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         <title>Find the mistakes in this paragraph:</title>
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         <description><![CDATA[<div>On the one hand, the first advantage of using prison sentences is that it can act as a deterrent. Take criminals in Vietnam as an example. Being imprisoned in a small cell for years under extremely poor living conditions is obviously a horrible experience, the prisoner will find it extremely difficult to reintegrate into society after serving a long sentence. If they’re aware of such a severe consequence, they will definitely be more reluctant before committing a crime. In addition, sending criminals to prison is also a good way to improve the safety of the local community. Why is that? In this way, these individuals who will be isolated from society and are no longer a threat to other people.</div>]]></description>
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