Show not tell by A Br https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3 describing what we see and do to imply emotions and motives en-us 2018-08-29 22:36:48 UTC 2018-09-11 03:09:22 UTC hello@padlet.com She was calling her dad a jerk https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431015


]]> 2018-08-29 23:48:21 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431015 Girls On Rollercoaster https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431055
The rollercoaster gave vibrations and her screaming gave off more. The face she gave clearly made her feel a change in her senses. ]]> 2018-08-29 23:48:39 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431055 She felt the wind whipping around her face cavoodle101 https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431111 2018-08-29 23:49:10 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431111 https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431115 As the ride came to the end, I relaxed, I started to look around. everybody looked so small from here. I then noticed the smile on my face, I was enjoying it!]]> 2018-08-29 23:49:12 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431115 She was screaming with horror and then she was screaming with joy. Her face was scrunched up. Aiden https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431130 2018-08-29 23:49:19 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431130 Her eyes where squinted and her face scrunched as she swiveled around in her seat. Her hands holding the bars tightly, shaking with fear. Screaming in fear as wind pushed against hair. https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431138 2018-08-29 23:49:21 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431138 As the roller coaster rushed down the track there were vibrations on her seat adventuresforlife https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431186 2018-08-29 23:49:47 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431186 Fidgeted her hand on the cold bars https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431196 2018-08-29 23:49:51 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431196 When the ride was going down a hill she was crying and her face was scrunched up -Hamish T https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431203 2018-08-29 23:49:53 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431203 https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431210 as the ride began she was as scared as a chicken  being chased by a cat.she was screaming she was crying SHE WAS PETRIFIED ]]> 2018-08-29 23:49:53 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431210 The wind blew in her face https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431221 2018-08-29 23:49:59 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431221 As the ride began, Amy was looking around kargopoltsev_i https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431235 2018-08-29 23:50:06 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431235 As the ride began she was looking anywhere other than the camera-Deylan https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431248 2018-08-29 23:50:14 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431248 https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431281 As the ride began she was holding the bars tightly and screamed.

]]> 2018-08-29 23:50:30 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431281 end happy- she was screaming of joy https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431306 2018-08-29 23:50:35 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431306 Amy https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431311 Amy's hazel eyes darted around filled with panic. ]]> 2018-08-29 23:50:38 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431311 She made excuses https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431315 2018-08-29 23:50:39 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431315 roller coaster https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431336 Amy's  face was scrunched up she wanted to get  off  you could see the pain in her face as the ride started she tried to calm down look any were but the ride- cleo babs

]]> 2018-08-29 23:50:46 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431336 As Amy rushed around the corner, her eyes darted, and her heart raced. She had never been so scared in her life. cavoodle101 https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431407 2018-08-29 23:51:19 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431407 she was crying and screaming https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431484

]]> 2018-08-29 23:51:52 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431484 https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431657 She screamed as the rollercoaster zoomed]]> 2018-08-29 23:52:59 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431657 She had tight hand grip on the https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431673 2018-08-29 23:53:06 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431673 At the end of the ride she avoided eye contact with here dad https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431717 2018-08-29 23:53:24 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431717 she said thought that it was going to be quicker https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431739 2018-08-29 23:53:31 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431739 As the ride began she started to have different and crazy expresions https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431752 2018-08-29 23:53:36 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431752 as the ride began ami scrunched her face to the feel of wind https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431762 2018-08-29 23:53:43 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431762 Her father laughed at her for being so scared. cavoodle101 https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431817 2018-08-29 23:54:04 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431817 Amy https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431844 She fidgeted her hands on the cold aluminum bars]]> 2018-08-29 23:54:16 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431844 Roller Coaster adventuresforlife https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431852 At the end she didn't make eye contact with her dad and embarrased about her dad about taking a video]]> 2018-08-29 23:54:19 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431852 . https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431908 As the ride began, Amy held the bars tightly and screamed.]]> 2018-08-29 23:54:45 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431908 she made excuses like "Itoug https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431932 2018-08-29 23:54:56 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431932 The roller coaster turned, and the blood rushed to Amy's face, and when she dipped down, the blood drained from her face cavoodle101 https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431984 2018-08-29 23:55:13 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276431984 https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276432053 she was expecting more

]]> 2018-08-29 23:55:45 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276432053 . https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276432065 She felt the cold wind

]]> 2018-08-29 23:55:51 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276432065 as a tear ran down the mothers cheek, the child ran to the other children the children listened to this sound DING, DINK in 2 or so seconds the children vanished, the mother wiped her tear realising her child was growing up. https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276436378 2018-08-30 00:24:33 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276436378 Show not tell paragraph https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276436475 "Did you do it?" My mum asked expectantly. My sister look at me with a bratty smirk on her face. "Um, yeah, of course I did," I said. I bit my lip, avoiding eye contact with both of them. She walked to the kitchen, and I held my breath,  hoping she wouldn't look at the sink that was supposed to be empty, but was filled with dirty dishes instead. "Okay! I'm sorry!" My mum looked at me, confused. I guess she hadn't seen it after all. "Nevermind." 

