6I Write Connection 2: Show, Not Tell by Opera Estate Primary

Ms Chua

operaestateprisch — 2024-02-25 01:41:58 UTC

A bright smile spread across her face as she heard the news, her eyes sparkling with joy. She let out a delighted laugh and clasped her hands together, a rush of warmth flooding through her body at the wonderful revelation.

Ms Chua

operaestateprisch — 2024-02-25 01:42:47 UTC

My heart sank as I glanced down at my leg, the sight of it wrapped in bandages and bruises sending a wave of melancholy through me. A heavy sigh escaped my lips as I traced the lines of the injury with my fingertips, feeling a sense of loss for the mobility I once took for granted.

Ms Chua

operaestateprisch — 2024-02-25 01:43:35 UTC

John's voice sliced through the air like a whip as he called me over, his brows furrowed and his fists clenched at his sides. I could sense the tension radiating from him, his jaw set in a tight line and his nostrils flaring with frustration.

Leoraa

2024-02-26 03:42:09 UTC

She was beaming with happiness when she heard the good news

Uthman

2024-02-26 03:42:15 UTC

Tears of joy rolled down her cheeks rapidly, her smile spreading from ear to ear as she learnt of the good news.

Yogi

2024-02-26 03:43:13 UTC

Sadness overwhelmed me as I took a quick glance at my leg. My eyes welled up with tears as I looked at the blood-soaked bandages that lay everywhere. Agonising screams filled the air. “Why did I do that?” I wailed. Even at the thought of my leg, I would burst into tears. This is one memory I will remember like it happened yesterday.

Leoraa

2024-02-26 03:43:48 UTC

Tears trickled down my cheeks as I looked down at my injured my knee blood was oozing from my knee.

Daryl

2024-02-26 03:44:51 UTC

Suzy grinned like a Cheshire Cat when she heard the news. Her eyes sparkled in delight and she without hesitation jumped up and down, happiness spreaded across her face. She was eager to tell her parents the good news.

Rinoa

2024-02-26 03:44:55 UTC

A big smile spead across her face from ear to ear as she beamed with happiness

Aneka 6I

2024-02-26 03:45:00 UTC

Her eyes and nose crinkled with a smile when she heard the good news.

Connor

2024-02-26 03:45:07 UTC

She felt like a dog with two tails. She was filled with joy as she laughed delightfully . She grinned ear to ear when she heard the news.

Leoraa

2024-02-26 03:45:47 UTC

John was boiling with anger. His face was as red as a tomato about to explode into bits. I was shivering in fear when he called me over.

Ria Sarda

2024-02-26 03:46:29 UTC

Upon hearing the exceptional news, she grinned from ear to ear. She walked over to the bearer of the news and shook his hand vigorously, almost breaking it off. Her happiness seemed to be radiating, delighting anyone who passed by.

Zavian

operaestateprisch — 2024-02-26 03:48:32 UTC

Her smile widened every second when she was reading the news

Yogi

2024-02-26 03:48:39 UTC

“HEY YOU!” John exclaimed in rage. His voice sliced through the air like a bullet. I stood rooted to the ground, wondering what could cause him to be vengeful. His red face sent shivers down my spine. I feared him for he had muscles thick as leather. His shadow loomed over me as I cowered in a corner. When I recalled what had happened, I fell at John’s feet for forgiveness. “Pathetic! You cannot even pay rent on time!” An impulsive passer-by commented.

Lim Ann Qi

2024-02-26 03:49:27 UTC

“Come here!” Huffing and puffing, John hollered at me to go there. With fumes gushing out from his nostrils, he stomped forward with his arms akimbo. Turning pallid, I stood rooted to the ground. Discreetly, I hoped that this ordeal would be over by hook or by crook.

Reet

2024-02-26 03:49:28 UTC

Last week, I recalled John slamming his fist on a table as he hollered my name. His face flushed as red as a tomato and you could see his veins throbbing at the back of his neck. His voice still echoed in my ear now and then.

Raphael

2024-02-26 03:49:50 UTC

She punched the air in delight stronger than she punches a pillow when she heard the exciting news

Mishka

2024-02-26 03:50:23 UTC

John's growl reverberated around the room which left me rooted to the ground as I stared with wide eyes. As he slammed his clenched fist on a table, I could see the throbbing veins in his neck. I bit my lips as his face flushed bright red.

Rayyan

2024-02-26 03:50:24 UTC

Tears of agony and sadness rolled down my cheeks. I stared at my leg, wrapped in bandages, crimson red and dripping with blood. The painkillers that the docter had given me had started to wear off. I could barely see anything through my tears. I could hear my mother, sobbing. Hearing my mother crying i felt a wave of overwhelming sorrow. The sadness in the room was almost contagious.

Aaradhyaa

2024-02-26 03:51:24 UTC

She was beside herself with joy as she heard the good news. She was on cloud nine as she felt the joy bubble up within herself. She had been waiting for this moment for her whole life! Like a dog with two tails, she dashed out of her bedroom to share the good news.

Zaki Jailani

2024-02-26 03:51:55 UTC

Zazi’s muscles were aching from too much laughter.

Daryl Chow

2024-02-26 03:52:48 UTC

I looked at my once normal leg now bleeding profusely all over, horrified by the sight in front of me. My mouth was like a fish out of water and I could not bear to think what my parents would say at the sight of my broken leg

Zavian

operaestateprisch — 2024-02-26 03:52:48 UTC

The more I looked at my leg the more tears trickled down my cheek faster and faster

Ria Sarda

2024-02-26 03:54:03 UTC

John’s face was flushed bright red as he called me over with a thundering boom. My hands were shaking as I stumbled up to him. His eyes seemed to be glowing red, waiting for me to approach. I felt like a mouse being chased by a lion.

kody

2024-02-26 03:54:29 UTC

I felt sharp pain from my knee finding out that
Crimson -red blood oozing out my knee
as tears trickled down my cheeks .
This is worse than a hornet sting!

