers based on real human communication
=> does not cause isolation and does not cause negative effects on individual communication
- In addition, computers and the internet will not be hindered by time and distance.
=> As a result, it becomes more convenient to communicate with humans.
=> Therefore, communicating via the internet is a suitable option for a large number of people, especially the elderly.
CONCLUDING SENTENCE
As mentioned, the Internet and computers will not negatively affect communication and will not cause isolation for individuals, so misconceptions about computers and the internet need to be eliminated and an accurate assessment is needed their usefulness and practicality

]]> 2021-11-24 13:20:53 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910587874 Minh Nguyệt https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910611852 Topic sentence:
In my ponit, nowadays people can use computers to talk, learn and communicate without leaving home; however, technology has made people become less socialized and more individualistic.
Plans:
- Almost everybody have their own mobile phone nowadays, they can use it for chatting and online gaming with the attractive and entertaining applications and forget about the outside society. Consequently, it has been reported that many families are having communication problems because they have less time to share with loved ones
=> people no longer understand each other as before => contradictions
- They are used to online meetings and are more afraid to participate in face-to-face meetings => become less socialized
Concluding sentence:
In conclusion, modernization has had some positive influences; nevertheless, it has caused people to socially become less active because of spending longer hours on Internet. ]]> 2021-11-24 13:32:18 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910611852 Vũ Minh Quang https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910620917 topic sentence:
The internet is a fantastic innovation that has changed how we connect with our friends and family. Despite the fact that we are never far from our loved ones because we can talk to them at any time or see their updates on our favorite social networking platform, I believe it has weakened the very fabric of our social bonding by requiring us to meet people rather than texting, calling, or chatting with them.

-social media platforms such as Facebook and Twitter enable us to communicate with individuals we care about or even idolize. As a result, we can contact our friends or parents even if we are miles apart.

concluding sentence:
- With its unfathomable capacity, the internet has offered us more communication and social interaction options than ever before. However, if we choose to become captives of technology, our real-world relationships and lives would be jeopardized.

]]> 2021-11-24 13:36:47 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910620917 Khánh Hà vukhanhha27022007 https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910623316 Topic sentence: The extensive use of new technical devices has exerted significant influence on our ways of comunicating such as talking or learning. As this innovation gradually becomes a norm in our daily basis, there is a high chance of danger that it will lead to social isolation and lack of communication, hence, from my perspective, I totally agree with this statement.
- New technologies are highly alluring, especially to the young, once they get hooked, it is impossible for them to break the habit of spending hours in front of the computers' screens. There are series of news and entertaining contents getting uploaded onto the Internet every single second, which probably take years to watch and read all the documents online
- Children are still too uneducated to be aware of the dangers of the Internet. The effects of this can go from bad to worse. First, adolescents, not having self-discipline, will abandon their homeworks, house choirs and even communicating with others. Furthermore, this will result in social isolation, lack of communication or other mental health issues, as they can get access to unsuitable trends on media platforms or being harassed, which oddly common on the Internet
Conclusion: In conclusion, due to the mentioned reasons above, I strongly agree to the fact that technical developments can lead to disadvantageous effect on people, specially teenagers. ]]> 2021-11-24 13:37:59 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910623316 Ngọc Châu https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910626031 - With the advancement of science and technology, computers have become an indispensable part of our lives.There is a danger that it will cause more isolation and a lack of communication among people. I agree with this statement.
+First of all, people can talk to their friends using different online platforms.

+Second, the world computer technology era moves towards globalization. People have a lot of opportunities to make friends with people from different countries, they can work from home and that doesn't require a personal presence in the office.

