1. 종이로 나눠 준 위 체크리스트에 항목별로 수정 검토하면서 영어 에세이 왼성하기

2. 그리고 헤당 번호 탭에 학번 이름 쓰고 타이핑한 영어 에세이로 업로드하기

3. 체크 리스트는 자신이 작성하여 선생님께 제출하기

prompt:

Hi, Nice to meet you. I am writing an English essay about the environment. If there are any grammar mistakes in my sentences, please correct them and explain why.

A family is eatting ramen. They are useing disposable items. People poured ramen soup into the toilet. Why did people pour ramen soup into the toilet? We should recycling waste proper. There is many food waste.

1. intro: New York city people just throw away food waste with common trash. Every year, food for 2billion peole is being wasted

2. Problem: our food waste problem is serious

Reason: Meat makes methane gas when it is made and when it is thrown away. Methane gas makes the Earth hotter."

Process for Solution: When food waste is put in the ground, it makes methane gas. Methane gas is stronger than carbon gas and makes the Earth warmer.

When food waste is burned or put in the ground, it can make the air, soil, and water dirty."

3. solution: We should know that food waste is a big problem. We should use less food and tell others.

1.Intro. When food is packed and delivered, a lot of plastic is used. We need eco-friendly containers. Plastic pollution is terrible.

2.Body. I think the problem is that there's so much plastic that we can't bury it in landfills. Eco-friendly containers are so expensive that restaurants are using plastic containers.

3.Conclusion. We shouldn't use plastic containers. The price of eco-friendly containers should be lowered.

3. Practice Zero Waste

Introduction: The United States is struggling with managing recyclable waste due to the cessation of exporting recyclables to China.

Body: This has caused a rise in domestic accumulation of recyclable materials, increasing landfill use and environmental pollution. Improved recycling practices are urgently needed to conserve resources, cut disposal costs, and benefit both the environment and economy. Investing in recycling infrastructure and educating the public to reduce contamination are crucial steps.

Concluson: Addressing these challenges comprehensively is vital for a sustainable future and reducing the ecological footprint of waste management practices."

Intro: The USA is giving up on recycling and is buryins almost all of its waste in the ground

Problem:The recycling process is not working well

Reason:the reason is that the proportion of waste being recycling is small compared to the amount of waste currently being produced

Solution

-Government:Make Rules( Create laws to make recycling a must.)

-Companies:Create Green Products(Make products that can be recycled.)

-Individuals:Sort Trash( Sort your trash at home for recycling.)

INTRO_This video says that using products that are better for people than plastic makes less greenhouse gas.

PROBLEM_The biggest problem on our planet is that using and throwing away plastic makes a lot of pollution. This is because plastic takes 500 years to break down in landfills. Also, landfills smell bad because trash is not sorted properly.

SOLUTION_To fix this problem, we should use products that do not cause as much pollution as plastic and sort our trash correctly. This is something we can do.

Food waste isn't properly separated, and with 800 million people facing food stortages, wasting food is wrong. Create food waste disaposal areas. Take only what you eat.

2Plastic waste is bad for marine life and comes back to us

3Reduce the use of single-use plastic products and use reusable items. Use reusable items like shopping bags, water bottles, and straws. Properly sort and recycle plastic products.

thrown way together.To save our planet, the biggest issue seems to be food waste.this is because food waste emits methane gas bduring decompositien,which is 21times stronger than carbon dioxide.we should make eat only what we can finish and separate our waste properly

2.Some places have recycling problems.

3.The U.S. buries trash.

4.This means putting trash in the ground.

5.Use less plastic to help the Earth.

6.Use things you can use again.

7.Use more recycled stuff.

8.Recycling is important.

9.It keeps the Earth clean.

10.Everyone should recycle and use less plastic.

