Timing and Pacing by Constance Kinder

2024-02-14 16:00:42 UTC

Jalyn G. - Everyone for the most part effectively utilized timing and pacing, however I would suggest when Emily is reading her lines, she should unmute just before she is about to speak. Therefore, she is given enough time to prepare, and there won't be any unnecessary time gaps when reading through the script.

2024-02-14 16:02:32 UTC

I would say overall we did a great job just have to work on paying attention to when its our time to speak, and for some parts were there are pauses or quotation mark I think we should work on pausing to make things seem more dramatic so that everything is not just one tone. and for transitions I think we did a good job just have to make sure were staying on top of it so everything transitions smoothly. - abigail k.

455457_1 — 2024-02-14 16:03:23 UTC

Hamen A- I think overall we did well but for the pacing of some scenes, we should be able to take our time and use pauses. Working on using these pauses will allow us to improve our performance as well as add suspense when we transition. These changes can help us add more suspense and absorb our characters more effectively.

2024-02-14 16:07:53 UTC

Emily L- The pacing was good but could use a bit of work on my part. Overall the pacing was good. I believe mostly everyone utilized pauses and silences as dramatic effects. I would suggest when Abigail reads her lines to be a little more suspicious or secretive, it also goes for Hamen at the very end of the scene. During transition releases, I should work a little more on that just to make the scene more realistic. Apart from that, I believe everyone did a great job.