Persuasive Essays by

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Thinking of specific reasons

The hardest thing about persuasive essays is building a compelling stance with innovative reasons to support the claim.

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The hardest thing is coming up with deep reasons. Mine are usually vague which messes up my entire essay.

Coming up with reasons and evidence

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The hardest thing is coming up with deep reasons and commentary that makes sense

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coming up with evidence😔

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Creating commentary that is more thoughtful and does not repeat/go in circles

Getting good evidence

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The hardest thing about persuasive essays is keeping to our point rather than proving the other view wrong

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What you’re supposed to write for commentary and how to balance it out

finding reasons that make sense to the prompt and aren’t too vague or too specific.

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picking only one side and making sure every sentence is only one side of the argument

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The hardest thing about persuasive essays is finding evidence for a stance and not counter evidence.

Reasons and Cohesion

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Coming up with reasons then making sure evidence and commentary go together with them

Please MORE dislikes

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Not being vague and not repeating reasons on my commentary.

Becoming Thelegend27

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Developing 2nd body paragraph as effectively as the first, and developing deep reasons.

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The hardest part of persuasive essays is commentary.

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I had some trouble thinking deeper on my reasons

Commentary

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Writing commentary that is expanding but not repetitive.

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Writing within the lines given

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not being repetitive and expanding on ones evidence

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Not using sentence stems for commentary

Not being repetitive when using two real world examples

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expanding commentary

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The hardest thing for me was finding whether or not evidence is appropriate for my reasons

Ideas

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It's hard to join ideas together so it flows

Reasons

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I think I rush my reasons because of the limited amount of time, so my reasons end up ruining the essay and not allowing my commentary to be good either.

2019-05-13 16:22:05 UTC

Thinking of evidence and writing commentary that is not repetitive

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The hardest part about writing persuasive essays is coming up with good evidence-reason pairs.

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Coming up with reasons that are not similar and writing commentary that isn't redundant and goes in circles.

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figuring out a stance and picking reasons that are specific but also make sense

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The hardest thing about persuasive essays is framing your vocabulary to match your view or stance

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Expanding beyond the reason in the commentary without repeating.

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Formatting my essay

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using more green words to stay focused on the argument and more variety in syntax and vocab

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The hard part was finding deep evidences.

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Coming up with strong evidence and reasons

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hardest thing is repetition and coming up w deep commentary

Commentary

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It’s hard to not go in circles. Trying to elaborate on the subject

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I need to think of more complex reasons

Reasons

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It took a lot of time to come up with reasons in the 45 min we had

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Deep reasons

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Coming up with reasons

Reasons

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Reasons are tough to come up with sometimes

Improving Diction

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Finding evidence that doesn't paint evildoing in a positive light

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The hardest part for me is definitely finding the right words to concisely but accurately represent the ideas I have, especially in the reasons.

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Deep reasons with good evidence is hard

Commentary 1

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It’s hard to come up with good analysis in the beginning because you can’t restate reasons and have to save societal and longer term impacts for the second part.

Expanding commentary

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Deep reasons, not reappearing reasons in commentary, deeper commentary

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The hardest would be the time cruch that doesn't allow you to plan out so all of my writings is me improvising along the way. The most confusing would be the commentary with the difference between the how and the why.

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Not using vague philosophical ideas that are over analytical or unrealistic.

organization

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organizing the mf essay like topic sentence —> evidence or sumn stuff thas friggin hard

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evidence is hard to come up with when there’s a difficult prompt. it’s also hard to make things deeper when we have such little space

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The hardest part of persuasive essays is coming up with a reason that is not too specific , vague, or obvious

Format limits you

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The illusion is that you are taught to just follow a format when really you are trying to prove a point and you get carried away following a format.

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Have the reason and evidence have a better connection and cohesion

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Having enough time to develop the deeper reasons and create cohesive commentary that fights for the intended reason

remembering evidence

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it was hard recalling evidence from the poi sheets we did

commentary

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i have trouble with expanding my commentary and using 🤬 language

Reasons

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I struggle with trying to come up with strong reasons that support my evidence

Development

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I sometimes struggle with developing my commentary

Trying to not be repetitive

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I start to go in circles and I have trouble finding different connections

I need to vary language, but my commentary is okay.

2019-05-13 18:14:13 UTC

By Guhan (plz like, I need self esteem)

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It's hardest to get evidence and turn it into a reason

Evidence and Commentary

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Coming up with the evidence and the commentary to go with them

Elaborating my commentaries and using more detailed info

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Reasons

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I need to come up with more specific and complex reason, rather than settling for the generic ones

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The hardest thing is to not be vague for the reasons and find good evidence

A choking ordeal

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(Previous Version purged due to being a ramble.) In the end, Time restrictions is the main cause of these low grades. The time limit simply forces the student to puke out what he learned in class, with some time to edit—if he is lucky. But then again, we’re just miserable students. Why should we be entitled to an opinion?

Everything

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Remembering evidence and expanding commentary without using same reasons and vocab

Spelling

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Coming up with good evidence

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It’s hard to have better diction when you have basically no time to think about more advanced words

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I’m dumb-d-dumb-dumb-dumb-d-dumb-dumb-dumb stoopid

Being more detailed and going deeper

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commentary, just like tough

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