https://padlet.com/15lconnolly/LillyWall Made with a dash of wit en-us 2017-10-16 08:17:20 UTC 2017-10-16 09:06:22 UTC hello@padlet.com 15lconnolly https://padlet.com/15lconnolly/LillyWall/wish/197250706 The writer builds tension in the story by using adjectives such as steely and this means he’s cold and strong.(leah)]]> 2017-10-16 08:45:07 UTC https://padlet.com/15lconnolly/LillyWall/wish/197250706 15lconnolly https://padlet.com/15lconnolly/LillyWall/wish/197253014 The writer builds tension in the story by using powerful verbs such as heaved, swung and crack. This means that there is a lot of movement.(lilly)]]> 2017-10-16 08:53:46 UTC https://padlet.com/15lconnolly/LillyWall/wish/197253014 15lconnolly https://padlet.com/15lconnolly/LillyWall/wish/197253775 The writer uses this quote “ it was brushed aside as Easily as a child discards a toy”  this simile builds tension in this text because it shows how tough he is. (Leah)]]> 2017-10-16 08:56:55 UTC https://padlet.com/15lconnolly/LillyWall/wish/197253775