Narrative 3 - Building Narration by Jeff Stephanoff https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca You've set the scene, and got your story started, now let's get into the main part of your tale! en-us 2016-11-30 15:21:34 UTC 2025-11-19 00:49:26 UTC hello@padlet.com adian https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140865016 This is the story about my cousin Emma it was the greatest day of my life she was so beautiful  8 years later she is so playful she one of the seven girls my uncle tommy had She is as tall as me now she is ten now

v2 day i ran away from home was because my mom sister brother beat me so i ran away to my friends danny's house 2 days later they found me in his basement playing halo 4

v3day i spray painted central park in salinas i was with my friend montay and we went to my friends henry's  house we found spraypaint. we thought that it would be fun to spray a d**k pn a reck center

]]> 2016-11-30 16:25:03 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140865016 mili https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140866154 Have your sister burnt the food? I do when you had the house to our self. She was looking t.v she had to go bathroom and  a yelled at her “ the food” she came running the beans and the tortillas. I was so mad at her. I exclaimed “WHAT ARE WE GOING TO EAT”. So i just ate cup of noddle soup.]]> 2016-11-30 16:27:25 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140866154 Zach https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140867422 They came across a small black and yellowish-brown spotted kitten. They decided that it was perfect for me. As time marched on, and the kitten slowly grew, we formed a bond. We named him Sunshine, as his yellowy-brown spots seemed to appear like rays of bright sunshine. Whenever my cousins came over, we would always play with him, luring him to parts of the house with a laser pointer, snuggling him with blankets, and giving him toys to play with. Sunshine also grew attached to the other cats, and they would all play with each other. When I came home from school and walked up the driveway, Sunshine would always walk beside me.

]]> 2016-11-30 16:30:16 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140867422 jesus https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140869143 2016-11-30 16:34:35 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140869143 ramiro https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140870532 My story is about when my brother was born when my brother was born he was so small and i thought in my head if when i was born was i small like my brother and i told my mom was i small like my brother and she said yes and i told her if she can give me a plcture of my brother so i can remember  me when i was little like my brother.

]]> 2016-11-30 16:37:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140870532 jacy https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140874800 That night, we went to our hotel. Even the hotel was amazing. We put on our pajamas and went to bed. I could not sleep. I stared out the window at the glowing stairs outside , changing like the Northern Lights.
The next day, we went to Mount Vernon, the home of the first president. The next few days, we went to other places, such as the Museum of Natural History,the Capitol, the Library of Congress, and the Supreme Court. I knew we would leave this place that was so different from California. A good thing too, because I felt cut off from the ocean,the cool breeze and the constant sun. California is my home, not D.C. 

]]> 2016-11-30 16:47:02 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140874800 Elijah https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140876858    This is the story when I met Arnold,
It all started when I came to echo valley school.I was nervous that I would not make any friends at all. Then, I saw a group of students playing. I said, “Hey...Can I play?” Arnold said, “Yes, you can play” Then Arnold, his friends, and I became great friends to this very day.
]]> 2016-11-30 16:51:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140876858 Ana https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140878580 When we started running I look to the side and saw the ocean and a teacher asked me if I had ever seen the ocean and I responded no.Then she asked me if I wanted to see the ocean and I replied yes.After the race we went inside the bus. We were about to leave but then they said that some people are lost and that we will have to wait  until they find them.Than the teacher ask my mom if I could go with her and she said yes.We both went to down some stairs that lead to the beach. I couldn’t believe that I was in front of the ocean.It was the most wonderfull time of my life.]]> 2016-11-30 16:55:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140878580 Joseph https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140880138 The story continues, if we haven’t gave ruffy away then he would probably chewed up more wires because he chewed up my video games wire then everyone would be mad if he chewed up the tv wires but the good news is that when he went to the bathroom we had to pick it up it was grows but our back yard was clean and if it wasn’t clean and the grass is long we would have stepped on and that would be bad,he never went to the bathroom inside the house he was awesome,he was the best.]]> 2016-11-30 16:59:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/140880138 Deandra https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141172984 I recall that I was at my neighbor's house. I saw all of the pups and he said I could have one. I  didn’t like the brown one so  I chose the one that was white. He was the only white puppy . He was smaller than the rest of them I think he was the runt . I named him frigerio. When I got home my mom, dad, and I said ‘’thank you’’

]]> 2016-12-01 16:49:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141172984 jose https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141174464 One time my friend and we went to the park with my friend Uriel and some kids challenged ust to a game i felt so mad that  i was not ready for a game then my friend past it and i was in front of the golly and i scored my first goal.I was so happy that me and my friend, and that i scored my first goal.]]> 2016-12-01 16:53:33 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141174464 briceida https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141176718 The story continous……..my brother just started laughing and i told them not to say  nothing to my famliy and they didnt so then we just went to other games to play.we had to go outside to eat and mi tia made a bunch of tortas of asada that were really good we ate candies, chips, and desserts.


