https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh Instructions: 1. Write the most important feedback comment that you received from a partner 2. Share your improvement plan to be able to finish your final draft. en-us 2022-04-27 15:24:21 UTC 2025-09-28 11:24:14 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f4d1.png https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168871956 Add Past tense]]> 2022-05-03 19:37:03 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168871956 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168872576 Add more info]]> 2022-05-03 19:37:34 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168872576 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168872651 Add vocabulary ]]> 2022-05-03 19:37:39 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168872651 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168872696 2022-05-03 19:37:41 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168872696 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168872799 2022-05-03 19:37:48 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168872799 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168872952 The grammar one and the contrast words]]> 2022-05-03 19:37:55 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168872952 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168873339 Add more vocabulary ]]> 2022-05-03 19:38:17 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168873339 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168873585 Organization coment]]> 2022-05-03 19:38:32 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168873585 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168873724 Check some spelling mistakes ]]> 2022-05-03 19:38:40 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168873724 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168873762 Finding information]]> 2022-05-03 19:38:42 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168873762 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168873774 Usage of vocabulary and grammar.]]> 2022-05-03 19:38:43 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168873774 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168873846 Tommy

]]> 2022-05-03 19:38:47 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168873846 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168873942 Grammar and spelling ]]> 2022-05-03 19:38:52 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168873942 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874083 Spelling and grammar ]]> 2022-05-03 19:38:59 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874083 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874138 Not finished and vocabulary and grammar and spelling ]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:01 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874138 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874189 Add vocabulary and both grammar points.]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:03 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874189 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874209 Puf vocabulary and finish it]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:05 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874209 alejandrousechemelo https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874476 Essay Incomplete]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:18 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874476 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874536 Tommy]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:21 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874536 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874716 Continue with the essay ]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:31 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874716 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874756 I Didn’t knew how to do the conclusion ]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:34 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874756 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874764 Add vocabulary and grammar]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:34 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874764 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874882 To read out loud ]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:40 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874882 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874889 tommy

]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:41 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168874889 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875062 Add Vocabulary words ]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:49 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875062 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875101 To add vocabulary.]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:50 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875101 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875167 The theories about la muelona ]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:55 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875167 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875211 2 main idea and grammar ]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:57 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875211 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875218 Make more effort in the outline ]]> 2022-05-03 19:39:58 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875218 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875298 Add vocabulary ]]> 2022-05-03 19:40:02 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875298 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875430 That fairs it’s so difficult to find ]]> 2022-05-03 19:40:09 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875430 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875439 Tommy]]> 2022-05-03 19:40:09 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875439 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875595 I told my partner about some ideas that where repeated  ]]> 2022-05-03 19:40:17 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875595 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875661 Spelling and organization]]> 2022-05-03 19:40:20 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875661 alejandrousechemelo https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875874 Contrast words]]> 2022-05-03 19:40:32 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168875874 alejandrousechemelo https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876122 Length]]> 2022-05-03 19:40:46 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876122 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876216 He did’t say anything he said it was all right]]> 2022-05-03 19:40:50 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876216 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876249 Finding information about one of my topics.]]> 2022-05-03 19:40:52 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876249 alejandrousechemelo https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876322 Better planning]]> 2022-05-03 19:40:56 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876322 benjaminramirezbeltran https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876508 Finding information about the headless priest and with the lenght of the parragraphs]]> 2022-05-03 19:41:06 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876508 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876509 Spelling and past tense ]]> 2022-05-03 19:41:06 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876509 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876559 Spelling ]]> 2022-05-03 19:41:09 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876559 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876609 Check spelling mistakes and add vocabulary words ]]> 2022-05-03 19:41:12 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876609 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876700 Information and facts

]]> 2022-05-03 19:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876700 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876703 I didn’t plan ]]> 2022-05-03 19:41:17 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876703 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876715 Finding more information, and have more time]]> 2022-05-03 19:41:18 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876715 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876914 Shortening sentences]]> 2022-05-03 19:41:28 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168876914 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168877138 I didn’t plan]]> 2022-05-03 19:41:39 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168877138 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168877215 Make it again ]]> 2022-05-03 19:41:43 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168877215 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168877237 Gramar and spelling mistakes]]> 2022-05-03 19:41:44 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168877237 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168877534 Finding where to put vocabulary and grammar points]]> 2022-05-03 19:41:55 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168877534 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168877665 Read my essay out loud.]]> 2022-05-03 19:42:02 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168877665 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168877693 Spelling mistakes and sentence fluently ]]> 2022-05-03 19:42:03 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168877693 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168877758 Be faster the work and don’t stress that easily ]]> 2022-05-03 19:42:06 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168877758 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168878172 Check some past tens, highlight, put more sentences if needed,  Read out loud and check spelling with the miss or my mom]]> 2022-05-03 19:42:28 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168878172 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168878371 Finishing my conclusion.]]> 2022-05-03 19:42:38 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168878371 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168878742 Add the vocabulary, grammar and organize it better]]> 2022-05-03 19:42:55 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168878742 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168879292 Longer paragraphs and more grammar and vocabulary ]]> 2022-05-03 19:43:22 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168879292 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168879489 Plan how to shorten sentences whilst making the outline.]]> 2022-05-03 19:43:32 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168879489 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168880790 Add the vocabulary words and use the grammar in a proper way.]]> 2022-05-03 19:44:22 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168880790 benjaminramirezbeltran https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168880935 To put more effort on the texts.]]> 2022-05-03 19:44:30 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168880935 https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168881117 Read my essay out loud and check if there are more spelling mistakes or sentences that are not clear or not easy to follow ]]> 2022-05-03 19:44:39 UTC https://padlet.com/grincon7/21yu241jv8vo1vrh/wish/2168881117