My Trailer's First Draft by courtney https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py By Courtney Owens en-us 2017-03-09 09:04:36 UTC 2025-10-26 13:09:34 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/Moderncam.png Youtube Link to the first draft owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158899940 https://youtu.be/ZZtrSSbBaA0]]> 2017-03-09 09:09:51 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158899940 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900249 The creepy smile was cool]]> 2017-03-09 09:11:26 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900249 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900334 Good range of angles]]> 2017-03-09 09:11:52 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900334 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900386 A bit too long for a trailer]]> 2017-03-09 09:12:09 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900386 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900415 I like the whisper at the end]]> 2017-03-09 09:12:18 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900415 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900447 Visuals are good
Camera Shots are clear.
This is so good! 
At the start, it kind of looked like an opening.
The whisper at the end was effective.]]> 2017-03-09 09:12:29 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900447 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900643 Good angles and audio
Maybe add the website and Twitter etc. at the very end.]]> 2017-03-09 09:13:35 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900643 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900773 WWW: Intense music was nice and suspenseful! Lovely shots e.g classroom.
EBI: Experiment more with fonts and transitions]]> 2017-03-09 09:14:18 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900773 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900916 I like the over the shoulder shot.
First part seems a lot like an opening but the ending was amazing.
The whisper at the end was excellent.]]> 2017-03-09 09:15:12 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158900916 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158901109 WWW: I like how you have presented your narrative. Shots used are different (added a variety)
EBI: Opening at beginning is too long.]]> 2017-03-09 09:16:25 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158901109 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158901617 When she says 'Who are you?' at the end, I think it'll be better if you could give it an effect to make it sound like it's echoing. Just like the character.]]> 2017-03-09 09:19:15 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158901617 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158901974 American  age rating needs to be changed to BBFC. Brilliant camera shots - creepy. Great use of sound.
Good use of of voice.
Make mum/daughter speaking louder.
Brilliant ending.]]> 2017-03-09 09:20:46 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158901974 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158902276 Change the age rating screen.
I like the different range of shots and the blurred shots, it creates enigma. 
It seems more like an opening and not a trailer.
The whisper is good at the end.]]> 2017-03-09 09:22:13 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158902276 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158902525 Cinematography is nice and sound is really complimentary to the piece.
Although, add trailer like editing, like faster race, but the idea is amazing.]]> 2017-03-09 09:23:11 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158902525 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158903553 The music seems too loud when there is dialogue.]]> 2017-03-09 09:28:05 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158903553 owenc005_312 https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158903745 nice cinematography and colour.]]> 2017-03-09 09:29:18 UTC https://padlet.com/owenc005_312/2239c74qh8py/wish/158903745