1.Intro Animals in the video were being harmed by plastic

In the video,75% of ocean trash is plastic, and 22% comes

from marine sources

2.body There is too much plastic trash or platic bags in the ocean

3.Throwing trash into the ocean can harm marine life,so we should not do it

Environmental pollution is a serious problem. Discarded plastic waste flows into the oceans, harming marine life. This problem ultimately affects us too, as the fish we eat consume this ocean garbage, which then impacts our own bodies. Therefore, we must reduce plastic use.

Body

How? The 1st, avoid single-use plastics, like switching to bamboo toothbrushes. The 2nd, Properly recycle waste to keep it out of the oceans. The 3rd, Reduce food waste.

Conclusion

Protecting the Earth requires our efforts to cut back on plastic.

Intro

Plastics are harming the Earth, because people are wasting plastics. However, a restaurant in Taiwan uses eco-friendly plastics to reduce harm.

Body

Plastics are hard to recycle, but burning them is also a problem. They also float in places like oceans, and hurt sea animals. And the reason is people wasting Non-recylable plastics. To reduce plastics, we can use eco-friendly plastics. Those plastics can break down naturally.

Conclusion

Just like I mentioned above, we should use eco-friendly plastics that can decompose naturally.

2.Food waste is being discarded without being separated from general waste and recyclable waste. Including uneaten food that is thrown away, there are about 12 million places where waste is piling up.

3.Even if you leave food, let's at least recycle it properly.

1.intro: The environment is destroyed by the use of a lot of

plastic containers because of the delivery.

2.Body:Non-recyclable plastic waste is often dumped in the. ocean or burned, causing environmental damage.

3.conclusion:We should replace with recyclable containers.

We should reduce plastic use.

Intro: "Recently, there's been more plastic and other trash on Earth. This increase is causing natural disasters like global warming."

body: "I believe this situation has come about because people use a lot of plastic and other necessary items in their daily lives, but often fail to dispose of them properly."

conlusion:"To solve this problem, people can reduce waste by practicing zero waste, using tumblers instead of plastic bottles, and switching to eco-friendly bags."

Introduction

Around the world, about 1.3 billion tons of food is thrown away every year. This wasted food is worth around $2.6 trillion.

Body

This huge amount of food waste is causing a lot of damage to the environment. Especially, the methane gas released as the food rots is a major contributor to global warming.

The greenhouse gas emissions from disposing of all this food waste amount to 8.86 million tons per year, making the environmental problem even worse.

Conclusion

To solve this problems,We should Buy and cook only as much as you can eat

🧊 Organize your refrigerator

🚿 Remove moisture from food waste

By practicing these three methods, you can effectively reduce food waste at the individual level. Additionally, this can contribute to environmental protection and climate change mitigation

A lot of plastic waste is generated during deliveries. I think plastic waste is problem because it is hard to recycle and emits a lot of greenhouse gases when processed. We should use dishes made from corn starch or containers made straw.

This happens because people buy food they don't end up eating and later throw it away. The waste comes from packaging materials used when purchasing food, and food waste is often dumped indiscriminately, leading to environmental pollution.

solutions To combat this, all purchased food should be consumed, and all packaging should be properly recycled.

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1. 구조화: 3가지 구조로, intro에는 환경에 해를 끼치는 상황 설명을 쓰고, body에는 앞 상황에 대한 problem을 분명히 드러내고 그 이유와 원인 분석을 제시할 것, 그리고 conclusion에는 앞에서 제시한 problem에 대한 실천적 행동을 제안하기

2. 형식: 총 10개 이내의 문장으로 정리하고, 중1 학생들이 이해하기 쉬운 영어 표현과 간결한 문장으로 정리하기

3. 문법: I think~ 구문과 I /We should~구문을 반드시 1개씩 사용할 것

그리고 자신의 영어 글 붙이기(예시)

The U.S.A was producing a lot of trash, but they were not recycling at all. As a result, they have some problems with trash. The U.S.A was very strong country, but why they were not good at recycling? There were a lot of results, the first waas that they didn't establish their recycling policies. Some states was establishing their recycling polices, but the country and many other states didn't have any recycling polices. the second point was, that people in the U.S.A are not well-informed about recycling. Many people didn't know which types of trash can be recycled. To increase the amount of trash we recycle, we have to establish recycling policy and educate people about recycling. If we don't take action, a large amount of trash will produce a lot of methane, and it will cause a lot of polution.

