Rewritten sentences by Jonathan Mann https://padlet.com/j_mann/rewrites Your corrections to the sentences. en-us 2017-02-06 16:48:22 UTC 2017-11-23 09:13:46 UTC hello@padlet.com Comparing livestock species taken from a range of sources, it was found that sheep are highly susceptible to lots of copper (Berg, et al., 2011). https://padlet.com/j_mann/rewrites/wish/152082972 2017-02-07 10:40:10 UTC https://padlet.com/j_mann/rewrites/wish/152082972 https://padlet.com/j_mann/rewrites/wish/152094776 2017-02-07 11:41:02 UTC https://padlet.com/j_mann/rewrites/wish/152094776 1 https://padlet.com/j_mann/rewrites/wish/153673922 After comparing various sources (Berg, et al., 2011) regarding copper levels and their effect on sheep, there is a strong correlation between high levels of copper in the sheep's diet and the fatality of livestock.]]> 2017-02-14 11:40:07 UTC https://padlet.com/j_mann/rewrites/wish/153673922 1 https://padlet.com/j_mann/rewrites/wish/153674867 Based on data which was extracted from a range of sources (Berg, et al., 2011), it can be concluded that sheep are particularly susceptible to poisoning as a result of exposure to copper. This can result in acute kidney failure as well as other pathologies. ]]> 2017-02-14 11:46:10 UTC https://padlet.com/j_mann/rewrites/wish/153674867