]]> 2018-08-30 00:25:04 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276436475 The wrapping paper gleamed in the light of Meg's living room lamp. She'd waited and wanted this for a long time, and now it was here, sitting right in front of her. Meg clutched her teddy bear, and slowly crept closer. Her first ever present. Her eyes formed slits, and she sat down. Meg prodded it, as if at any moment it might burst into flames. She pulled the string, and lifted the lid. She was about to peer inside when a THUD came from her kitchen. She put the lid back on. She would find out what was inside another day. cavoodle101 https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276436640 - Emily Ross]]> 2018-08-30 00:26:20 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276436640 This is so boring. Why? Every single day! I can't take it any more. No, sir. "Honey, can you pack the dishes?" Asks my mum. But It's Jenny's turn, I swear!" I say with my fingers crossed behind my back. Ha! No dishes for me! "Ok" says mum. Heh heh, sucker! Now Jenny has to get all that rotten food on her fingers, and be sore from lifting all those heavy plates. -Hamish T https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443301 2018-08-30 00:27:28 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443301 Show not tell paragraph 1890 https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443304 "I have already done that sir!" Said Carlyle to his mean owner. The hairs on the back Carlyle's neck stood up immediately. The sweat he produced dripped down on his back. "Are you sure!" he yelled back on me. ]]> 2018-08-30 00:27:29 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443304 show not tell paragraph https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443317 Alyssa carefully unwrapped the small patterned gift, inside she found a petite velvet box, she ran her fingers on the soft fabric. Alyssa snapped it open and found a pair of earrings  glistening in the light. Her face lit up. She opened her lips to speak but no sound exited her grinning mouth. ]]> 2018-08-30 00:27:30 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443317 I didn't want to go to my new school. Everything was old there. I know I'm not going to like it. Probably my first step in would be chaotic. I kicked a rock and took a step into the classroom. "Hello" I said in a small voice. The teacher had a grim smile and so did the kids. https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443428 2018-08-30 00:28:09 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443428 do your chores https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443497 ''wake up Shani'' mum screamed 
''later close the door'' I moaned the door slammed. I put my sweat pants on and went to school once i came back mum screamed ''do your chores'' i hid in my room and did't answer after she found me she said do your chores i already did in my heart i knew i was lying]]> 2018-08-30 00:28:39 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443497 First day of school https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443534 Walking through the gates my head falling to look at the ground. My body tense as my eyes darting around to look at the kids. As I felt a cool touch on my shoulder I instantly shot around to find Jess. My face squinted and scrunched as more kids came through the gates. Again for my head to drop to my feet.]]> 2018-08-30 00:28:53 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443534 Opening a present adventuresforlife https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443577 It was a crisp Christmas morning. I rushed to the tree and grabbed my biggest present. The paper crumpled as I tore off the paper. I was speechless. It was so quiet I could hear my heart beating.]]> 2018-08-30 00:29:13 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443577 He is Alone https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443762 Walking slowly, lonely shadow in the dark. In a new environment. No one is there, it is you, solo mission and only you can change it. Speak through your emotions, it will change everything.
 ]]> 2018-08-30 00:30:26 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443762 CHRISTMAS https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443825 It was X-MAS I and my brother gorge ran downstairs there was raping paper every were there were new toys and so many lollies  i was running  around every were i ran upstairs and woke up mum and dad and yelled X-MASSSSSSSSSS!

]]> 2018-08-30 00:30:51 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443825 CHRISTMAS MORNING It was Christmas morning and gorge woke up. He started stretched and then started walked into the lounge room. He looked next to him and saw him hole family. He didn't make eye contact at all he just kept walking strait. when he reached the tree he looked down and smiled as he opens his first Christmas present. https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443946

]]> 2018-08-30 00:31:48 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276443946 First day of school https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276444015 As we walk to school I squeeze my sisters ha hoping I never have to let go. When we're at school my sister floats over to her friends and before I can say anything she was gone. I suddenly want to go Home but mum said I have to be brave so I cautiously step into school.]]> 2018-08-30 00:32:27 UTC https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276444015 https://padlet.com/antjbrock544/298ir5dybwl3/wish/276444692 I WAS SO EXITED IT WAS XMAS

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