- In conclusion, people will always find a way to communicate with others and new technologies cannot cause some inconvenience in the process.]]> 2021-11-24 13:39:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910626031 Khánhh Ly https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910626494 Topic sentence: It is increasingly that people can now use computers to talk, learn, and communicate without ever leaving their homes. In my opinion, there is a risk that it will lead to more isolation and a lack of communication among people.
- Having internet at home causes city dwellers to stay at home whenever they have free time. This type of habit will cause them to lose an important interpersonal skill that every individual should be able to master in their lives. They should, for example, participate in youth or sports activities to make new friends and improve their social skills.
- They are less likely to succeed in jobs that require sophisticated communication skills if they do not learn how to communicate with others in face-to-face conversations. As a result, it is clear that people who overuse the internet may eventually lose their ability to socialize.
- Cyber-addiction is a major cause of citizens' dissatisfaction. Clearly, as smartphone technology advances, more people will engage in a wider range of applications and become more reliant on them. As a result, they will spend less time traveling and more time with their friends, becoming more isolated and desperate.
Concluding sentence: To summarize, computers have numerous drawbacks in our lives. However, I believe that we should use the computer wisely, as it can be more beneficial if we do not overuse it, and we should learn to socialize face-to-face rather than burying our heads in the screens of electronic gadgets.]]> 2021-11-24 13:39:32 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910626494 Hương Ly https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910632044 Topic sentence: In recent years, public opinion has been divided on whether humans can use computers to communicate and learn without leaving their homes, or whether this will hinder actual engagement and lead to isolation and lack of communication among users. For the following reasons, I believe the latter is the superior alternative.
- New technologies have the ability to entice people. Few people can resist the temptation to use them to their full potential once they've become addicted. Getting access to social networking sites like Facebook or Twitter for virtual communities or conversing with friends through these social media, for example, might lead to a lack of face-to-face connections.
- It is self-evident that a little screen may provide access to a wealth of information. As a result, you will gradually develop the habit of leading a sedentary lifestyle, where you will choose to sit at home and surf the Internet rather than going out to keep up with your social life.
Concluding sentence: To summarize, computers have a number of drawbacks in our daily lives. However, I believe that we should learn to socialize face to face rather than burying our heads in electronic gadget screens, and that we should use the computer appropriately, as it can be more advantageous if we do not overdo it.]]> 2021-11-24 13:42:19 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910632044 Hà Thu https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910636617 Agree

Topic sentence: Nowadays, with technological developments, people are enabled to communicate, work or even learn from home, in my perspective, I believe that it will cause more isolation and a lack of communication among people

Reasons:
- Technological devices applications are so well-developed that it could be used for working, learning or chatting without displacing or leaving home. This means that employers would have to work with a much more bigger amount of works, since they can do their own works at home
- Online meetings are preferred over than face-to-face meeting, people will have less opportunities to encounter, communicate with others
- People have no intend to go outside

Conclusion: Technological developments might improve our lives' quality with its benefits; however, it would negatively affect people' lives such as: more isolation, people' healths and a lack of communication among people]]> 2021-11-24 13:44:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910636617 Luong Nhat Minh https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910637587 Intro : People in the 4.0 era are more likely to stay at home and contact with others via computer rather than going out to converse. While some feel that this would lead to isolation and a lack of communication among people, I completely disagree.

Main ideas

Because communicating through the internet is the same as communicating in person, there will be no gaps in communication between individuals.
Computers can assist individuals in communicating beyond cultural and geographical barriers.
If people know when to hang together and turn off their screens, there won't be any isolation.

Conclusion :

To summarize, I disagree that utilizing technology to talk would lead to isolation and a lack of contact among people for the reasons stated above.

]]> 2021-11-24 13:44:51 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910637587 Hoàng Ngân vhngan789 https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910638758 Nowadays, communicating online and using online devices is nothing new. There are some opinions that it will cause a lot of isolation and lack of communication between people. But in my opinion, this might not be that harmful.

+) First of all, we can talk with our friends and colleagues using different online platforms. This gives us more opportunities to communicate with each other than in the past.
+)Secondly, the computer era led our world to globalization. From there, we will have more opportunities to get to know and make friends with people.

