https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b Work with your group to fill in the following sections. Please put the title/author of the story along with your team members' names on the sticky note. en-us 2020-09-04 10:20:14 UTC 2020-09-04 15:13:47 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721070796 In this memoir, the author( Yishen Zheng) talked about is first day at AISL, how he was very scared and nervous at first but as the day progressed he realized there was nothing to be afraid of. ]]> 2020-09-04 14:57:50 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721070796 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721082256 This writer included descriptive sentences such as:
-" My whole body was fixed like a sculpture"
- "It was very difficult to breathe" 
( exaggeration)
This really added to the story and made it more real.]]> 2020-09-04 15:01:12 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721082256 2026adityak https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721086415 In this memoir Neev described how he felt at the concert. He told the readers how he got chosen and how he had the courage to try something new even though he wasn't too sure about it at first.]]> 2020-09-04 15:02:23 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721086415 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721087866 Don't judge a book by its cover.]]> 2020-09-04 15:02:47 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721087866 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721089133 Our memoir was about a girl who loved singing, but had terrible stage fright. She decided to face her fear. But once she started singing, she looked at her Mother, and all her problems melted away.

]]> 2020-09-04 15:03:08 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721089133 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721089916 sometimes's change can effect how you see things. you might not like the idea of moving but sometimes can change you.]]> 2020-09-04 15:03:21 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721089916 2026luizc https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721092688 In this memoir, the author wrote about how he had played in four soccer tournaments, lost every single one, and learned a valuable lesson. If you work hard, you will achieve better results. This memoir he explains about his love of soccer, and how it is his life. It also talks about how he did better in every tournament, even though he never won any.]]> 2020-09-04 15:04:07 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721092688 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721093687 It is about how even though Eugene did speak the language she over came the language barrier and made friends.]]> 2020-09-04 15:04:23 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721093687 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721094569 The writer used descriptive language like ,The snow was as white as milk, so soft

]]> 2020-09-04 15:04:36 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721094569 2026temik https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721096174 The dialogue of the story was written in first person]]> 2020-09-04 15:05:02 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721096174 2026adityak https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721097664 He used multiple adjectives such when he said "my feet felt like they were in quicksand, the horrendous thought of me singing in front of people, I felt like somebody poured 10,000 ton weights on me, etc."]]> 2020-09-04 15:05:26 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721097664 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721098036 The epiphany of the memoir was:
"I learnt next time when I confront something new I will not be afraid, be timid because everything will be okay."]]> 2020-09-04 15:05:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721098036 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721098240
Before Ritu started singing she was very nervous. She said she "felt like she was sitting in a massage chair". We assume she says this because she was shaking so much. ]]> 2020-09-04 15:05:37 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721098240 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721099537 The dialogue of the story was written in first.]]> 2020-09-04 15:05:56 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721099537 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721100676 She described what she was thinking throughout the whole piece and she compared a lot of things. ]]> 2020-09-04 15:06:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721100676 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721102830 The epiphany of this memoir is that you don't always win but never give up, and when you try you just might succeed.

]]> 2020-09-04 15:06:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721102830 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721105213 The author did a really great job explaining how he felt in the moment. He also kept it "Short and sweet" all the while delivering his message to the reader clearly.]]> 2020-09-04 15:07:34 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721105213 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721105288 She used it when she described her first conversation Luna.]]> 2020-09-04 15:07:35 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721105288 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721106375 I think the way she described how she was feeling really made the story better. ]]> 2020-09-04 15:07:54 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721106375 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721107960 I think the author did a really good job explaining his journey and how he felt when he lost games and when he got better.
- Luiz, Asher, Sarah]]> 2020-09-04 15:08:20 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721107960 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721109008 When she decided that the fears of talking to others where only in her mind.]]> 2020-09-04 15:08:39 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721109008 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721110513
Ritu used dialogue by convincing herself that everything would be okay. ]]> 2020-09-04 15:09:05 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721110513 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721112151 Our author did not put dialog at all]]> 2020-09-04 15:09:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721112151 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721112872 They described what they were thinking very well and comparing things so we could get a better understanding.]]> 2020-09-04 15:09:46 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721112872 2026luizc https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721113711 The author did not include dialogue in his memoir.]]> 2020-09-04 15:10:01 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721113711 2026adityak https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721114186 Our author did not put dialogue.]]> 2020-09-04 15:10:09 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721114186 https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721114569 Sometimes you need to go out of your comfort zone to discover something you really like.]]> 2020-09-04 15:10:16 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721114569 2026luizc https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721118479 He used some very interesting descriptive language. One of our favorite ones was: 'I learnt about life with a ball at my feet' this really shows how he breathes and lives football. ]]> 2020-09-04 15:11:24 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721118479 2026adityak https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721119075 Our author's epiphany was when he understood that you should always try new things before you say no.]]> 2020-09-04 15:11:33 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721119075 2026adityak https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721122961 The used descriptive language and provided details. He also put his ending at the beginning to give the readers some background knowledge.]]> 2020-09-04 15:12:42 UTC https://padlet.com/ahodge5/239pwu8aqnd74b0b/wish/721122961