https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3 For 10.38 Group (Seán) en-us 2017-06-23 10:53:22 UTC 2023-10-14 07:04:24 UTC hello@padlet.com ml17840 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177289949  Dreamy&Chloe]]> 2017-06-23 11:51:08 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177289949 dl17770 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290163 Vivienne&Amire ]]> 2017-06-23 11:54:26 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290163 yx17773 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290230 2017-06-23 11:55:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290230 bo17014 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290342 2017-06-23 11:57:38 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290342 bo17014 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290474 Belen and Fanella (up)]]> 2017-06-23 12:00:06 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290474 yg17548 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290613 2017-06-23 12:02:53 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290613 dw17947 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290669 2017-06-23 12:03:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290669 yj17605 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290715 2017-06-23 12:04:18 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290715 yg17548 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290716 2017-06-23 12:04:20 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177290716 sc168032 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177306203 Nicely written paragraphs everyone. It was also great to see so many different rules being addressed. Pay particular attention to the ones on subject pronouns (no 'I', 'you', 'we'); vague, emotive or colloquail language and use of declarative statements.]]> 2017-06-23 15:30:10 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177306203 gs17848 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177811441 2017-06-30 11:09:49 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177811441 ml17840 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177811450 muddiest points from Dreamy]]> 2017-06-30 11:09:58 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177811450 dw17947 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177811497 2017-06-30 11:11:00 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177811497 yx17773 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177811520 2017-06-30 11:11:30 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177811520 gs17848 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177811549 2017-06-30 11:12:24 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177811549 bo17014 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177811565 Belen]]> 2017-06-30 11:12:37 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177811565 gs17848 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/177811588 C
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B) Transitions between paragraphs
C) Cohesion and coherence
D) Selection of evidence
E) Writing topic sentences
F) Explaining sentences (mid-paragraph)]]> 2017-07-07 11:50:16 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/178259821 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/178324317 Chloe ]]> 2017-07-09 09:14:28 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/178324317 yj17605 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/178324941 2017-07-09 09:48:07 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/178324941 dw17947 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/178325891 2017-07-09 10:42:02 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/178325891 ml17840 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/178327369 2017-07-09 12:01:43 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/178327369 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/178335377 Rachel]]> 2017-07-09 16:36:54 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/178335377 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/178335444 2017-07-09 16:39:17 UTC https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/178335444 sc168032 https://padlet.com/sc168032/1ydxla06e8z3/wish/178338601 A)  This comes in the final sentence of each body paragraph and should be linked to your conclusion.  It should make a comment based on the main topic and explanatory evidence.  For an example see Student Materials pg. 79 (end of both body paragraphs)

B)   Transitions between paragraphs involves linking the topic sentence of body paragraph 2 with the final sentence of body paragraph 1.  It is done with a referent or a linking word.

C)  Cohesion is a grammatical skill which is achieved through use of cohesive devices (see pg. 50/51).  Coherence is best achieved through transition words and linking the topic sentences to the map/thesis for logical flow.

D) Evidence, at present, should be drawn from Browne and the lecture.  To use it requires a combination of selection, reporting structures and signposting language.

E)    Topic sentences should be a short, general (no specific information) summary of the body paragraph’s main idea.  Think of them as simple sentences like headings.

F) Explaining sentences are used for supporting ideas and as best indicated through appropriate signposting language.  We will focus on how to do this in the upcoming weeks.



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B) Counter-argument paragraphs
C) Concise opening sentences
D) Expanding conclusions
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F) Map
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