https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g According to what you read in the student examples please describe the attributes of a vignette. Then in a separate post please list out which line stood out to you the most in each piece and why it stood out. en-us 2018-01-17 14:31:34 UTC 2018-01-17 16:16:27 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet-assets.s3.amazonaws.com/icons/File.png https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222076698 A short account of an author's personal experience and the emotions or thoughts that went along with it.]]> 2018-01-17 14:38:57 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222076698 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222076958 Melissa Kiser
Written in first person]]> 2018-01-17 14:39:27 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222076958 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222077153 Melissa Kiser
Uses strong describing words to show what happened and how the author felt in that moment, instead of telling what happened.]]> 2018-01-17 14:39:52 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222077153 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222077183 The List: "I will work. I will rise above everything I have done." It shows how the narrator was not only devastated, but also invigorated and motivated by the snub.

The Game: "All of our work was nothing." It conveys how the narrator felt hopeless and completely distraught after losing the game.

Finding Jane: "You do, you struggle with everything." It shows how the narrator is not only not content with her looks, but also dislikes her performance in every other area of her life.]]> 2018-01-17 14:39:56 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222077183 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222077216 2018-01-17 14:40:00 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222077216 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222077652 A recollection of the author's past that includes descriptive detail, conflict they overcame, and inner dialog. - Kaylee Trbovich]]> 2018-01-17 14:40:52 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222077652 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222078856 A short, descriptive story in the first person detailing with vivid imagery and figurative language an inner conflict.]]> 2018-01-17 14:43:27 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222078856 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222078906 A retelling of a short but very emotional moment in the author's life.]]> 2018-01-17 14:43:34 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222078906 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222078970 The writing is all about showing and not telling. very detailed]]> 2018-01-17 14:43:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222078970 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222079079 "They will regret this decision" - Willing to fight for what they want
" I could hear Battle begin to roar like a lion who had just massacred its prey" - intense imagery and figurative language
" I now looked at the beautiful girl standing in front of me" - solid resolution to the piece 
Kaylee T

]]> 2018-01-17 14:43:58 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222079079 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222079655 A vignette is a short story that uses descriptive details and figurative language to get the point across.]]> 2018-01-17 14:45:16 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222079655 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222079771 Finding Jane:" I mean look at you Jane; askewed, bulbous nose, fat chipmunk cheeks, thunder thighs, purple hands making sure you know that you are always cold." It is very descriptive and shows exactly how she feels about herself.
The Game: "Saying goodbye to my brothers was like a beautiful flower dying in my hands." It is very descriptive and it really brings home his emotions.
The List: " The light tinkling of my heart shattering was heard only through my flaming ears, but I was too furious to even care." This is very descriptive, and it really shows how the author felt in the moment.]]> 2018-01-17 14:45:30 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222079771 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222079894 2018-01-17 14:45:44 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222079894 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222079914 Descriptive word choice 
First person POV ]]> 2018-01-17 14:45:48 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222079914 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222079964 "Love yourself" i demanded"  really stood out to me ]]> 2018-01-17 14:45:56 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222079964 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222080042 A Vignette is an excerpt that through the use of many rhetorical devices the author shows and not tells in first person narrative ]]> 2018-01-17 14:46:07 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222080042 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222080306 "askewed, bulbous nose, fat chipmunk cheeks, thunder thighs, purple hands making sure you know that you are always cold" - Vivid imagery used

"Brothers I've given my all. Brothers who have in return given me their all. Brothers who have been there through thick and thin" - Repetition of the word "brother"

"It’s not like you care anyway. I have something I actually care about upstairs." - Inner thought/conflict]]> 2018-01-17 14:46:47 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222080306 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222080366 The story is very descriptive. And shows there physical state and there mental. ]]> 2018-01-17 14:46:54 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222080366 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222080483 Finding Jane: "The way this light reflects off of my it brings out so many tones: some gold, some yellow, and some browns." Detailed Imagery
The Game: "I could hear Battle begin to roar like a lion who had just massacred its prey." Very strong imagery and simile used
Stories from the School Grounds: " looked up and saw a crisp, white paper taped to the tile, shining out against the yellow color like a jewel in a mine." Strong imagery used]]> 2018-01-17 14:47:08 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222080483 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222080484 "crisp, white paper taped to the tile," 
"I"]]> 2018-01-17 14:47:08 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222080484 rigglemanvalerie26 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222080886 Uses syntax, and has the main subject overcome some obstacle, also uses many different forms of rhetorical devices.]]> 2018-01-17 14:47:57 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222080886 burwelllane26 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222081095 -First Person
-Lots of inner dialogue
-Clean and smooth usages of descriptive detail and context.]]> 2018-01-17 14:48:23 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222081095 rigglemanvalerie26 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222081366 All in first person, past tense]]> 2018-01-17 14:49:03 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222081366 rigglemanvalerie26 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222081604 Personal insight

]]> 2018-01-17 14:49:35 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222081604 rigglemanvalerie26 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222081741 Shows instead of telling with the use of descriptive adjectives and diction

]]> 2018-01-17 14:49:52 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222081741 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222081995 Finding Jane: "God, I hate myself. I mean look at you Jane; askewed, bulbous nose, fat chipmunk cheeks, thunder thighs, purple hands making sure you know that you are always cold. Your eyebrows can’t even keep themselves up, who struggles with their eyebrows? You do, you struggle with everything. " These lines stood out to me because the author uses imagery, and self to self conflict to describe her true feelings.
The game: "Saying goodbye to my brothers was like a beautiful flower dying in my hands." the author uses a simile to portray how strongly they felt about the bond on the team and how much they would miss it.

The list: " I will work. I will rise above everything I have done."
This choice of diction is so strong and shows the true determination of the author.

]]> 2018-01-17 14:50:25 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222081995 rigglemanvalerie26 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222083146 The List: "It's not like you care anyway" -shows inner thoughts
The Game: " I could feel my heart pounding like a tympani" - Good comparisons
Finding Jane: " Why can't I just be happy?" - shows inner thoughts]]> 2018-01-17 14:53:10 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222083146 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222083191 "My heart burned for  the people who had wronged me by taking my job." - It shows the heat of the anger the person was feeling.]]> 2018-01-17 14:53:16 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222083191 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222083363 "I didn’t even wait for the car to stop before I unbuckled my seatbelt and ran into the middle school. My heavy backpack slammed into my back as I sprinted down the hallway. Bam. Bam. Bam. I climbed the stairs two at a time, ignoring the glares and groans of other students as I cut them off on their way to their class"]]> 2018-01-17 14:53:38 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222083363 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222086850 2018-01-17 15:00:48 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222086850 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222086862 2018-01-17 15:00:50 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222086862 https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222087007 2018-01-17 15:01:05 UTC https://padlet.com/cblecher/1xg9xz5686g/wish/222087007