Tell me about HOOKS! by

Tell me about HOOKS! by https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd Now that we have spent a few minutes exploring hooks, tell me what stood out to you in the video. List ONE to TWO things that were suggested to you about HOOKS. en-us 2021-03-04 13:40:57 UTC 2021-03-09 00:24:49 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.net/icons/png/1f3a3.png Never begin or end with someone else's words michelle_glick https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269636981 2021-03-04 15:42:44 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269636981 Anyone who starts with "So I guess I will tell you all about..." should be hit with a computer. lol michelle_glick https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269639224 2021-03-04 15:43:08 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269639224 aryan https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269665892 you could start with a fact or statistic]]> 2021-03-04 15:47:28 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269665892 Starting with a thesis is not good even if your hook is terrible never start with the thesis https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269666755 2021-03-04 15:47:37 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269666755 that you shou https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269666901 2021-03-04 15:47:39 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269666901 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269667595 that you should never start with "I was thinking about something to right and I got this"]]> 2021-03-04 15:47:46 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269667595 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269667898 To use the inverted pyramid method and start with a hook]]> 2021-03-04 15:47:48 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269667898 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269669144 The part where it starts talking about the different choices we could do like the Inverted pyramid and etc. ]]> 2021-03-04 15:48:01 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269669144 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269669634 Start with a hook, so you can grab the readers attention]]> 2021-03-04 15:48:06 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269669634 Start with something that can get the reader hooked like a fun fact or something that's interesting https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269671949 ali]]> 2021-03-04 15:48:31 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269671949 that you should start with something interesting https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269672333 2021-03-04 15:48:35 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269672333 don't start with your thesis or a questions unless the question is very good https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269674696 2021-03-04 15:48:58 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269674696 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269679233 You can start with an Inverted Pyramid.]]> 2021-03-04 15:49:46 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269679233 you should never start with the thesis https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269680964 2021-03-04 15:50:05 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269680964 using the inverted pyramid https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269682813 2021-03-04 15:50:25 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269682813 you should use something that catches the readers attention, or you could use the inverted pyramid https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269990093 2021-03-04 16:42:14 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1269990093 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270127411 you have a hook first, then a transition second, and your thesis last.]]> 2021-03-04 17:05:20 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270127411 some kinds of hooks are over used and boring, but they are still better than just using a thesis. michelle_glick https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270127919 2021-03-04 17:05:25 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270127919 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270128054 I noticed that the inverted pyramid was very important, as he used it for almost every example.]]> 2021-03-04 17:05:27 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270128054 You can use the strategy of the inverted pyramid. https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270128355 2021-03-04 17:05:29 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270128355 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270128899 two things that stood out to me is that, not only did they talk about interesting and elaborate intos like the inverted pyramid but it also talked about over used hooks- ]]> 2021-03-04 17:05:35 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270128899 I definitely agree with how questions can be overused. I see them many times in other essays and sometimes in mine too. https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270129383 2021-03-04 17:05:39 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270129383 Inverted Pyramid https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270130433 I like how you start with a hook and work our way to thesis, without the hook it would be boring and no one would have any interest in your reading.]]> 2021-03-04 17:05:50 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270130433 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270130732 Hook, transition, then thesis. The hook is something really important. Don't use something that was overused make it creative and want the reader to read it more.]]> 2021-03-04 17:05:53 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270130732 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270132638 A hook is always necessary, it helps to draw the reader in. I think the transition really helps get the reader into the points the author is trying to make without losing interest.]]> 2021-03-04 17:06:12 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270132638 using the inverted pyramid https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270132753 2021-03-04 17:06:13 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270132753 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270135402 Honest quoting thats not from the dictionary]]> 2021-03-04 17:06:40 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270135402 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270135870 The hook is arguably the most important part of a paper cause who wants to read if it looks lame in the beginning ]]> 2021-03-04 17:06:45 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270135870 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270135981 One thing suggested was to not start with a thesis as your hook.]]> 2021-03-04 17:06:46 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270135981 Faith- that it is important to have a hook, and the hook can be the most important part of the paper, using qoeuts is a bad hook if not backed by your own info and opinion, it shows very little effort to your hook https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270137734 2021-03-04 17:07:04 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270137734 E https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270137965 If you have no hook it is incredibly bland and boring

]]> 2021-03-04 17:07:07 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270137965 using an overused hook can actually hurt your essay instead of helping https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270138745 2021-03-04 17:07:14 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270138745 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270147554 If you use hooks too many times, it starts to become boring and it hurts your essay. Hooks need to be good and if they aren't, there's no point in having them.]]> 2021-03-04 17:08:43 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270147554 a hook is the start so it can either grabs the readers attention or makes them not like it, so you need to make sure you make your story sound very interested and eager https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270913755 2021-03-04 19:24:13 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270913755 Joshua Sanders https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270939587 you can use a rhetorical question for your hook. You can also use a bold advertisement for your hook. If you use a hook to much it will hurt your essay and make it worse.]]