]]> 2021-11-24 13:45:24 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910638758 Hà Kiều Trang https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910646169 Topic sentence:
The use of social media such as Facebook or Instagram is replacing face to face metting, making people isolation and lack of face-to-face meetings.
Plan:
- People usually gets hooked to social media, it is extremely difficult to break the habit of surfing them hours everyday.
- As the world globalized, the technology also gets more and more advanced, therefore people can make friends from all over the world.
- Sticking our eyes to social media can cause eye diseases.
- People soon lost the ability to communicate in real life.
Conclusion:
Technology is a prove of development to humanity, it can bring a lot of advantages but its drawbacks are also dangerous, that is the reson why I strongly agree that technical developments can lead to bad effects on people, specially the young.]]> 2021-11-24 13:48:43 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910646169 Mai Vy https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910650439 - Topic sentence: These days, it is hard to overstate the fact that social networking sites have made it much easier for us to keep in touch with our loved ones, regardless of geographic locations; nonetheless, I personally believe that the benefits these technologies have brought to our lives are overshadowed by their drawbacks.

- Reasons:
-> The frequent use of social media affects the style of speaking and writing, especially among young people. Many teenagers have a habit of using abbreviated words, which are frequently used in text messages or in posts on social media, in their academic essays or formal emails.

-> The overuse of social media also reduces the quality of interpersonal communication. Many people are so addicted to social networking sites that they barely pay attention to the people around them.

- Concluding sentence: In conclusion, I subscribe the opinion that the positive effects that social media has on our communication are outweighed by the disadvantages for these compelling reasons.

]]> 2021-11-24 13:50:39 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910650439 Uyên Thảo https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910650973 Disagree
Topic sentence: With the rise of technology in recent years, people can now use computers to study and connect with their beloved ones. However, it is believed that this situation could lead to the lack of communication among people. From my perspective, I truly disagree with claim mentioned above.
Point 1: First and foremost, technology will still be used by us to connect with friends and family through different social platforms. Subsequently, with social media, we could even update, see each other from the screen for those who live from far away.

Point 2: Moreover, we could use technology not only to stay active with our friends, family but also to meet and socialize with people around the world. Since the Internet is a wide network, it is effortless for people to expand the number of relationships by accessing to technology. Nowadays, there are some platforms which allow people to make friends and chat with strangers such as Omegle and Instagram or even Zoom online meeting.

Conclusion: To conclude, technology developments might be a helpful tool for people to stay active with their beloved and even to socialize with people around the world.

]]> 2021-11-24 13:50:55 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910650973 Bảo Châu https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910652403 Topic sentence: With the science and technology progress, computer has become an important part of our lives. Some people think this situation has a bad affect on our communicate. From my point of view, I think that internet has a negative effect to our social life

- Beacause of the current epidemic situation, most of us have to work and study online from home.
- People will not be able to know the other person's feelings
- Decrease face-to-face communication skills
- Harmful to our eyes
- You won't feel the need to talk to other people face to face anymore
- No real-life situational skills

Conclusion: In my conclusion,using computer to communicaete can bring many drawbacks to people.

]]> 2021-11-24 13:51:32 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910652403 Le Quang Minh https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910652606 Topic sentences: There is no denying the positive side of television in particular and other electronic devices such as computers, smartphones, and game consoles to people's lives. But just like drugs, these devices also have “side effects” and dangers when used “overdose”.
-agree because
+ People don't understand each other because they can't communicate directly
+ prevent communication between people
+ Reduce these people's ability to socialize in real life
=> There are many limitations to communicating with electronic devices]]> 2021-11-24 13:51:39 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910652606 Lê Trọng Khôi https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910652971 Agree
With the science and technology progress computers have become an integral part of our life. Nowadays we have an opportunity to work and study online from our homes.

Although some people think that this situation has a negative influence on our communication skills, I myself believe that it is not really true.
Reason 1:
- We can speak to our friends and relatives using different online platforms.

- Moreover, we can even see the people who are in the other part of the city, country, or even continent.

- There are much more chances to communicate with people than in the past.

Reason 2:

- The computer era leads our world of globalization. We have got a huge number of chances to make a friendship with people from different countries
- We can work from home for some foreign companies and it doesn’t demand our personal presence in different kinds of offices and other similar institutions.
Conclusion: No matter what, people will always find a way to communicate with others and the new technologies cannot cause any inconveniences in this process.

]]> 2021-11-24 13:51:50 UTC https://padlet.com/dieuha2503/29ksv3bce4d8lod1/wish/1910652971