Jonathan H's (Model) Narrative Writing Project: My Unjust Society by Jonathan Huante Lopez https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts This padlet is for all the work we will be doing for our extended writing project for our Narrative Unit. en-us 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC 2024-11-04 00:58:57 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Bigthunderstorm.png What are Human Rights? 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951678 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951678 What Does an Unjust Society Look Like? 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951679 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951679 30 Basic Human Rights 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951680 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951680 This is where you can ask any questions about the narrative writing process. Just make a new post with your question. 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951681 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951681 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951682 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951682 Rough Draft 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951683 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951683 Final Draft 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951684 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951684 1. Point of View: Who is telling your story? Is the narrator a character in the story? Or is he or she telling the story? 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951685 The point of view is 3rd person and I am telling the story. I also did this because I want people to focus more on the story more than the characters.]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951685 2. Setting: Where and when does your story takes place? What makes it unjust? 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951686 My story takes place in a small town in the future. What makes my story unjust is that the town is cut off from the world, and your not able to leave the town. Only the rich and powerful can leave the town.]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951686 3. Characters: Who are your characters? What are they like? 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951687 Main Character: Thomas Willha 
- Mom died rebelling against Mayor Cox
- Was a rebellion leader
- Dismantled rebellion to go after Mayor Cox himself
Antagonist: Mayor Cox, Serpents
- Mayor Cox got power from father
- Became Mayor at 18
- Mom committed suicide
-serpentines special force group
- Works for Mayor Cox
-  Dress like normal people]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951687 4. Conflict: What problem, or injustice, do they encounter? 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951688 Thomas is all alone and is fed up with the Mayor, he goes against the serpents to get justice on his mom. Pretends to be a rich person to come close to Mayor Cox. But serpents find him out and now he's on the run trying to take down the society and the mayor for the better good.]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951688 5. Resolution: How do your characters resolve the conflict (injustice) that they face? 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951689 Thomas makes a big protest with everyone from town helping him. He 's able to throw the Mayor and all the people helping the mayor out of the office and town. Thomas is elected new Mayor and he makes everyone free. People are connected to the world again.]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951689 6. Characters: How do your characters grow or change as the story moves forward? 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951690 Thomas grows as a individual becoming more intelligent with actions, becoming a better person, more optimistic, and more confident.]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951690 7. Climax: What is the most exciting moment in your story? 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951692 Thomas is with the whole town outside the Mayor's office getting ready to get paste the serpents and in into the Mayor's office. They get inside and there is a decoy Mayor. One of the people in the crowd is a serpent.]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951692 8. Theme: What theme (or message) do you want your readers to take away from your story? 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951693 My theme is anything and everything can change and you want it to change work hard to change it.]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951693 Due Dates 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951694 This will be updated as we continue the process.
-Narrative Techniques in "Theo's Song": Thursday, Dec 14 
-Brainstorm for My Narrative: Friday, Dec 15

]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951694 Prompt 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951695 What do you have to do for this assignment? ]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951695 Theo's Song 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951696 Student Model for the Writing Prompt]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951696 Rubric 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951697 How will you be graded for this writing? ]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951697 Point of View 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951698 The point of view is 3rd person. This is true because the story uses no usual 1st person language like I, or me.]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951698 Setting: What makes this an Unjust Society? What basic human right is being denied? 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951699 What makes this an unjust society is that they choose your job for you. The basic human right that is being denied is the right to be free and how everyone isn't equal.]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951699 Characters 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951700 The characters are Theo, Neema, and the Decider. These characters are important and have a big roll in the story. More characters are the Authorities and the apprentices.]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951700 Conflict 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951701 The conflict is Theo vs the society. It is also how the Government assigned Theo to be a blacksmith when he wants to be a song writer. This makes him unhappy and easy to control.]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951701 Plot: Sequential 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951702 Event #: Blacksmith apprentices are working in the smithy.
Event #: Theo turns 13 and is assigned his assignment the smithy.
Event #: Theo meets Neema, Neema tells Theo that they keep them unhappy so they are easier to control.
Event #: Theo thinks of how unfair it all is; Theo makes a resolution that changes his life forever.
Event # (Climax):Theo gets to the smithy and sings against the governments rules. Others sing with him.
Event #: Theo is taken by the authorities and punished.
Event #: Neema and others started singing despite the punishment the will get.
Event #(Resolution):  The kids got assigned jobs that they wanted, and the rebellion stopped. The government realizes that it never worked.]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951702 Theme 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951703 The theme is by rebelling you can change the unjust or unfair society with small actions. ]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951703 Think Question #5 of "Theo's Song" 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951704 What is it like to live in an unjust society? Write a paragraph that focuses on a fiction or nonfiction narrative that you could write. ]]> 2017-12-13 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/215951704 Plot Diagram/Story Road Map 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/217055293 Instructions: Create a plot diagram for your story on printer paper. It should have 8 events. Use your brainstorm to help you. Please draw it neatly like this and in pencil. Use my plot diagram as an example of what  I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 18:26:41 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/217055293 Plot Diagram Example 200801780 https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/217055518 Use my plot diagram as an example of what I expect from you. ]]> 2017-12-18 18:27:14 UTC https://padlet.com/200801780/25l72zy46mts/wish/217055518