https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c Class Critique en-us 2017-11-15 12:53:45 UTC 2026-01-28 21:17:07 UTC hello@padlet.com https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182105 You should flesh out the trees more like make them darker.]]> 2017-11-15 13:55:15 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182105 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182192 I love the painting you could have just added some more trees and a sun but either than that it’s beautiful.]]> 2017-11-15 13:55:23 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182192 lli9 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182398 Maybe a little more tree and leaves]]> 2017-11-15 13:55:49 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182398 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182415 It looks good]]> 2017-11-15 13:55:51 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182415 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182530


It’s amazing ]]> 2017-11-15 13:56:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182530 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182561 Nothing because it is that good
Jaden ]]> 2017-11-15 13:56:08 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182561 ryu31 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182805 The trees or plant look so fake.]]> 2017-11-15 13:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182805 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182806 I like it, it's really good, but a little shade would've made it have more detail, and more texture.]]> 2017-11-15 13:56:37 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182806 lli9 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182904 The trees can be more realistic.]]> 2017-11-15 13:56:50 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182904 dpaquin https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182940 The lighting in the water can be better.]]> 2017-11-15 13:56:54 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182940 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182971 You  should make the ocean more longer to the sun 




]]> 2017-11-15 13:56:57 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182971 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182993 It’s nice I see nun wrong with it I think u bought it tho cuz it’s way to nice😭

]]> 2017-11-15 13:56:59 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207182993 lli9 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207183136 How about a sun on the back ground.]]> 2017-11-15 13:57:15 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207183136 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207183167 2017-11-15 13:57:17 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207183167 ryu31 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207183508 He can build.]]> 2017-11-15 13:57:58 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207183508 lli9 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207183970 There can be some dark reflections of the trees in the water.]]> 2017-11-15 13:58:55 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207183970 jchen65 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207184342 Should’ve move the tree on the left down alittle so the tree does not look like it’s 
On the water]]> 2017-11-15 13:59:37 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207184342 rrivera11 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207184445 I love the painting but I did it myself heheh]]> 2017-11-15 13:59:48 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207184445 lli9 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207184571 Clouds!]]> 2017-11-15 14:00:01 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207184571 rrivera11 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207185417 2017-11-15 14:01:27 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207185417 tfekadu https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223271 It’s cool]]> 2017-11-15 14:56:40 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223271 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223290 It looks good for an ELA teacher...

]]> 2017-11-15 14:56:42 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223290 yxiong3 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223490 Maybe you can earase the black line]]> 2017-11-15 14:57:01 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223490 eguevaraquija https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223760 I think you should have drawn the trees a little more lighter. Also you could have tried fading the water colors a little more. After all it looks good❤️.]]> 2017-11-15 14:57:25 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223760 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223782
I like it I think it’s super pretty  =^-^= 11/10  best art 2017 your super good at painting!

]]> 2017-11-15 14:57:26 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223782 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223950 It’s GOAT😂]]> 2017-11-15 14:57:39 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223950 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223989 2017-11-15 14:57:42 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223989 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223992 Ms Vasti I think you should if thought about the perspective  of the bridge.

For example if u made the end of the bridge when it’s facing the water should be more smaller and the one closer to you should be more bigger and that’s all that you should of fixed but the Rest is Amazing]]> 2017-11-15 14:57:42 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207223992 tfekadu https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224052 2017-11-15 14:57:48 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224052 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224057 I like it but can you make a reflection in the water or try to add more leafs ]]> 2017-11-15 14:57:48 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224057 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224074 I don’t think that there is nothing wrong with it but I could of used a boat👌👍👍👍]]> 2017-11-15 14:57:50 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224074 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224230 👍 💩 

]]> 2017-11-15 14:58:04 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224230 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224393 2017-11-15 14:58:18 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224393 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224530 I like it it looks good]]> 2017-11-15 14:58:29 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224530 epomales https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224531 It is good I will now give you Monopoly money🤑🤑🤑]]> 2017-11-15 14:58:29 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224531 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224533 2017-11-15 14:58:29 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224533 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224579 nice painting]]> 2017-11-15 14:58:33 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224579 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224899 Put in more work/effort

]]> 2017-11-15 14:59:00 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224899 tfekadu https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224972 Cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool but add a little light]]> 2017-11-15 14:59:06 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207224972 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225156 It’s good I don’t think there is nothing wrong with it but it could use a boat👍👍👌]]> 2017-11-15 14:59:22 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225156 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225166 2017-11-15 14:59:22 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225166 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225424 OVERWATCH GOD]]> 2017-11-15 14:59:43 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225424 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225519 DESTINY GOD

]]> 2017-11-15 14:59:50 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225519 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225719 I like it]]> 2017-11-15 15:00:08 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225719 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225765 COD WW2 BEAST]]> 2017-11-15 15:00:12 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225765 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225812 2017-11-15 15:00:17 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225812 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225818 Minecraft god]]> 2017-11-15 15:00:17 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225818 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225896 MINECRAFTTTTTTT IS COOL]]> 2017-11-15 15:00:23 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225896 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225956 2017-11-15 15:00:28 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225956 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225967 It's beautiful , the colors bring life and love into the environment ~ nya


