Northwest Straits Initiative Elevator Pitch Feedback by Kate Elliott https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu Share your thoughts and comments on the draft elevator pitch options! en-us 2020-07-24 23:29:48 UTC 2020-07-31 17:58:58 UTC hello@padlet.com edit https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666735335 I would take "working" out of this one

]]> 2020-07-31 17:24:23 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666735335 single entity? https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666735711 Organization makes it sound like a single entity, and does not capture the many groups working together.]]> 2020-07-31 17:25:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666735711 too stuff https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666736010 organization is not exciting - too stuffy

]]> 2020-07-31 17:25:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666736010 Too limited https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666736012 It is more than one organization

]]> 2020-07-31 17:25:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666736012 too abstract https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666736444 2020-07-31 17:26:15 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666736444 more than an idea https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666736657 vision does not seem to capture the rich history and work of the group. It sounds like an early stage idea]]> 2020-07-31 17:26:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666736657 sounds business-y kelliott74 https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666736764 Doesn't reflect what I think the MRCs represent.]]> 2020-07-31 17:26:54 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666736764 What about...NWSI is a community-led alliance collaborating to protect and restore the marine environment of Puget Sound. https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666737128 2020-07-31 17:27:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666737128 take out working https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666737389 change the order to "NWSI is a community-led alliance collaborating to protect...."]]> 2020-07-31 17:27:47 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666737389 This sounds right kelliott74 https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666737457 I think collaborative represents what we do and are.]]> 2020-07-31 17:27:55 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666737457 https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666737470 sounds most like what we are  -
 positive, action oriented 

]]> 2020-07-31 17:27:57 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666737470 Marine Environment https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666737648 "The NW Straits region of the Salish Sea," or something similar, might be more applicable]]> 2020-07-31 17:28:16 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666737648 Collaborative is technically an adjective not a noun..although it is commonly miss-used this way https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666737792 2020-07-31 17:28:33 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666737792 We're more than a vision! https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666738083 Vision = idea. But we've taken the idea and done something about it! That's really important. Vision makes it seem like it's still an idea with no action or results.]]> 2020-07-31 17:29:03 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666738083 Can't lead a vision. https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666738184 2020-07-31 17:29:11 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666738184 https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666738337 I like this one best - seems to be best fit]]> 2020-07-31 17:29:31 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666738337 This communications plan should be upbeat and refreshing kelliott74 https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666738507 There's a lot of difficult stuff going on now, we want NWSI to be positive and upbeat in all of our comms.]]> 2020-07-31 17:29:50 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666738507 Collaborative doesn't quite make sense in this context. https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666739883 2020-07-31 17:32:17 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666739883 We have support for this with some wording changes. https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666739892 2020-07-31 17:32:18 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666739892 Good! https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666739895 It's succinct, and probably appeals to the widest audience.]]> 2020-07-31 17:32:19 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666739895 Vision happened a long time ago https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666740597 2020-07-31 17:33:36 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666740597 Easiest to remember, rolls of the tongue https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666740718 Elevator pitch has to be easy for everyone to remember! ]]> 2020-07-31 17:33:51 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666740718 Vision is in the https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666740794 2020-07-31 17:34:00 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666740794 collaborating volunteers or collaborating organization https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666743846 2020-07-31 17:38:55 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666743846 https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666752319 I think we should use the term that most of the public is familiar with, which think is Puget sound.  Changing to Salish sea would be like changing from global warming to climate change.  Public didn't follow very well.

]]> 2020-07-31 17:53:55 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666752319 https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666752591 First and foremost this is for commission and mrc members to better understand us and so it should conyain what we need to know.  As am MRC member I am working for the Northwest Straits area of the Salish Sea, and not all of Puget Sound

]]> 2020-07-31 17:54:24 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666752591 https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666752765 With my students, I've found that the shorter and easier the message, the more it sticks.  Starting with an elementary elevator message can be built upon with any follow up questions.

]]> 2020-07-31 17:54:40 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666752765 https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666752908 This statement is something many of us have been wanting for some time .. short, consistent, can remember, and gets the essence across .. appreciate the efforts of all to get it right. I support not using Puget Sound .. maybe salish sea ..

]]> 2020-07-31 17:54:56 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666752908 https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666753648 Using the term “volunteer” Organization does also resonate well with people.

]]> 2020-07-31 17:55:56 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666753648 https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666754247 What about northern Puget Sound and the Strait?

]]> 2020-07-31 17:57:02 UTC https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666754247 https://padlet.com/kelliott74/1vyd3nx38xxhashu/wish/666755154 remove puget sound and end with marine environment

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