https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j en-us 2018-09-06 13:38:02 UTC 2026-03-01 01:25:00 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983683445 - could have talked more about the structure of the paragraphs 
- when explaining the differences between the original there could've been more quotations ]]> 2020-12-03 14:00:04 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983683445 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983691751 - could have added more evidence/quotes when they talk about the article being a first-hand speech
- ]]> 2020-12-03 14:02:00 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983691751 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983695971 -they should have provided evidence on how the letter from the employer is more personal]]> 2020-12-03 14:02:56 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983695971 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983696745 -Could have pointed out things in the structure of the original article such as length, paragraph length and sentence structure 
- Could have used any quotes from the original to help support their points more sufficiently]]> 2020-12-03 14:03:07 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983696745 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983697552 -The student could have compared the different jobs of the two of them and why they have different view points because of the jobs

- The student also could have identified the different types of text/length of the text]]> 2020-12-03 14:03:18 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983697552 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983700276 The student could have identified the difference in the length of the paragraphs and sentences as well as the types of sentences used. They could have also included more quotations when speaking about the different ideas about London that the text provides. The letter uses salutations and sign offs whereas the article does not.]]> 2020-12-03 14:03:55 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983700276 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983702051 - They could have focused more on the structure of the paragraphs ]]> 2020-12-03 14:04:14 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983702051 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983702903 The student could have used quotes to demonstrate how the employer's letter is how they described, or how it differs from the original text. ]]> 2020-12-03 14:04:20 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983702903 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983703193 - they most likely should have included more evidence in the fifth paragraph about how it is more "personal, expressed throughout" ]]> 2020-12-03 14:04:22 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983703193 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983706546 -the original article used actual numbers when discussing the differences in prices and the letter just stated that there were higher wages in the city without giving a specific amount
-the letter was more direct and to the point than the original article]]> 2020-12-03 14:05:00 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983706546 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983707503 The student doesn't really discuss the different lengths of sentences in the text. They should have put some more quotes in there to support their observations better.]]> 2020-12-03 14:05:12 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983707503 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983708633 They could have discussed the types of words that are used and how they affect the writing]]> 2020-12-03 14:05:26 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983708633 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983709229 the student could have talked about the sentence length. also could have given examples on how the letter from the employer is more personal that factual and straightforward 

]]> 2020-12-03 14:05:33 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983709229 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983712394 The student talked more about form and only barely covered structure. Also they did not point out the sentence structure]]> 2020-12-03 14:06:13 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983712394 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983714049 The Author could have used direct quotes from the original stories to better show and makepoints about they arguments that they made and how it differs from the original letter ]]> 2020-12-03 14:06:35 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983714049 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983721659 The student could have elaborated more towards how the letter was more personal and to explain further into the fact of the overall tone being authoritative.]]> 2020-12-03 14:07:39 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983721659 jo03880 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983724978 - the student could have identified the different types of text used.
- could have used more quotations ]]> 2020-12-03 14:08:13 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983724978 https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983728054 2020-12-03 14:08:51 UTC https://padlet.com/catherinede/27gffj3ail9j/wish/983728054