RECAP FEEDBACK AND SELF REFLECTION by The_Winchester_School https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3 What I liked in Emma's work is.... even better if....... en-us 2022-04-20 16:22:09 UTC 2025-04-24 09:45:01 UTC hello@padlet.com The_Winchester_School https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2150859578 2022-04-20 18:52:59 UTC https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2150859578 The_Winchester_School https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151495192 2022-04-21 05:27:41 UTC https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151495192 Mohamed & Hussein https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151601125 The language features in PEEL : 

1. The person should be 3rd person but in the last concluding paragraph it can be 1st person.

2. The tense should be perfect present tense.


]]> 2022-04-21 07:02:59 UTC https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151601125 Table 4 https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151601139 Tense: Present Tense
Person: 3rd person
Voice: Formal
  Emphasise and conclude with your point
True but only in link 
Title then Point
Point
Evidence and explanation
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Title

After title?
Sentence starters

What will you add to the body?
Tense and Person

Points or paragraph
Formal/informal

What do you call the end?
Link


]]> 2022-04-21 07:04:44 UTC https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151603133 Daksh and arham https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151603392 2022-04-21 07:04:59 UTC https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151603392 Maya 6 https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151604368 you must write in present tense and 3rd person. you have to be formal and include your own opinion in the conclusion. ]]> 2022-04-21 07:05:57 UTC https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151604368 Omiros, laith, maham, laila https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151606243 Conjunctions such a
Because
Before
And
On the other hand


]]> 2022-04-21 07:07:31 UTC https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151606243 Stacey 6E staceym_win https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151610278 Tense- Present Tense
Person- 1st Person
Voice- Formal



]]> 2022-04-21 07:11:00 UTC https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151610278 Nathan to Zeeshan https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151632558 Zeeshan did a good job because of how well he structure the paragraph]]> 2022-04-21 07:30:15 UTC https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2151632558 Anuhya - table 5 to table 2 capca21 https://padlet.com/The_Winchester_School/1yrak39swdjy2zm3/wish/2152209439 Table 2 did an exceptional job.  

2 stars ✨ ~
  • Sentence openers ✔
  • Points ✔
3 wishes ~
  • Grammar ⚠
  • More vocabulary ⚠
  • Did not link it well  ⚠
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