2. Tuvalu suffers from water shortages and changes in diet due to drought and rising sea levels.

3. Rising sea temperatures and levels are causing the disappearance of coral reefs and palm trees.

4. Despite declaring national abandonment in 2001, Tuvalu residents still wish to remain, and the government is making efforts to prevent coastal erosion.

5. Pastor Lusama's visit raises awareness of the need to change our lifestyle to combat global warmING

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### Environmental Essay Structured for Middle School Students

**Introduction:**

1. Many activities harm our environment.

**Body:**

2. I think pollution is a big problem.

3. Pollution comes from cars, factories, and plastic waste.

4. These things make the air dirty and harm animals in the ocean.

5. We should also worry about deforestation.

6. Cutting down trees destroys animal homes and increases carbon dioxide.

**Conclusion:**

7. We should use public transport to reduce car pollution.

8. We must recycle plastic to keep the oceans clean.

9. I think we should plant more trees to help the environment.

10. By doing these things, we can protect our planet.

1.Intro. reduce waste

2. Problem: Thore is a lot of garbage in the ocean

   
   

   Reason: we need to recycle marine debris

3. Solution: we should recycle marine derbris and reduce waste

Recycle and save: Use less stuff and recycle more.

Stronger rules: Make stricter laws to protect the environment.

Teach and learn: Tell people about climate change so they understand.

Work together: All countries need to help each other.

Places like Tuvalu are in trouble because of climate change, so we all need to help.

"Reduce plastic use, recycle properly, support eco-friendly products, and participate in clean-up efforts

Introduction

When food is packed and delivered, a lot of plastic is used.

Plastic pollution is terrible.

Body

I think the problem is that there's so much plastic that we can't bury it in landfills.

Eco-friendly containers are so expensive that restaurants are using plastic containers.

Conclusion

We shouldn't use plastic containers.

The price of eco-friendly containers should be lowered.

There are too many disposable products.

These products and waste can harm the environment.

Body

I think disposable products are a big problem.

When they go into the ocean, they can kill whales and other sea animals.

This happens because animals eat or get trapped in the trash.

Conclusion

We should use fewer disposable products.

We should recycle more.

We should practice Zero Waste.

By doing these things, we can help save the environment.

Introduction

Many people throw plastic into the ocean. This harms the environment.

Body

I think plastic in the ocean is a big problem. It can kill fish and other sea animals. Plastic takes many years to break down. This means it stays in the ocean for a long time.

Conclusion

We should stop using so much plastic. We can use reusable bags and bottles. By doing this, we can help save the ocean and its animals.

Introduction:

In New York City, people just throw away food waste with common trash.

Every year, food for 2 billion people is being wasted.

Body:

I think our food waste problem is serious.

Meat makes methane gas when it is made and when it is thrown away.

Methane gas is stronger than carbon gas and makes the Earth warmer.

When food waste is put in the ground, it makes methane gas.

When food waste is burned or put in the ground, it can make the air, soil, and water dirty.

Conclusion:

We should know that food waste is a big problem.

We should use less food and tell others.

If we all work together, we can help protect our planet

Intro:

The environment is destroyed by the use of a lot of plastic containers because of the delivery. I think this is a big problem for our planet.

Body:

Non-recyclable plastic waste is often dumped in the ocean or burned. This causes a lot of environmental damage.

Conclusion:

We should replace plastic containers with recyclable ones. We should reduce plastic use in our daily lives. By doing this, we can help save the environment.

Introduction

1. Plastic used often for delivery is harming the environment.

2. I think the problem is the plastic waste from delivery containers being used and thrown away.

Body

3. This plastic waste pollutes our land and water.

4. Animals can get hurt or die because they eat the plastic.

5. I think people use too much plastic and do not recycle enough.

Conclusion

6. We should use less plastic to protect the environment.

7. We should use straw containers as much as possible instead of plastic ones.

8. We should also recycle more and throw away less.

9. I think everyone should do their part to help the planet.

10. Together, we can make a big difference.

Introduction:

I think our environment is in danger because of pollution and trash.