> 2021-03-04 19:29:32 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270939587 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270952976 to start with a broad idea then get specific]]> 2021-03-04 19:32:19 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270952976 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270953011 do not use a defenition as a hook ]]> 2021-03-04 19:32:19 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270953011 Joshua acuna https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270955430 never start with a thesis]]> 2021-03-04 19:32:48 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270955430 dont use a dictionary quuote https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270955697 2021-03-04 19:32:51 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270955697 eric https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270955872 dont use your thesis as a hook]]> 2021-03-04 19:32:53 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270955872 Jana https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270955913 I didn't know that the transition, thesis, and hook are in all one paragraph. ]]> 2021-03-04 19:32:54 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270955913 I LEARNED THAT YOU SHOULD ADD A HOOOK TO EVERYTHINGGG https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270956275 2021-03-04 19:32:58 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270956275 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270956647 do not use a definition for yours hook]]> 2021-03-04 19:33:03 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270956647 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270957869 never skip the hook ]]> 2021-03-04 19:33:17 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270957869 if you copy and paste you get in trouble https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270958720 2021-03-04 19:33:28 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270958720 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270960888 2021-03-04 19:33:53 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270960888 Never forget to put a hook https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270964234 2021-03-04 19:34:31 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270964234 use the inverted pyramid https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270964380 2021-03-04 19:34:33 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270964380 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270967409 2021-03-04 19:35:08 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270967409 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270968010 try not to use personal pro ouns ]]> 2021-03-04 19:35:16 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270968010 ;kfm wfwafwAFw https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270971939 ewvwerfqafe ew]]> 2021-03-04 19:36:03 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1270971939 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271350395 Bold Pronouncement]]> 2021-03-04 21:09:40 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271350395 Its me https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271354848 lying is VERY bad. (If you cant lie good.) Also you shouldent use dictionary quotes]]> 2021-03-04 21:11:04 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271354848 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271363751 I did not know that you have to include a transition in between the hook and the thesis.]]> 2021-03-04 21:13:44 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271363751 The bold pronouncement https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271365822 2021-03-04 21:14:22 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271365822 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271366184 never use someone's else's words other than others]]> 2021-03-04 21:14:30 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271366184 Genevieve https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271367637 What stood out to me was the bold pronouncement because I don't see that often in essays.]]> 2021-03-04 21:14:57 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271367637 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271367681 Use the inverted pyramid "statement, Transition, Thesis" ]]> 2021-03-04 21:14:58 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271367681 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271369231 The question hook is overused and doesn't get anyone's attention or impresses anyone as much]]> 2021-03-04 21:15:26 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271369231 Madison Clay https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271370483 Inverted pyramid and bold pronouncement]]> 2021-03-04 21:15:47 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271370483 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271375197 to not copy and paste and inverted pyramided ]]> 2021-03-04 21:17:16 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271375197 NEVER USE THIS HOOK>>> https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271375570 "well i was thinking about what to write for my essay and I came up with this..."
ew.
hit these people on the head PlEaSe]]> 2021-03-04 21:17:22 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271375570 a plain hook would not get a reader attention. You cant jump right into like the guy said about the bike "hey buddy, pal, friend...im in a bad situation would you mind helping me" instead of "Hey can I use your bike" https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271375872 2021-03-04 21:17:27 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271375872 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271378309 You can start with something broad that relates to your thesis and then use a transition to your thesis statement]]> 2021-03-04 21:18:10 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271378309 i like how creative you ca be with them https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271378333 2021-03-04 21:18:10 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271378333 Camila https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271378621 Don't go straight into thesis and never skip the hook.]]> 2021-03-04 21:18:16 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271378621 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271378756 never start an essay with the thesis, and don't use overused sentences like " this is what i came up with for my essay".]]> 2021-03-04 21:18:19 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271378756 hooks https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271379903 try to be original when using rhetorical questions as hooks ]]> 2021-03-04 21:18:41 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271379903 Ammar https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271382444 Intrigue your reader to make them support your controlling theory without even knowing it.]]> 2021-03-04 21:19:31 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1271382444 Some things that stood out to me https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275221942 Some things that stood out to me were the fact that there are many different types of hooks you can use, and yet some people forget and completly skip over it.]]> 2021-03-05 19:18:26 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275221942 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275221979 Never start an essay with the thesis, and dont skip the hook. It is better to have a bad hook than no hook at all.
Also if someone starts the essay like this "Well i was thinkinh about what to write with my essay and i came up with this..." just throw the essay away and hit them on the head. ]]> 2021-03-05 19:18:26 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275221979 What stood out to me https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275222095 Something that stood out to me is that it's recommended to not use a popular quote as a hook. I see these a lot and I agree about how it's overused. My favorite hook was when they were calling out the reader, when the narrator said "Everyone has lied. The person reading this and even the person who wrote this sentence," or something similar. It stood out to me and was my favorite hook.]]> 2021-03-05 19:18:28 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275222095 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275222358 Well a hook is supposed to grab someone's attention into the story/essay/article and if I remember correctly there are 5 types of hooks]]> 2021-03-05 19:18:32 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275222358 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275222970 its best not to used over used hooks such as beginning with a quote off the internet, unless you can elaborate on it, and catch your readers attention ]]> 2021-03-05 19:18:40 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275222970 never copyright https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275223948 2021-03-05 19:18:54 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275223948 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275225517 Hooks catch people's attention. Never start an essay with your thesis.]]> 2021-03-05 19:19:14 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275225517 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275226754 hooks are something that grabs the readers attention but it isn't what keeps it.]]> 2021-03-05 19:19:32 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275226754 Hooks https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275229451 The dictionary hook is boring and it won't grab a lot of people's attention.]]> 2021-03-05 19:20:09 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275229451 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275231373 Dictionary quote hooks are usually a bad idea because they are overused and unoriginal. ]]> 2021-03-05 19:20:37 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275231373 there can be many different types of hooks that are good and some that are bad so make sure to get someone's opinion. https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275234020 2021-03-05 19:21:14 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1275234020 https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1284995435 nm,dv]]> 2021-03-09 00:24:49 UTC https://padlet.com/michelle_glick/21j6dp0n8l5ycdxd/wish/1284995435