Omar

2024-02-26 03:55:07 UTC

The fantastic news was music to my ears. I was flabbergasted. Instantaneously, my heart filled with delight. My eyes brimmed with tears of joy. Punching the air in jubilation, I yelled triumphantly, “Yes! I did it!” Although I looked so comical, I did not care, for I was trying to enjoyed the moment of victory.

Ishan

2024-02-26 03:55:44 UTC

He felt his heart in his throat as tears of grief trickled down his pale face. His droopy body layed on the Hospital bed.He stared into space, recounting and regretting his decision. He stared at his knee with a sigh. The utter grief bubbled up in him, as excruciating pain shot up ⬆️🆙 his knee. Goosebumps broke across his nape at the sight of the crismon-coloured blood gushing out of the open wound. His eyes welled up with tears as he made a few hesitating movements.

Estelle

2024-02-26 03:55:51 UTC

Her animated actions and exaggerated tones made it obvious that she was on cloud nine. She grinned from ear to ear.

Aneka

operaestateprisch — 2024-02-26 03:56:16 UTC

The sight of my injured leg horrified me. I stared at my leg jutting out at an awkward angle in shock. My vision was blurred by the tears that had welled up in my eyes as I sobbed in agony.

Uthman

2024-02-26 03:56:16 UTC

The pain in my leg, which was bent in an awkward angle, felt like a thousand needles jabbing away.

Maverick

2024-02-26 03:56:26 UTC

John’s anger punched through the wall as he loudly screamed at the top of his lungs when he called me over

Mishka

2024-02-26 03:58:21 UTC

She rubbed her hands together with anticipation as she was unable to sit still. She was on cloud nine. With crinkled eyes and nose, she swung her arms loosely as she burst out of her room. She had been prepared for this moment all her life.

Rania

2024-02-26 03:58:27 UTC

She grinned from ear to ear as she heard about the wonderful news. Her eyes dazzling with joy as she punched the air. She scrambled to fish out her phone from her pocket, informing everyone in her contacts

Raphael

2024-02-26 03:59:03 UTC

Taking a glance at my leg, tears trickled down my face as I felt a million ants bite my legs.

Connor

2024-02-26 03:59:30 UTC

John’s blood felt like a raging volcano that was about to explode. He sounded like a rocket when he called for me.

Zavian

operaestateprisch — 2024-02-26 03:59:52 UTC

“HEY MAN WHY YOU GOTTA DO ME LIKE THAT” shouted John as if he was a volcano about to erupt his face looked like a bright red tomato.He was coming closer while clenching his fist.

Daryl Chow

2024-02-26 04:00:17 UTC

“DARYL!” Those were the sounds of John, the school bully, who had shouted so loud the whole canteen become pitch silence. Not a single sound could be heard among the students as they watched the horrifying sigh as John walked up to me. I cowered in a corner, blurred by the tears of fear and I had not been this scared in a long time. This was not a joke.

Hao Sheng

2024-02-26 04:00:48 UTC

I felt a wave of sorrow washed over me as I stared at my leg which was now covered with bandages.I tried to blink back tears so that my friends will not know that I was sad,but judging from my droopy body and my puffy,red eyes I could tell that they all knew that I was having a bad day.

Ria Sarda

2024-02-26 04:00:55 UTC

I glanced down at my maimed leg. Crimson red blood oozed out of a deep gash with cuts surrounding it. Looking at its devastating condition, sorrow welled up in me. Soon, tears streamed down my cheeks. Even after I calmed down, my sadness hung in the air.

Lim Ann Qi

2024-02-26 04:01:29 UTC

“Yes!” I squealed in delight as I heard the news. Like a dog with two tails, I punched the air in delight. Tears of mirth tricked down my cheeks, I had won first place! With a wide grin plastered on my face, I thanked my instructor profusely for his advice and guidance.

Rayyan

2024-02-26 04:03:16 UTC

Steam started pouring out of his ears. Johns voice bellowed louder than a jet’s engine when he called my name. He stomped towards my table, knocking over everything. He looked like he wanted to kill me. I sat there cowering at my seat. The blood drained from my face.

Estelle

2024-02-26 04:04:35 UTC

John face was boiling like a volcano which was about to erupt. If looks could kill , I would have withered then and there. He screamed as he called me over.

Aneka 6I

2024-02-26 04:05:04 UTC

With a flash of anger in his bulging eyes, John hollered at me to come over. Like a bomb about to explode, he clenched his fists. He slapped me. My eyes started to move in a circular motion as the slap was too hard. With gritted teeth, he gave me a tounge lashing for injuring his little sister. He said in a hoarse voice that he did not want to be friends with me anymore.

Xephas

2024-02-26 04:05:10 UTC

I stared frozen in shock at my injured leg. Watching blood ooze out from the deep cut in my thigh, I felt horrified and extremely scared. Tears welled up in my eyes as I was carried off the pitch on a stretcher. I started crying profusely. I thought to myself, what would happen to me? Would I be able to play football again? Mane questions popped up in my head.

Omar

2024-02-26 04:06:15 UTC

A sense of sorrow filled my veins as I glanced at my injured leg in utter despair. Pain overwhelmed my entire being. Tears cascaded down my pale cheeks. Why did was I so stubborn? Why did I play in the rain? I should not have been so stubborn? Now I can’t play in my football match! A myriad of thoughts bombarded my mind. I tried stop my tears from flowing down my cheeks but my efforts were futile. Before long, blood oozed down my legs and there was nothing I could do to stop it.