FAIE52818 - 04-12 by Tương Quỳnh Nguyễn

Thanh Nôm

2023-12-04 13:17:14 UTC

1/ Many people argue that more money should be use to encourage the use of bicycles in cities. While others believe that investing in public transport systems is a more worth doing

2/ It is believe that living in metropolises today deal with many issues in their daily life

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Many people argue that zoos are cruel so the closure of all zoos is necessary, while others believe that zoos is are a safe place for ~~guard~~ guarding rare animals. This essay will delve into discussing the two perspectives as well as stating my support for the latter one.

=> is -> are

=> guard -> guarding

Bly

2023-12-04 13:17:28 UTC

It is often argued that the number of residents in this city should devote money for the adoption of bicycle whilst other disagree and think amount of money should be increased in private transport system.

=> the number of residents -> city government

=> for -> to

=> bicycle thêm s

=> other thêm S

=> thêm this trước amount

=> in -> to

=> thêm the trước private

It is true that the number of residents in many metropolises have a trouble in daily life

=> the -> a huge

=> a trouble -> many troubles

Hoang Anh

2023-12-04 13:18:20 UTC

more money should be invested to advance the use of bicycles in cities is the opinion given. Others, Nevertheless, suppose that cities should try investing in public transport systems.
population living in abundant cities nowadays face several issues in their daily life
Some people give the opinion that the quod of animals in zoos is atrocious ,While others opinion=> opine that wildlife parks are better for protection than the wild environment
=> đặt dấu phẩy trước while
=> opinion -> opine

Tuyết Nhi

2023-12-04 13:32:00 UTC

1.Many people argue that using bicycle in cities should be spent more money on promotion, while others believe that public transportation should be the focus of investment in cities.Pesonally, i partly agree with the former view.

It is true that today in big cities, citizens can face to face with many problems in their daily life. In my opinion, i agree with this view
Many people argue that safari park is very heartless, and they are should be locked, while others think that safari park is helpful to keep value animal. This essay will delve into dicussing.. the latter one.

Quy

6xnvkrkt27 — 2023-12-04 13:34:42 UTC

1.Many people argue that more money must be spent to push the riding in town, while otherz believe that metropolises should motivate on investing in transportation systems.
2. It is true that people living in metropolises today deal with many problems in their everyday life

Long

2023-12-04 14:10:18 UTC

It is often argued that zoos are too brutal so they should be locked,whilst others digree and think wildlife parks play an important role to save unique animals.Personally,I completely agree with the former view.