Period 7 Topic Sentences by Krista Mennella https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s Read the different sentences below. What do you notice? en-us 2020-10-19 18:10:58 UTC 2024-11-25 22:28:22 UTC hello@padlet.com Read each topic sentence for each level. Press the + icon below each topic sentence. Write your name as the title and then list what you notice. You should have THREE total responses (one per level). kmennella1 https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842266292
Is the writer using a strategy listed here? If so, add it to your list.
Restatement/Topic Sentence:  
- Key words circled in the question are present in the restated sentence. 
- Tells the reader exactly what the paragraph will be about.
- “Because” is not used. 
]]> 2020-10-19 18:10:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842266292 Original Question: kmennella1 https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842266293 How does your mouth contribute to the process of digestion?]]> 2020-10-19 18:10:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842266293 Using your teeth to chew food and your saliva to start the chemical breakdown of food, your mouth contributes to digestion. kmennella1 https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842266297 2020-10-19 18:10:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842266297 Your mouth contributes to digestion by using your teeth to chew food. kmennella1 https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842266298 2020-10-19 18:10:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842266298 It starts digestion by using your teeth. kmennella1 https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842266306 2020-10-19 18:10:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842266306 kreiche https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842438654 2020-10-19 18:52:20 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842438654 Yirmely CC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842505817 I notice that they had one key word, and it doesn't have that much details.]]> 2020-10-19 19:11:07 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842505817 Katie kreiche https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842505943 I notice....]]> 2020-10-19 19:11:09 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842505943 Katelyn https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842506192 I noticed that this response had 1 key word and restated the question]]> 2020-10-19 19:11:13 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842506192 riley 2630199 https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842506561 i noticed that there are key word's, digestion, and teeth]]> 2020-10-19 19:11:21 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842506561 Gavin https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842507100 I noticed that you were very descriptive and that a person who did not know anything about this could be very confused about what they are being taught.]]> 2020-10-19 19:11:30 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842507100 JACOB https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842507556 2020-10-19 19:11:39 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842507556 Gretchen https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842507885 I noticed that the writer had one key words.]]> 2020-10-19 19:11:45 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842507885 Adena https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842507887 I notice they used 1 key words and they restated the question]]> 2020-10-19 19:11:45 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842507887 Precious https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842507896 I noticed the words mouth, and digestion, which shows that the paragraph will be about starting digestion with the teeth. its a simple response but the question is still restated.]]> 2020-10-19 19:11:45 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842507896 Joe https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842508521 I noticed that it used two key words: teeth and digestion.]]> 2020-10-19 19:11:56 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842508521 Matthew https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842508789 I noticed that this topic sentence had restated the question and had a key word.]]> 2020-10-19 19:12:01 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842508789 Christian https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842509087 I noticed that it only had one key word ]]> 2020-10-19 19:12:07 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842509087 jacob https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842509264 i noticed how disruptive yo are]]> 2020-10-19 19:12:10 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842509264 Mikey https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842509423 2020-10-19 19:12:13 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842509423 carly https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842509594 i noticed that the sentence had one key word

]]> 2020-10-19 19:12:16 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842509594 Abhijoy https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842509717 I noticed that the level 1 sentence had  one key word. Which was digestion.]]> 2020-10-19 19:12:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842509717 Katelyn https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842510391 I noticed that it had 2 key words and restated the question better than the first response]]> 2020-10-19 19:12:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842510391 Liv https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842512312 I noticed that this has some key words and it’s short but has information.]]> 2020-10-19 19:13:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842512312 Gavin https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842512510 I noticed that this one is more descriptive and gives a better answer and had more key words.]]> 2020-10-19 19:13:09 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842512510 carly https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842512853 i noticed it had one more key word and restated the question]]> 2020-10-19 19:13:15 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842512853 jacob https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842513642 i noticed that the responce was discriptive and 1 key word]]> 2020-10-19 19:13:29 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842513642 Mikey https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842514065 2020-10-19 19:13:37 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842514065 Katelyn https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842514080 I noticed it used 2 key words and had more information than the first 2.]]> 2020-10-19 19:13:37 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842514080 notice https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842515194 2020-10-19 19:13:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842515194 Gavin https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842515655 I noticed that this last one had a lot of key words and had a way more understandable answer]]> 2020-10-19 19:14:06 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842515655 adena https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842516182 I notices the response had more detail, used 2 key words and restated the question better]]> 2020-10-19 19:14:15 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842516182 Mikey S kreiche https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842516861 I noticed that the writer used some key words.  They can do better by adding more key words.