Body:

The problem is dirty air and water.

Cars and factories make the air and water dirty.

We also have too much trash, like plastic.

. This trash goes into the ocean and hurts animals.. We use a lot of things once and then throw them away.

Conclusion:

. We should use less plastic and recycle more.

I should walk or ride a bike instead of using a car.

We can plant trees to make the air clean.

If we do these things, our environment will be better.

Body

1. Problem: Methane gas is bad for the environment.

2. Reason: I think this happens because people don't separate food waste.

3. Cause: Wasting food is wrong because many people don't have enough to eat.

Conclusion

1. Action: We should have special places for food waste.

2. Action: People should only take the food they will eat.부르부르닥쿠

A lot of plastic waste is generated during deliveries.

Body:

I think plastic waste is a problem because it is hard to recycle. When we throw away plastic, it can stay in the environment for many years. Also, processing plastic emits a lot of greenhouse gases.

Conclusion:

We should use dishes made from corn starch or containers made from straw. These materials are easier to recycle and better for the environment.

1. I think our environment is in danger because of pollution.

2. Plastic waste and air pollution are big problems.

Body 3. Plastic waste harms sea animals and pollutes the ocean. 4. Air pollution causes health problems and makes the air dirty. 5. These problems come from using too much plastic and burning fossil fuels.

Conclusion 6. We should use less plastic to help the environment. 7. We should recycle more to reduce waste. 8. We should use public transport or walk to reduce air pollution. 9. Everyone can do small things to make a big difference. 10. Let's work together to keep our Earth clean!

INTRO

This video explains that using products that are better for people than plastic produces less greenhouse gas.

problem
I think that the biggest problem on our planet is that using and discarding plastic creates a lot of pollution. This is because plastic takes 500 years to decompose in landfills. Additionally, landfills smell bad because trash is not sorted properly.

conclusion
To address this problem, we should use products that do not cause as much pollution as plastic and sort my trash correctly. This is something I can do.

Introduction:

Environmental pollution is a serious problem. Discarded plastic waste flows into the oceans, harming marine life. This problem ultimately affects us too, as the fish we eat consume this ocean garbage, which then impacts our own bodies. Therefore, we must reduce plastic use.

Body:

How can we do this?

Avoid single-use plastics, like switching to bamboo toothbrushes.

Properly recycle waste to keep it out of the oceans.

Reduce food waste.

Conclusion:

Protecting the Earth requires our efforts to cut back on plastic. Small actions can lead to big changes.

Some places do not recycle well.

Body:

I think this is bad for the Earth.

Trash in the ground makes the soil and water dirty. Recycling keeps the Earth clean.

We should use recycled things and reusable items.

Conclusion:

We should use less plastic.

Everyone should recycle more.

I believe we can help the Earth.

Let's start recycling today.

Food waste is not being separated for recycling.

This means food waste is mixed with general and recyclable waste.

Body:

3. I think this is a big problem.

4. It causes more pollution and waste.

5. When food waste is not separated, it cannot be recycled properly.

6. We should separate food waste to reduce pollution.

Conclusion:

7. Even if you leave food, let's at least recycle it properly.

8. We should use separate bins for food waste.

9. By doing this, we can help the environment.

10. Together, we can make a big difference.

People in New York throw away a lot of food. This waste creates harmful methane gas, which damages the environment.

Body:

I think this happens because people buy too much food. They do not eat all the food they buy and throw away the extra. The packaging from the food also adds to the waste problem. This waste often ends up in landfills, causing pollution.

Conclusion:

We should eat all the food we buy. We should also recycle the packaging properly. This will help reduce waste and protect the environment.

Problem: We use lots of plastic for food wrapping, over 75% of our trash. Weekly, it's about a credit card-sized amount.