]]> 2016-12-01 16:58:58 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141176718 valeria https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141176729 The story continues with me waiting at my grandparents house waiting and waiting for that call from my dad saying my little sister was finally here. At about 9:30 am we get the call i am so excited we rush to the watsonville hospital i remember i was wearing my big sister shirt. We stopped at the store my cuzin and i were arguing on what we were gonna get for my mom my cuzin said “ we should get a blankie and a little pjs”. But wanted to get a teddy bear after this was when i finally started

]]> 2016-12-01 16:58:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141176729 JJ https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141177680 The story continues, when my dad said let's go home and have dinner but i said one more passes my dad threw it as far as he could and I ran as fast as i could I ran and i some how caught it .And i cept on saying one more for hours.I recall that i threw a perfect spiral and the perfect height it hit my dad right in the chest.Suddenly it occurred to me that we were late to dinner so we walked faster and faster until we reached the bottom of the huge hill.Once I realized no cars were passing my dad and i ran to the other side of the hill.As time passed we were at our house , as soon as we got in are driveway,We heard are dog barking.This led to us giving the leftovers of are dinner to are dog.The situation grew after that night playing catch every saturday night.]]> 2016-12-01 17:01:37 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141177680 arnold https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141177715 The story continues.i was giving the dog food and my dog is always hungry but for some reason she was not coming to eat  her favorite food.Then i wanted to go play fetch and my dog was just not feeling it and she just lade down and when to the bathroom and then i was thinking that she was sick so i asked my mom to go to the vet and so we did. It turns out that she was pregnant with a puppy.And i was sooo happy and it was awesome.]]> 2016-12-01 17:01:42 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141177715 Samantha https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141181218 I took my mouthpiece out and tried putting my mouth in the right position.   Finally, I blew into it, but there wasn't a sound.  I was really frustrated that I couldn't make a sound on the first few tries.  After that, I felt determined to make a sound with  the mouthpiece.  So I kept trying… and trying….. and trying.

]]> 2016-12-01 17:10:27 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141181218 Logan https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141182548 Later we woke up at about 4 or 5am in the morning to get to the park about noon. So then I woke up and had to get dressed. I was so tired and lousy that I had to do stuff that early in the morning. We had to pack and figure out who is sitting where. We always stop at this diner about 30 minutes into our drive. That always tells me that were are getting getting closer to the mountains that always amaze me. About  an hour away from the mountains we reach a city that always staggered me because of all the tall buildings and attractions. That got me happy because my mom told me that the city meant that  we were about 30 minutes from Disneyland, and ever  since my mom told me that every time I go passed that city I know we are about 30 minutes away from Disneyland. Then I saw it, the entrance of Disneyland, I shouted “Yes!” in excitement. Finally this four hour trip was over, and worth it. We had to go sign into the hotel and off to the park we went to the park. We have a ridden a bunch of rides Splash Mountain and Thunder Mountain. But then i heard the announcement “The Fantasmic Parade will start in 20 minutes. So are family rushed over to the lake to get our seats and then it started we saw the two boats come out just imagine good and bad fighting, lights flying all over the place, fire bursting, cannons, “magic” characters flying in air colorful water spouts exploding above the water and it finished. I was astonished and aroused. All I could think about walking back to the hotel was how and what did I just watch. All I was doing, was playing was playing back what I just watched, “The Fantasmic Parade.”

]]> 2016-12-01 17:13:18 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141182548 Cesar https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141183321 We were so exited on the haunted house  then we went to the mummy ride .....]]> 2016-12-01 17:14:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141183321 alfredo https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141183813 Second half  was way more dirty than the first the other team golie got a red card everybody was screaming , laughing i all got loud cause they give a red card than a penalty but instead a red card  and it was getting loud , too much kaos.]]> 2016-12-01 17:15:54 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141183813 Luisa's Narritive https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141184534 I was scared when i went outside and i walked all the way to my friends house. It was scary but yet it was adventures. I saw lots of plants. I kept on walking,walking, and walking until i got there. I was walking with my backpack filled with my stuff. I called my friend and she came running to me then and then she kept asking me questions and i just went in her house and put my stuff on the couch so we started talking i told her that i was super nervous and i will get in trouble and that they will find me so then something happened… to be continued...]]> 2016-12-01 17:17:20 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141184534 Mabel https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141185568 “Hi” said Luisa, shyly.
“ Oh hi, don’t you want to play water balloons?” "No, Do u want to become friends?" asked Luisa
]]> 2016-12-01 17:19:38 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141185568 mason I remember Changing Schools.I dident want to but i had to cause i wasent readyIve been wanting to go back because i think i was doing better thereI was gone from my old school for 1 and a half years now i want bwant to go back but i dont think i can but maybe i can find a school like it for middle school https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141189459 2016-12-01 17:28:56 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141189459 Amelia https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141442533 The story continues with it the next morning. I woke up excited and ready to play. When we pulled up I was so excited and I was constantly looking at my cupcakes every second and every minute. When I got inside everyone was saying happy birthday Ame. I said thankyou. Then I saw my Aunt pull up and when she got out of the car she gave me my present and I saw something in her hand but I didn’t know what it was.  ]]> 2016-12-02 17:02:51 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141442533 Marilyn's Narrative https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141814815 The more we played together, the more our friendship grew.]]> 2016-12-05 17:21:59 UTC https://padlet.com/jeff_stephanoff/1ylgy7uhlrca/wish/141814815