https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts Moderated writing samples en-us 2021-11-01 07:48:39 UTC 2023-06-13 05:17:49 UTC hello@padlet.com kopalb1 https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877890486 2021-11-09 10:54:40 UTC https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877890486 kopalb1 https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877892594 2021-11-09 10:55:54 UTC https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877892594 kopalb1 https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877893451 2021-11-09 10:56:25 UTC https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877893451 kopalb1 https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877899783 2021-11-09 11:00:24 UTC https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877899783 kopalb1 https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877900223 2021-11-09 11:00:42 UTC https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877900223 kopalb1 https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877901107 2021-11-09 11:01:20 UTC https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877901107 kopalb1 https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877905661 2021-11-09 11:04:10 UTC https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877905661 kopalb1 https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877906632 2021-11-09 11:04:46 UTC https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877906632 nataliep30 https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877910293 YEAR 3 FEEDBACK

We can see the good use of phonic sounds and common exception words.

We question the lack of any punctuation?

With the clear and correct use of full stops and capital letters, we would agree with this being a 4. ;) ]]> 2021-11-09 11:06:43 UTC https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877910293 nataliep30 https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877917294 Tense perfect throughout.
Clear time order.

We question the "excellent vocabulary" - the word 'put' is repeated for example.

Some inconsistency between capital letters and full stops.




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Agree with grading]]> 2021-11-09 11:11:20 UTC https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877917792 nataliep30 https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877919163 YEAR 3 FEEDBACK

Could this be a 2 rather than a 3?]]> 2021-11-09 11:12:09 UTC https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877919163 nataliep30 https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877919511 Should this be a 1 if there are no words?]]> 2021-11-09 11:12:22 UTC https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877919511 nataliep30 https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877923225 YEAR 3 FEEDBACK

Detailed writing, obvious flair for writing. Clearly a gifted child.]]> 2021-11-09 11:14:38 UTC https://padlet.com/davidallen/year2recounts/wish/1877923225