Grow: For next time, I would just try and go into more depth about your lesson plan and tech proposal. You went through those portions somewhat quickly but they are major parts of your website!! I think you did a great job overall with everything! 

Grow: The one thing I would work on for next time is possibly speaking a little faster when talking about the different aspects about your video but other than that I think you did a great job!

Grow: One critique that I have is to try and speak more clearly into the microphone for some reason there appears to be an echo/ ringing whenever I play your video!

Grow: One thing I would say that you could work on for the future is that you should add more apps to your symbaloo. At the beginning of your video when you were talking about your homepage your symbaloo had a ton of empty tiles. There are so many educational websites/ apps/ games that can be used in the classroom, you should do more research to add some to your symbaloo. There were some parts of your video that went on for a while although its good that you went so in depth there are definitely some parts of your video that could have been taken out simply because they are not that important. 

Grow: One critique that I have for your video is that you should have shown the published view of your website instead of the version that still allows you to make edits! 

Grow: One thing that I would work on for next time is to possibly explain a little bit more about what you put in your digital dialogues. This was one part of your video that was slightly more brief than the rest and you could have left out important information. 

Grow: One thing I would work on for next time is to actually click on the website that you created your AT Smore project on. By doing this the person watching your video can see the assistive technologies you chose while listening to you explain them. 

Grow: One thing I would work on for next time is to next time try and go through some parts of the video a little quicker. You were very thorough which was great but there were certain parts of the website that you didn’t have to spend as much time on. 

Grow:  One thing to work on for next time however, would be to not just click through the slides of some of your presentations instead talk about what is on some of those slides so the person watching the video can understand what the project entailed. 

Grow: One thing that I would say you could work on for the future is to not spend as much time on talking about your Digital Dialogues. Even though these dialogues were an important aspect of your website there were other parts of this project that were more important that should have been talked about more than your digital dialogues. 

Grow: One thing I would say that you need to work on for next time is that when you are using Screencast-O-Matic you were supposed to show us your website and take us through it as you discussed it in your video. All I could see was the Screencast-O-Matic home screen and not your website. 

Grow: One thing that I would work on is that at some points in your video when you were switching tabs your voice over would cut in and out! Just make sure that the audio works seamlessly throughout the video. Overall I think you did a really great and thorough job with this project!

Grow: One thing that I would say that you can work on for the future is that you should talk a little more about what you included in your digital dialogues. You did such a thorough job while discussing other parts of your video and I think that this portion could have use slightly more explanation. 

Grow: One thing I would critique about your video is that when you were talking about the homepage of your website you mentioned symbaloo, the person viewing the video however, was not able to see the apps that you had on it. Next time scroll down on the screen so the viewer can look at the different aspects of your website as you talk about them!

Grow: One thing I thing that I think you could work on for next time is to not read directly from what you wrote in some parts of your website. For example when you were explaining your digital dialogues you read exactly what your wrote on the page next time you can just summarize it that way you can put more focus on to other/ more important aspects or your website.  

Grow: One thing that I think you could work on is that you went extremely quick when talking about your lesson plan, and group project. These tabs on your website were vital to the project and next time you should take the readers through the slides you created. 

Grow: One critique that I have for your video is that on some of the tabs like the lesson plan and tech grant when explaining them in your video you should have flipped through the slides to show the people viewing the video what you have worked on!

Grow: The one thing I would say you could work on for next time is to go into more depth about your tech grant and digital dialogues. You moved somewhat quickly over those topics and may have left out important information. 

Grow: You did a really great job with this video and presentation. The one critique that I have is that you should not have spent as much time on your homepage, you could have shortened the amount of time that you spent on this page, for next time it might be beneficial to come up with a script that way you can be more aware of how much time you spend on each portion of your website.