Thesis Statement Critiquing Task: 9-Lichauco by Mr. Nolasco

Thesis Statement Critiquing Task: 9-Lichauco by Mr. Nolasco https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v Write the given details. en-us 2018-02-19 14:11:34 UTC 2018-02-21 02:19:14 UTC hello@padlet.com Jane Song, Maxine Banare, Jodi Alano, Princess Carpio, Sofia Salvador sofiaysabelsalvador https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233203529 1.It is not sustainable
2. Producing paper bags needs expensive raw materials
3. It is not environment-friendly
Using paper bags is not a good alternative to plastic bags, because it is unstable, inefficient and harmful to the environment]]> 2018-02-20 11:16:12 UTC https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233203529 Sophia Manuel, Eishi Kodaira, Raiana Aquino, Sary España https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233217949 Main points:

1. It is not sustainable.

2. It is harmful to the environment.( edited)

3. It is not recyclable. (added)

Using paper bags is not a good alternative to plastic bags because it is unsustainable, unrecyclable, and is harmful to the environment.

]]> 2018-02-20 12:17:18 UTC https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233217949 Milan Omengan, Ernika Landig, Franky Mendoza, Coleen Morales, Hiraya Buan https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233267398 Main Points:
1) Prevents health related problems
2) Decreases water system contamination
3) Reduces accumulation of garbage (added)

Dumpsites should be closed to prevent health related problems, decrease water system contamination, and reduce accumulation of garbage.]]> 2018-02-20 14:15:22 UTC https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233267398 Mikee Flores, Phylicia Abary, Chloe Santos, Sydney Tongson, Alex Rosario phyliciabary03 https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233544804 Main points:
1. Closing dumpsites prevents health related problems.
2. Dumpsites expose water systems to contamination.
3. Upgrades the waste management system.

Dumpsites should be closed to prevent health related problems, lessen the contamination of water systems, and upgrade the waste management system. ]]> 2018-02-20 22:38:58 UTC https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233544804 Sophia Ang, Andrea Cruz, Ryochi Estanislao, Czarmaine Palanca, storm Tindugan https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233552829 Main points:

- It is not sustainable
- It uses expensive raw materials.
- Paper bags are causes of pollution

Using paper bags is not a good alternative to plastic bags because they are not sustainable, their raw materials are expensive, and are a cause of air pollution.]]> 2018-02-20 23:27:28 UTC https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233552829 Capistrano, Kintanar, Maglonzo, Palad, Remorca https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233552882 Claim:
Using paper bags is not a good alternative to plastic bags

Main Points:
1) It is not sustainable
2) Producing paper bags needs expensive raw materials
3) It increases the cutting down of trees

Thesis Statement:
Using paper bags is not a good alternative to plastic bags because it is not sustainable, it is not cost-effective, and it is not eco-friendly.]]> 2018-02-20 23:27:50 UTC https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233552882 Dupaya,Galvez,Reyes,Rodil,Tongco https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233574045 Main points

1. Closing dumpsites prevents health related problems
2. Dumpsites expose water system to contamination
3. Dumpsites are the reason of trash compilation

Dumpsites should be closed because this would prevent health problems,water contamination, and trash compilation.

]]> 2018-02-21 01:39:40 UTC https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233574045 Calpatura, Natividad, Go, Pelipel, Rafael https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233576481 Main points:
-Closing dumpsites prevent health related problems
-Dumpsites expose water system to contamination
-Dumpsites increase pests around the areas they are located in

Thesis statement: Dumpsites must be closed because it prevents health related problems, reduces the exposure of water to contamination and decreases pests around those areas.]]> 2018-02-21 01:53:30 UTC https://padlet.com/nbenito29/1w1yma4j377v/wish/233576481