]]> 2017-11-15 15:00:29 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207225967 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226001 MC FOR LIFE BOYS GANG GANG MC FOR LIFE😂]]> 2017-11-15 15:00:33 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226001 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226065 Butt]]> 2017-11-15 15:00:40 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226065 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226088 It's the best thing I'VE ever seen ]]> 2017-11-15 15:00:42 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226088 tfekadu https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226201 It’s cool

]]> 2017-11-15 15:00:55 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226201 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226338 2017-11-15 15:01:07 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226338 mali19 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226385 I love your painting maybe you can teach me 

]]> 2017-11-15 15:01:11 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226385 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226396 2017-11-15 15:01:13 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226396 tfekadu https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226852 It ok

]]> 2017-11-15 15:01:52 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207226852 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207227026 2017-11-15 15:02:07 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207227026 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207227091 2017-11-15 15:02:13 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207227091 mali19 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207227911 2017-11-15 15:03:32 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207227911 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207342668 miss you should make it clear if it’s sunrise or sundown and I love those beautiful trees]]> 2017-11-15 17:54:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207342668 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207342707 U should do shadows behind the trees or beside the bridge ]]> 2017-11-15 17:54:06 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207342707 yrivera26 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207342912 It has a lot of detail, and I like it a lot. Good job 😎👍. You can put some fish jumping from the ocean🐬.]]> 2017-11-15 17:54:30 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207342912 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207342992 Ms. Vasti, ur painting is great. Buttttt shall I suggest the colors go into each other. Like dark blue working up to very light blue, white and than a very light yellow and lastly a mix of orange and yellow.]]> 2017-11-15 17:54:39 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207342992 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343019 Jamal]]> 2017-11-15 17:54:41 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343019 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343134 2017-11-15 17:54:55 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343134 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343147 A sun maybe and more color on rocks]]> 2017-11-15 17:54:57 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343147 driley91 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343237 It's good at least you tried ya best]]> 2017-11-15 17:55:07 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343237 myanes https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343303 You draw very very nice and it has good colors and it beautiful and the colors make it glow and cool and I love the leaves and it make it look like fall and she did good work]]> 2017-11-15 17:55:13 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343303 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343367 It’s good⭐️

]]> 2017-11-15 17:55:21 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343367 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343398 Looks nice dude]]> 2017-11-15 17:55:24 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343398 jsierrapena https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343507 I like how the bridge looks 3-d]]> 2017-11-15 17:55:36 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343507 lgonzalez50 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343573 Ms.Vasti you should fill in the white spots with more sky or land 

]]> 2017-11-15 17:55:45 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343573 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343673 add more ocean it would look a bit better]]> 2017-11-15 17:55:55 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207343673 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207344029 i think you should add more detail such as leaves and to be honest i’m not really sure if it’s a sunset or sun rise so you should add a little more color to it but overall it looks really good !!❤️‼️

]]> 2017-11-15 17:56:34 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207344029 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207344246 Add the sun to make it more dramatic ]]> 2017-11-15 17:56:58 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207344246 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207344551 You should make the branches longer and make the ocean more blue at least lighter blue ]]> 2017-11-15 17:57:29 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207344551 jsierrapena https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207344613 2017-11-15 17:57:35 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207344613 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207344935 I think you should add more land]]> 2017-11-15 17:58:10 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207344935 driley91 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207345048 It's garbage dud]]> 2017-11-15 17:58:24 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207345048 jsierrapena https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207345456 2017-11-15 17:59:03 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207345456 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207380810 The co]]> 2017-11-15 18:55:35 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207380810 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207380908 The colors your chose was nice you try your best ]]> 2017-11-15 18:55:44 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207380908 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207381094 The colors your ]]> 2017-11-15 18:56:06 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207381094 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207381167 I want to because I saw the sunset and it looks like you ever make watching the sunset]]> 2017-11-15 18:56:16 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207381167 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207381266 The colors your chose was nic]]> 2017-11-15 18:56:26 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207381266 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207381759 2017-11-15 18:57:09 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207381759 asorto6 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382148 The plating is nice but you c]]> 2017-11-15 18:57:48 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382148 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382414 Wow it’s look rea]]> 2017-11-15 18:58:14 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382414 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382515 Hey😂]]> 2017-11-15 18:58:22 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382515 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382611 What I liked about ur painting is the back round because it looked like the sun was going ]]> 2017-11-15 18:58:28 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382611 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382660 I]]> 2017-11-15 18:58:32 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382660 lsolomon4 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382678 It` great]]> 2017-11-15 18:58:34 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382678 lsolomon4 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382778 Good job]]> 2017-11-15 18:58:44 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382778 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382902 2017-11-15 18:58:52 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207382902 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207383401 2017-11-15 18:59:34 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207383401 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207384193 2017-11-15 19:00:35 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/207384193 asorto6 https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/232328190 VnbhtynnnbhhnbtgngnrvnrvrghvngvnhgrvnvnfghvnfghvngbngGrandma bhbnbhng hnhvghnghvgnbhgbnhgfn fg]]> 2018-02-16 14:10:51 UTC https://padlet.com/vvasti/1xb8k78fq48c/wish/232328190