Solution: For restaurant food, we bring our own containers and use tumblers for water.

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Today, I would like to talk about plastic pollution.

This problem occurs because we use lots of plastic for food wrapping.

We can address this issue by for restaurant food, we bring our own containers and use tumblers for water.

1. Plastic and disposable items contribute to global warming.

2. Their production and disposal release greenhouse gases.

3. Rising temperatures cause environmental issues.

<Body>

4. Overusing these items is a major problem.

5. Manufacturing requires energy and resources, increasing emissions.

6. Discarded items harm the environment.

<Conclusion>

7. Use less plastic and disposable items.

8. Stores can use plant-based plastics.

9. This can reduce emissions and prevent global warming.

10. Small changes can create sustainability.

Intro

The United States of America is giving up on recycling and is burying almost all of its waste in the ground. The recycling process is not working well because the proportion of waste being recycled is very small compared to the amount of waste currently being produced.

Bady

To solve this recycling problem that even a powerful country like the United States struggles with, the government needs to create laws to make recycling mandatory. Companies should produce products that can be recycled, and individuals must sort their trash at home f⅔or recycling.

Conclusion

If these measures are implemented, the recycling system will improve, greatly benefiting environmental protection.

The Environmental Impact of Food Waste in New York City

Introduction

New York City is grappling with a significant food waste problem, leading to serious environmental consequences.

Body

Food waste in landfills produces methane, a potent greenhouse gas contributing to climate change. Additionally, the plastic packaging breaks down into microplastics, polluting the environment. To mitigate these issues, citizens must reduce food waste and properly compost food scraps.

Conclusion

By taking these simple actions, individuals in New York City can work towards a more sustainable future.

Many people throw trash in the rivers and oceans.

This pollution harms animals and plants in the water.

Body

I think this is a big problem because it kills many fish and birds. When fish eat plastic, they get sick and die. Also, dirty water can make people sick when they drink it.

Conclusion

We should stop throwing trash in the water. We should use less plastic and recycle more. Everyone needs to work together to keep our environment clean.

Many people throw trash on the ground and pollute the environment.

Body

This is a big problem because it harms animals and plants.

I think pollution makes the air dirty and can make people sick.

One reason for pollution is that people do not recycle their waste.

Another reason is that factories release harmful chemicals into the water and air.

Conclusion

We should recycle our trash to keep the environment clean.

I should also try to use less plastic and more reusable items.

We can help by planting trees to improve the air quality.

Everyone should work together to protect our planet.

By doing these things, we can make a big difference.

1. Plastic waste pollutes the ocean.

2. 75% of marine litter is plastic waste.

Body:

3. I think plastic waste is bad for marine life.

4. Plastic waste also comes back to us through the food chain.

5. This happens because fish and other sea animals eat the plastic.

Conclusion:

6. We should reduce the use of single-use plastic products.

7. Use reusable items like shopping bags and water bottles.

8. Properly sort and recycle plastic waste.

U.S. marine debris is a problem

Body

The problem with America's trash is that people don't care about recycling.

The reason is that recycling costs money and people don’t know how to recycle.

This happens because people don't care about the environment and just throw away trash.

Conclusion

People learn to care about the environment and recycle.

Introduction

New York City faces a significant food waste problem with serious environmental consequences.

Body

Food waste in landfills produces methane, a potent greenhouse gas, and plastic packaging breaks down into harmful microplastics.

Conclusion

To address this, citizens should reduce food waste and compost food scraps to work towards sustainability.

food waste

Around the world, about 1.3 billion tons of food is thrown away every year.This huge amount of food waste is causing a lot of damage to the environment. Especially, the methane gas released as the food rots is a major contributor to global warming.

The greenhouse gas emissions from disposing of all this food waste amount to 8.86 million tons per year, making the environmental problem even worse.Conclusion

To solve this problems,We should Buy and cook only as much as you can eat

By practicing these three methods, you can effectively reduce food waste at the individual level.