]]> 2020-10-19 19:14:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842516861 Precious https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842517174 I noticed that the response had more keywords and was slightly more specific. The question is well restated.]]> 2020-10-19 19:14:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842517174 jacob https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842517910 2020-10-19 19:14:44 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842517910 Liv https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842518011 I noticed that this is short but has one key word. ]]> 2020-10-19 19:14:46 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842518011 jacob https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842518631 i noticed that the responce had more deatails and was more discriptive.]]> 2020-10-19 19:14:56 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842518631 Matthew https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842519026 It restated the question better than the level 1 did. And they used three key words.]]> 2020-10-19 19:15:04 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842519026 carly https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842519110 i noticed that this one had more detail and had more key words]]> 2020-10-19 19:15:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842519110 I noticed that it has 3 key words and it is more descriptive https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842519224 2020-10-19 19:15:07 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842519224 Shuliana https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842519962 I noticed that there is one key word. ]]> 2020-10-19 19:15:20 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842519962 adena https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842520346 I notice this response had more detail than the first two, it restated the question better, and used a lot more key words]]> 2020-10-19 19:15:27 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842520346 Liv https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842520459 I noticed that this has a lot of key words and it flows very well. It also has a lot of information about the topic. ]]> 2020-10-19 19:15:28 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842520459 Matt A https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842521273 I noticed that this sentence restates the question and uses 2 key words.]]> 2020-10-19 19:15:43 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842521273 riley 2630199 https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842521859 i noticed that there are 3 key words and its more descriptive]]> 2020-10-19 19:15:52 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842521859 Abhijoy https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842521980 I noticed that the level 2 sentence had three key words. Which were mouth, contribute, and digestion.]]> 2020-10-19 19:15:53 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842521980 Joe https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842522343 It made the topic more clear by using the word mouth instead of it and the overall sentence makes more sense.

]]> 2020-10-19 19:15:59 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842522343 jacob https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842523425 i noticed that this responce had more than 1 key word and was very discriptive.]]> 2020-10-19 19:16:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842523425 Matthew https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842523821 I noticed that this response was written better than level 1 and 2 and it had 2 key words.]]> 2020-10-19 19:16:26 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842523821 riley 2630199 https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842523848 i noticed that there was more detail and more key words]]> 2020-10-19 19:16:27 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842523848 Gretchen https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842524189 I noticed that 3 key words and has more description]]> 2020-10-19 19:16:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842524189 Yirmely CC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842524209 I notice that they use two key words( mouth and teeth) and have more details]]> 2020-10-19 19:16:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842524209 Emily L https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842524327 I noticed there was one key word]]> 2020-10-19 19:16:34 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842524327 Emily Lindsey https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842525596 I noticed there were two key words and it was a bit more detailed]]> 2020-10-19 19:16:56 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842525596 Joe https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842527000 It used the words saliva and chemical breakdown.]]> 2020-10-19 19:17:22 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842527000 Emily L https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842527126 I noticed it was very descriptive, it had several key words and it flowed.]]> 2020-10-19 19:17:24 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842527126 Mikey S kreiche https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842527573 more detail, more key words]]> 2020-10-19 19:17:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842527573 Matt A https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842528232 I noticed that this sentence restates the question better than the first example, has 4 key words, and it has more detail.]]> 2020-10-19 19:17:43 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842528232 Precious https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842528278 It used more keywords, it showed specifically how the digestion progress starts so you could get a better idea of how digestion works. The question is restated

]]> 2020-10-19 19:17:44 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842528278 christian https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842528495 I noticed that their is two key words ]]> 2020-10-19 19:17:48 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842528495 Yirmely CC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842529472 I notice this had more key words, and more information that can help us understand more the thing.]]> 2020-10-19 19:18:06 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842529472 Gretchen https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842529529 I noticed that it has more key words and it descriptive and has a lot more details]]> 2020-10-19 19:18:07 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842529529 Mikey kreiche https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842530970 There are teeth and saliva mentioned, so it is a more complete answer.]]> 2020-10-19 19:18:30 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842530970 Christian https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842532751 I noticed that their is more key words ]]> 2020-10-19 19:18:58 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842532751 Abhijoy https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842534423 I noticed it used two key words. This topic sentence has more details than the other two.]]> 2020-10-19 19:19:27 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842534423 Matt A https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842536459 I noticed that this sentence has extreme detail compared to the previous 2 responses, but it doesn’t seem to restate the question very well, having it at the end. I would say it has 5 key words in it.]]> 2020-10-19 19:20:01 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842536459 Shuiana https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842541460 I noticed that there were 2 key words.]]> 2020-10-19 19:21:23 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842541460 JB https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842583128 I noticed there was one key word]]> 2020-10-19 19:33:46 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842583128 JB https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842585774 I noticed there were two key words]]> 2020-10-19 19:34:36 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842585774 JB https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842587768 I noticed there were two key words. Topic sentence had more details than the other two.]]> 2020-10-19 19:35:12 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842587768 Emma https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842768227 It restated the question and it has a keyword.

]]> 2020-10-19 20:40:12 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842768227 emma https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842772397 It was longer and restates the question and has key words, no because and tells what it is going to be about.]]> 2020-10-19 20:41:55 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842772397 emma https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842777049 It has more keywords and restates the question better.]]> 2020-10-19 20:43:41 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/842777049 Daniel https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/857014567 There is 1 keyword but little information]]> 2020-10-23 18:52:05 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/857014567 Daniel https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/857016341 There is 2 keywords but little words but shows a decent amount of information]]> 2020-10-23 18:52:38 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/857016341 Daniel https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/857026594 There is multiple keywords and a lot of information]]> 2020-10-23 18:55:49 UTC https://padlet.com/kmennella1/24ri0wrty02f2n0s/wish/857026594